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Wanting to become a striker, Byron Whitaker was hit with a dose of reality that told him that he wasn't adequate enough to be one.
Due to this he is put as a central midfielder and that's where his talents truly shine, his passing, his stamina, his vision. All these things make him realize he was looking at the pitch with a closed mind.
However, in this new position he can still achieve his dream, his dream of becoming a pro player. However, even though he accepted a position change, he would never give up his love for goals.
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You have a very nice core for the story , author . Just hold on to it . It has a very nice development . Maybe the only thing holding the story back is over complication of character and repeated use of names . At the same time , So many new names have been introduced that the main character and important supporting characters are being overshadowed . Else , its all good and will be watching over the progression of story.
Very nice start, Very nice characters. I actually can’t wait for more.