A True Beginning

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StarWriting

Wow 45 chapters at once for a release. That’s really impressive. You might want to mention that it’s a twilight story in the description though since it’s not like the title gives it away.

LV 2

_Medeiros

I just don't understand why the MC chooses to become a werewolf. I always found the werewolves weak sincerely, they just turn into a full moon and even then they lose control and came uncontrollable animals even if the mc learns to control himself he will still depend on the moon if you stop to think the MC didn’t do anything right first he kills his entire village and then is captured simply because of the donkey and seriously that even though he knew the future he thought they were going to let him go ok it was said that Mc lost some of his memories but even so he is dumb Enough to say I am stronger than you are for two vampires he doesn't even know and then he thinks he won't be chased or capitulated and just plain stupid the MC of this story and probably one of the dumbest people I’ve ever seen I would have given a lesser note to this story but I find the idea interesting I just don’t like the MC and his decisions

the story is good I just don't like the MC and his decisions but that and only my opinion I was really surprised that you have posted so many chapters and a pity that I have no interest to read this story without wanting to offend the MC and very stupid but it’s not what makes me want to read just not my type of story

LV 5

Funky_fat_monk

MC spoke like ,he is some kind of hot ****. He even asked the place to be born to be survival of fittest. And he is practically behaves like weak ass escapist. He didn't even try to take revenge against people that tortured him for years. This made a trauma in him,that leads him to runaway with fear for his life. He has weak mentality,escapes from any aggression. waste of wish to be werewolf. he keeps Wolf aside without any aggression. I think Lucifer is right to torture this masochist of MC . I don't even know why wrote this kind of escapist MC. Whatever it's just a waste of time.

LV 13

littlefrench

So I’m giving a harsh review here and maybe the story deserves three and 1/2 stars, but that’s not the point. First the series is a crossover, it starts by twilight then goes to **** wolf then Buffy, and I stopped reading at that point, because it doesn’t interest me anymore, the MC is utterly passive after the twilight arc (I stopped reading at the start of the Buffy one) he just lets events go on by themselves to « help the main characters grow » seriously what’s the point then... that’s not an original story, just a recap of the different series from a new point of view and although the Twilight part is well written and integrated I can’t say as much about the Teen Wolf one. Overall, this fan fic just adds a strong and rich side character to the original stories and this is not what I’m interested in reading There is no blend in the different stories at all it is one story and then the other the Cullen are barelly mentioned at all in the TW arc and he actually crosses into another world for the Buffy arc, leaving aside any possibility of us seeing the characters we started reading the story for. I know for certain some will like this story, it has extreme,y long chapter and the grammar is great, but that’s pretty much it, just read/watch the original story and you’ll have gone through the exact same story told by this fan fic

LV 13

FatAlmighty

I thought that the fanfic will be good or at least average because of the no.of chapters,turns out that it is dog shit.the MC is stupid and his wishes were trash,weakass cowardly MC who acts like he is actually worth something,it's just a dog shit fanfic overall.

LV 4

blue_sage

the ppl who left negative reviews are f*cking retards .did you even read to ch 5 talking about how the mc is a weak or something well f*ck you .you little piece of sh*t bc of you i didn't want to read the story.i'm now at ch 6 and i can tell you it's not a waste of time to read this book.ok a recap of what i read.~the mc is reincarnated (twilight)he is born before vampire even existed yeah so before canon he went thru some rough times like being tortured for a millenium by vampire (one before the "volturi") .yeah a long ass time .he let his WOLF FORM take all the torture all that time when he got ran away he went to suclusion to control his emotion because the wolf in him had made his own thoughts(like having split personality but the wolf is more agresieve)then he meets alice gets married to her and CANON from starts at CH 4 or 5 he accepted his wolf form to become 1 person now if you exuse me i'm gonna go read the rest of the chapter and again f*ck you negative commenters b*tches' 🖕

LV 4

oceansage

Now I understand why its low rated novel. MC unknowingly massacre his village due to his stupid wishes. I just can't bring myself to read more. All my 3 stars are due to auther attempt and no. Of chapters /////////////////////))))////////////////// /////////////////////////////))))))///////

LV 4

Dan_Stone

when will new chapters be released I really want to read what will happen next I am rereading it again I hope you release new chapters soon

LV 4

Arron_Smith

Hi Dude Love the story when will we see Jake Kent Go back to the Arrow and will we see him going to the Gotham (TV show) and will Jake get with Thea Queen and will we see the next chapters of the story hope to hear or see a reply and hope you are doing well. All the best.

LV 1

Logan179

the story in my opinion seems boring and boring the MC i really don't like it all this makes me not want to but read this story every time i finish a chapter i don't feel like reading the next one I only read 12 chapters to give the story a chance

LV 4

Because_Fanfic

When will the new chapters be released ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

LV 5

Ballad

Final Review it's a really fun read don't let the start fool you thinking mc is weak-minded it fooled me but I kept going Mc slowly goes from Weak-minded to Imma eat you style anyways the story is a good fun read the mc is nerfed sometimes but not in annoying way he's still strong just not GodMode strong in the end I recommended this for people who enjoy Reincarnation in Movies Tvshows and Comics

LV 10

INDOMITABLE

This is trash. It is sooooo rushed and has no plot. The author makes minimal effort to add new elements to the twilight saga. It had so much potential but was also instantly ruined from the first chapter as the mc doesn’t get what he asked for and there’s a twist to his wish. His weak and the story has no plot. It’s a slice of life. How Tf do u make twilight a slice of life. Even with his granted wish he is weak which is just stupid. Morale of the story don’t read this trash.

LV 2

Geleia21

I can't stop thinking about him going to "Supergirl" with the flash and being with Kara and Lena or Alex and Maggie (I am completely divided🤔)...oh just have an answer, stay with all🤤... OBS:I know they are sisters but a dream is a dream, and yes I know that Alex is gay, but fuck it, it’s not like his wives are not, and technically they are not blood related.

LV 4

Because_Fanfic

Have you dropped this ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

LV 4

Nathan_Hankinson

Please update need more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 4

Nathan_Hankinson

Finally new chapters 🥳🤩!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LV 4

201289201289

It's a shame that such a bad story has so many bad chapters, the truth is I don't know what **** of wishes he asked for, nothing makes sense