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Hey I am, well I was a 24 year old Man named Alexander Miles an aspiring musician and I woke up in a 17 year olds body in the hospital.
I remember everything from the life I lived before or is it after ? Later ? Future? But I also have the memories of this current body Alexander Rose it’s like both their souls merged into one.
Of course this only happened because he/I got hit by a truck saving a little girl 2 years prior at least that’s The last I can recall from his...my Memories.
So my theory is his soul needed to merge with another to survive, because I remember dying then darkness, then there was a voice calling for someone to help them and then I wake up in a hospital in the past oh and somehow I have a system!-
[Well This will be my first original (released) story I’ve had other ideas that I write but not sure if people would like them.
Well anyway thank you if you’re reading this story and if you don’t continue thank you for reading anyway. Also those of you that want to know when I’ll release chapters right now I’ll update when I can]-
(The cover picture isn’t mine but I really liked it but if the one who created it doesn’t want me to use it just tell me and I’ll remove it and try to find an actual cover)
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Viết đánh giáHey everyone Author here to say thanks for reading and Also I hope that you enjoy reading my story. I really enjoy these types of stories so I decided to write my own it’s also my first time doing this so just a warning. And to those who write a review thank you that you would take the time to write one means a lot. -ACv1
I just really, really, really like this story. It's wholesome, kinda epic, has Slice of life, Sports, Music, Romance and everything I love to see. Besides, Birdie is best girl ever.
I like how the novel is going so far. There’s not a lot of novels like this , all the other ones are dropped and never finished so I hope you continue updating . I usually like harem but this is a case where I don’t mind at all that it’s a single pairing , and with his childhood friend. I just hope there’s no cheating and heartbreak later down the line...
The novel is basically a direct copy of Jay Aslan: Journey to the Top. The setting and plot was copied, commiting copyright infringement. It is a lower quality version of it too. Chapters (at least time of reading) were not edited that great (baddish grammar). With chapters being pretty short too, and so far it is just (essentially sameish) developmemt skipping the details in the original, I gave up on continuing reading. I like that some1 is contuing the saga os Elawn, but u need to at least make it fan fic or change a lotbof stuff, case u r stealing property and can get in a lot of trouble. Don't sign a contract either if stuff isnt changed, since I wouldnt be surprised if they take huge advantage down the road like debt+fines, at least credit the novel btw..
It reminds me of a certain novel that reached the top of webnovel and that excites me, I hope I don't let it fall. If I can make a request please that the mc adopted the style of the mc of that novel.( I know you know what it is).🤔
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I really enjoyed the story, but the story development ist too fast for me . And sometimes I think the Mc get's thinks to easily. But I like that the system doesn't dominate the Story , it's something different from other ''System'' like Story's .
it's a rip off of jay arslan but not as good, it's still a pretty good read. I just hope it won't be dropped. .
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This book is doing rAther well and i am totally loOking forward to more. character development is in its way along With some romance and the begining of The MCs career. i like how hes not entirely reliebt on his system but wOuld enjoy seeing more development with that too. yay and best wishes! ♥️♥️♥️♥️
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Eu gosto de como o romance está indo tão longe. Não há muitos romances como esse, todos os outros são descartados e nunca terminados, então espero que você continue atualizando. Eu geralmente gosto de harém, mas este é um caso em que não me importo que seja um único par e com o amigo de infância dele. Eu só espero que não haja trapaça e desgosto mais tarde na linha
Please more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Cant wait to read more. Please more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Cant wait to read more.
I love this story dear! And I also love this genre alot!! It's slow paced and interesting. But please use punctuation marks . It's very hard to understand the paragraphs. Thanks alot for the story.❤️☺️☺️☺️
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I must say that this is one of my fav genre; Transmigration, modern (earth civilization), snowbiz (not yet shown, but I hope so). So yeah, it's sad when seeing this review section because just 1 guy reviewed it before I do. Maybe a little bias because it is literally just expressing my liking to the genre, but who cares. Anyway it's still early to tell the tales, so I can't say much of it.