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pafro
pafro
2 years ago
Posted

I don't get the point of starting at level 0 getting +10 then -20 just start him in the world with no cheats. Plus, the traits he picks are all so the author has an excuse for plot later on. overall I don't see the point of this fanfic

pafro
pafro
2 years ago
Posted

I'm at chapter 61, story was good MC joined strawhats for a good reason but the mc quickly becomes stale and lacks personality. additionally, MC gets a horrible devil fruit that is based on luck from the author and it doesn't feel like a one piece power more like nen. so I lost interest and stopped reading it 3/5 not horrid just disappointing

pafro
pafro
pafro
2 years ago
Commented

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pafro
pafro
2 years ago
Replied to Allude

she was

Kuina, the descendant of the God of Swords, her swordsmanship talent is no less than Gion, who is the Vice-Admiral of the Navy.

Strongest Swordsman In One Piece

Strongest Swordsman In One Piece

Anime & Comics · DreamStolen

pafro
pafro
2 years ago
Commented

+ 1

C. A rewritten and improved version of the original (Chapters up to 2nd year of Middle School are done.)

The Crowned King of KnB

The Crowned King of KnB

Anime & Comics · FrenchViking

pafro
pafro
2 years ago
Commented

isn't the mc stronger than Neij at this point

In the original timeline, Something must have happened to the Original Rai, or in retrospect, me, and if I died, that means team two was disbanded and seeing that Omoi and Karui had talent in Kenjutsu, Killer Bee took the two in and started teaching them... just hope that I won't have to face Gaara or Neji, I don't have the "Talk no jutsu" yet.

Naruto: I'm In Kumo (Up for adoption)

Naruto: I'm In Kumo (Up for adoption)

Anime & Comics · Idk_wqe2

pafro
pafro
2 years ago
Replied to Reaper2504

blocks

pafro
pafro
2 years ago
Commented

God King

pafro
pafro
2 years ago
Posted

Wow I just read 16 chapters straight and this is garbage the MC is reincarnated first born son with wishes and lets his family walk all over him. The story forces itself to stick to cannon even with a hilariously overpowered MC who is to much of a cuck to change any thing. Believe the other reviews, I did not, this is trash.