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I liked the first 60-70 chapters or so but after that it just got too boring. Although I didn’t like how the mc kept getting nerfed after the campions appeared.
It's been a year since i've last left a review, i still keep coming back to this fic every month, when i'm bored i reread this fic, and that's where i realized the flaw of this story. It's very slow its almost 150 chapters but the canon of grand blue still hasn't started, i know tgat you stopped updating and your last activity was commenting on your own chapter, but please comeback and make a new chapter, this is the only grand blue chapter i've really really like and still keep coming back to this day
its great to be honest, i've been looking for some grand blue fanfics and this was the first one i really liked, i just found this 4 days ago and i say i'm very intrigued, but please just update more, i know i'm very late but i do wanna know how this story ends, and also add more screen time to different characters, especially nanaka or chisa's POV
I- I am immensely disappointed and my day is ruined. This is the first time that I would write a negative review. I can't go past chapter 3, and I am not quite fond of the MC's personality. The grammar is just slightly below average just like mine, though I wouldn't dare say that my book is better than yours since mine is trash. I can't really say that much since I haven't even reached 5% of the story. Though, I might rethink and come back here again in the future. And you hyped me up so much only for my hopes to be crushed man... I rarely see any Grand Blue fanfiction out there. Heck, I can count them with one hand because there are literally very few of them.
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The first time I read this I'm not reading any comments and totally I enjoy this book but the time I re read this I read comments and made me sad since almost but not all that comment is toxic. The Author is trying his best to write his book if you don't want this then drop simple. I advise you to read any novel/fanfic without reading any comments then you know what I'm trying to say.
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A good story indeed, my first impression was not the best, when I saw the paragraph beginning with a lowercase letter (I am boring, yes) it already took my impression down there, and when I saw that it had a system with proper awareness I already thought in the system slave cliche, but no, the grammar is incredibly good and easy to read, with some mistakes here and there but tiny, it does not hinder your reading, and the punishments of system quests are incredibly stupid, such as "being allergic to carrot "and etc., not exaggerated like the systems I'm used to reading, so far a good story, I will follow this story, so let's see where it goes XD
I liked the first 60-70 chapters or so but after that it just got too boring. Although I didn’t like how the mc kept getting nerfed after the campions appeared.
It's been a year since i've last left a review, i still keep coming back to this fic every month, when i'm bored i reread this fic, and that's where i realized the flaw of this story. It's very slow its almost 150 chapters but the canon of grand blue still hasn't started, i know tgat you stopped updating and your last activity was commenting on your own chapter, but please comeback and make a new chapter, this is the only grand blue chapter i've really really like and still keep coming back to this day
its great to be honest, i've been looking for some grand blue fanfics and this was the first one i really liked, i just found this 4 days ago and i say i'm very intrigued, but please just update more, i know i'm very late but i do wanna know how this story ends, and also add more screen time to different characters, especially nanaka or chisa's POV
I- I am immensely disappointed and my day is ruined. This is the first time that I would write a negative review. I can't go past chapter 3, and I am not quite fond of the MC's personality. The grammar is just slightly below average just like mine, though I wouldn't dare say that my book is better than yours since mine is trash. I can't really say that much since I haven't even reached 5% of the story. Though, I might rethink and come back here again in the future. And you hyped me up so much only for my hopes to be crushed man... I rarely see any Grand Blue fanfiction out there. Heck, I can count them with one hand because there are literally very few of them.
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The first time I read this I'm not reading any comments and totally I enjoy this book but the time I re read this I read comments and made me sad since almost but not all that comment is toxic. The Author is trying his best to write his book if you don't want this then drop simple. I advise you to read any novel/fanfic without reading any comments then you know what I'm trying to say.
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Es muy buena la recomiendo pero por que no an actualizado......... ... . ...por favor actualizen mas capitulo😭😭😭😭😭..................... Actualizen😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
A good story indeed, my first impression was not the best, when I saw the paragraph beginning with a lowercase letter (I am boring, yes) it already took my impression down there, and when I saw that it had a system with proper awareness I already thought in the system slave cliche, but no, the grammar is incredibly good and easy to read, with some mistakes here and there but tiny, it does not hinder your reading, and the punishments of system quests are incredibly stupid, such as "being allergic to carrot "and etc., not exaggerated like the systems I'm used to reading, so far a good story, I will follow this story, so let's see where it goes XD