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Eazy at 50years old woke up one day in his ten year old body happy about getting another chance at life. He gets info that he has three abilities.
This is my first time writing so I'm going to wing things as it comes to my mind please bare with me. Please point out any Grammer errors.
PS. THIS NOVEL IS NOT FOR THE WEAK HEART AND ITS NOT ALL SUNSHINE EVERYDAY THE MC WILL HAVE BAD DAYS SO IF YOU NOT READY TO SEE A MC TAKE A L PLEASE DO NOT READ.
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I love this story all you need is to improve grammar, update speed, and story development along with other things. Tbh, I'm not that good at writing either and I'm not saying your not good. You are actually the first person's novel I really enjoy. Keep up the good work and train harder....
This is at best a average novel but the writer keeps it interesting and not boring like the other basketball novel. Overall it's readable and Grammer is ok but I'm hooked
Honestly, the writing is bad at best. The grammar is lacking, and reads like a bad mtl. The characters are as 1-dimensional as they get - even cultivation novels have better written characters. The world basically accepts that the Mc has absurd skills and bends to his whim, making the Mc a definitional Mary Sue, and a badly written one. Would not recommend.
"Too Much Unnecessary Drana" I've read up to 100+ chapters and Well i've had enough, it's sad because i quite liked this novel but i got fed up with the drama and it was starting to frustrate me and wasn't enjoying the read anymore......
I like the idea behind the story and the fact that Mc harem might include real life characters like riri, and Nicki, cardi... But the writing style is, I'll try to be diplomatic here, not so good. I don't enjoy the book much because of it. At least it's better than Be Happy With Sports'
I’m fully aware that as the story only has 18 reviews as of now, I’m bombing the review score. But at the same time, this story deserves nowhere near as much support as it seems to be getting. The concept is great and I love it, but the execution the author used is terrible. And yes, it’s the author’s first time writing but... that’s not an excuse to just ignore what readers are trying to say. In fact. The author is blatantly disregarding all the comments about the typos and spelling mistakes, or the story’s absolutely terrible grammar. Which, by the way, the story is littered with. Sorry, but I can’t support this train wreck. But here’s a promise, I’ll come back and fully support the novel of the author gets the story back together. Likely quite a few chapters need fully rewriting to make the grammar readable but trust me author... it’s well worth the cost. Props to the author for choosing to write, though.
plz don't drop the novel it's been 2 months since your last update it's one of the best sports novel I've ever read plz come back plźzzzzzzzzzzzzz
I'm not trying to be mean but I really didn't get it even at the beginning it was like you know so I really didn't get it and I kind of like the plot of the story and I think it was pretty good based off the plot but the writing quality was bad really bad but overall keep trying you did a good job I'll try to keep reading good luck on your story 😊
I really love the story. I cant wait for him to get drafted by a team in tge nba so he can play against or with a nba player in a profetional league .
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I thought the MC is a white-man, but surprisingly he is a black-man. I just discovered it around 30+ chapters.
Arthur please edit the earlier chapters and fix the formatting it's a chore reading it, I'm sure you could find a proofreader if you asked for one.
free 5 star review just to ask: Anyone know any good basketball novels that are pretty long and i can binge read in a few days minimum? Preferably ones with good grammar lol. I'd prefer if there was romance/system tag in it as well, there doesn't have to be though.
i have been here since chapter 1 please dont drop this you have made an amazing story and if yoh plan on dropping just make an ending dont blue ball us please
I love this story all you need is to improve grammar, update speed, and story development along with other things. Tbh, I'm not that good at writing either and I'm not saying your not good. You are actually the first person's novel I really enjoy. Keep up the good work and train harder....
Not many sport story can hook me. So congrats. Not only that, i never saw a basketball story so it is a plus. However, the writing quality suck, but its ok since it is yours first time so i cant go hard on you. story development is ok but still can be improve and i cant say anything about world background since u use real earth as the background. All in all, for a first story by new writer, u have good idea for the story and this make up with ur poor writing. i wish you luck.
The writing is understandable. I like it. Very intwresting. I think you the characters are well designed. I was not lost and the story telling is very clear.
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If I had to be fully honest the first 20 chapters of this novel were great.But then it started to go down hill from there. First point is It was going so well but sadly the author cripple his ability, so now he could only shoot 5 that are guaranteed to go in.but he got it later. I get your trying to get him to realise his aragance and put some drama in the mix.But the drama was too much the mcs personality was absolutley and uterly atrocious. He loves a girl has 2 kids with her.comes back in time cheats with her three times.Takes her virginity,then when he has sex with her and shes resting ontop of him.That stupid charachter ivy starts having sex and he's too f***ing afraid to stop it because he might wake her up.what utter bull*****. And I really started to like the story to but that whole fiasco really dident make any sense .He hasent even gotten his third yet.It would make more sense to have unlocked it then before the crash had happened.but gets it when he randomplays with his brother. Also what was the point in adding aluka in the first place now.so to face slap her in the future to show her what she missed.(wich is exactly what happened.) Then with sandra his past wife.He dident even fight for her to be by his side and let' her be.He should have know what her personality was like and what she went thru yet he knows nothing. But what I can complement is the story settings and how he has risen so far up until now.tho he wasent able save his mother that dident bring him down for long and even motivated him to do the best for his family,and for himself. This is only my view of the story.But for others it may be an amazing story.And I won't argue with you on that.This is just my review of the 50 chapters so far.But don't be discuroged.Not to read it because of this review because you may very well like the story. Tiger out.
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