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Amarillo's Pirate Adventure (One Piece SI)
3.94 (25 số lượng người đọc)
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[You Have Died. Pick Up To Five Traits For Your New Life.]
A man dies and gets to choose the traits he will receive in his next life, but he doesn't know where he will go. After choosing his traits he receives some unpleasant news, His new life will come with some conditions.
Follow Amarillo Detoro as he journeys through the world of One Piece, getting stronger and discovering more each and every day.
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You know how I felt when reading chapter 1, at first MC give him a good perks then he make MC useless. You author sure good in making readers lost the desire to ready your ff.
I don't get the point of starting at level 0 getting +10 then -20 just start him in the world with no cheats. Plus, the traits he picks are all so the author has an excuse for plot later on. overall I don't see the point of this fanfic
The story was okintil the Fishman ark. Garp drilled into him not to give up without trying and he swore to it. But the second he heard about the Fishman he through fighting out the window. Plus he like the ultimate slave, unable to resist or fight back from the simplest orders and that's the deal breaker for me so I dropped.
It could of been worse but still bad choice of traits, an then theirs the negative traits MC has to pick. Basically nerfing the already bad traits MC choose. I can already tell I won't like this novel from chapter 1.
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I still don't like that Detoro can't resist Nami's orders. I don't understand why he behaves like a coward with the "bravery" trait. Where did his luck go when Nezumi entered the orphanage, and not only then? There are still a lot of questions, but in general this fanfic is better than many others. I hope for a continuation.
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Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Great start, but unneeded characther nerfing and constant switching of the Mc's personlaity and goals, make what would be an interesting story overall a major dissaponotment. 10/10 would not recommend
honestly i was pumped when i realised there are 2 more novels from the author of will of gil and was planning to support your patreon to read more content but now i kinda gave up. the disappointment was immeasurable when i read the first chapter of this novel.
everything was great till you nerfed your mc for the sake of plot, I like your other stories(will of gill). people dropped boruto as they nerfed naruto even tho they had a huge fan following, so I don't people are fan of nerfed mc...but hey maybe he will get stronger in the future(I knw) but still I couldn't bring myself to read after chapter 36 or 37.
I am tired and can't properly write a review and is just writing this to full in the words. I'm about to sleep so goodnyt ya'll. Just saying that this book is great and you should totally give it a read. The flow of the story is great, it doesn't feel robotic. Nyt nyt bye bye byers
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Good start hope you don't drop anytime soon. .........................................................................................................................................................................
maravilloso, opinamos que esto es un diez more more more more more more more more more more more more more por favooooor dame mas capitulos
I think this is one one piece fanfiction I have been looking for since God knows when,just this story doesn't have enough chapter for people to see it's true worth.
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A simple but great story with a lot of potential!!!!! For now the protagonist has not fully demonstrated his characteristics and shortcomings, I look forward to the future 🗿
It's quite good One Piece fanfiction!! 👍👍 I don't mind that MC not know about One Piece.. It just make the story more interesting.. I like the traits MC/Detoro choose (but I'll choose few different traits).. I understand brave, fast healing, fast learning, and lucky, but what good is adrenaline junkie?? There's many more useful traits for me... I like how you build your story.. How he do a hard training with Garp to be strong (not OP from start).. And how George death will be the trigger for his haoshoku awakening... I have feeling from the start when he says that he live in Conomi Islands that his imprint will be Nami.. But whyy must her.. She's important member for SHP (from the title, I think he will make his own pirate crew, and Nami will be one of them).. Hope you have think about it 😁😁🤔🤔🤔 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author san 😁😁😁👍👍👍
it could have been good but the 1st chapter alone has more run on sentences then ive ever read in my life. the the author has to go and make the mc 100% handicapped in his next life. so all together i dont recommend unless you want a badly written ff