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Warning :
- This is my first ever fanfic, Good or not, I am going to try to at least finish this.
- English is not my native language
- I don't own anything except the MC
- Don't expect a very good plot or character manifestation. This is the first time I ever write something like this.
- The earliest chapter were very degenerates. If you wondering if it changed or not, ask those who still read until the newest chapter. (This is important and I won't change it)
- Don't forget this is an AU so anything can happen.
-This is a wish-fulfillment story and degenerates as well.
A lucky dude reincarnated in AU animeverse with a weird gacha system.
Current crossover :
- Grand Blue
- Your lie in April
- Kaguya sama : Love is war
- Campione!
- a bit of strike the blood
- a bit of FGO
- Haganai
- a bit of oregairu
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Other than that, if you like this story (who am I kidding) consider buying me a cup of coffee to accompany me in writing. (No, no benefit at all since this story isn't worth to sell, just a pure donation link)
Ko-fi. com/kimyurin
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Viết đánh giáLook man, im really trying to not be rude but its hard, so i'll just say it as is......the story just became more degenerate as we came from chapter 1 till 6? Im still staying cause im hoping to actually see anything unique.....despite already knowing that this will probably dissapoint...by that i mean....the relationships are dissapointing, all character development was guttered the moment author decided to make the mc manipulate kids to become cumdumpsters(no thats not wrong, its the correct term. Dont call it love when you manipulate them from young). I can pretty much 'stereotype" what will happen from then onward, a big time skip, he's OP. He'll show his inexperience in a fight even if he could just beat the living sh*t out of the enemy. Have lots of R-18. no character development. He'll still act stupid as he grows.......It's.....almost too bland... im staying because i really hope im wrong...................also because im running out of sh*t to read.
The novel is so bad. I mean Literally So Fuck**g Bad It Just Had So Much Potential, But Author Just Screwed Things up With Slice-of-Life. There is Absolutely Nothing to Read Here No Thrill No Excitement No Action No Growth or Development No Progress in Any Kind of Category - Wasting Time of Practice With a Master. Who is 1000000 Weaker than him - The Worst Kind Slice-Of-Life. You Can Find Here, Chapters 1 and 2 are Clickbait. Whatever Cheat he gets Is Unusable in the Future. - He is Your Average Beta MC
An entertaining read that's for sure. There are only few slice of life anime multicross fanfics these days. The lack of action is a refreshing change, tho I fear that the supernatural plot will appear soon. Welp, it's still a fun read tho.
The Main Character is a reincarnated person right? So why the heck is he like a child? I know that he is in the body of the child right now but why is he acting like one?
This is simply sublime Few authors are encouraged to write history as you are And those who do not succeed at this level 10/10 (Please Tsubaki in the harem) (kosei never love her)
its great to be honest, i've been looking for some grand blue fanfics and this was the first one i really liked, i just found this 4 days ago and i say i'm very intrigued, but please just update more, i know i'm very late but i do wanna know how this story ends, and also add more screen time to different characters, especially nanaka or chisa's POV
Good GoodGood😭👍👍👍👍🏿👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏿👍🏻👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏿👍🏿👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Hope you not drop novel to the end🥰 keep fighting, i always supporting you😚😚 Gangabatteee!!!!! ..................................................................................................................................
It's been a year since i've last left a review, i still keep coming back to this fic every month, when i'm bored i reread this fic, and that's where i realized the flaw of this story. It's very slow its almost 150 chapters but the canon of grand blue still hasn't started, i know tgat you stopped updating and your last activity was commenting on your own chapter, but please comeback and make a new chapter, this is the only grand blue chapter i've really really like and still keep coming back to this day
Good job 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story is entertaing so far. The interactions between the characters seemed a bit strained in the beginning but now it's starting to getting better.(according to me) But overall a good slice of life fanfic indeed. I recommend all to try this fanfic atleast once. It's a good read from the others. Thank you 🤗🤗🤗
author-san please continue like this i really like your fanfic. please do not abandon this masterpiece, and again do not abandon it. (- '=' -)
The first time I read this I'm not reading any comments and totally I enjoy this book but the time I re read this I read comments and made me sad since almost but not all that comment is toxic. The Author is trying his best to write his book if you don't want this then drop simple. I advise you to read any novel/fanfic without reading any comments then you know what I'm trying to say.
Tác giả KimYurin
A good story indeed, my first impression was not the best, when I saw the paragraph beginning with a lowercase letter (I am boring, yes) it already took my impression down there, and when I saw that it had a system with proper awareness I already thought in the system slave cliche, but no, the grammar is incredibly good and easy to read, with some mistakes here and there but tiny, it does not hinder your reading, and the punishments of system quests are incredibly stupid, such as "being allergic to carrot "and etc., not exaggerated like the systems I'm used to reading, so far a good story, I will follow this story, so let's see where it goes XD