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Some say that tragedy forges heroes time and again. But what Phil strives for is to lessen the sorrow of those around him.
After traveling to Zaun, Phil accidentally awakened the [Skin Master System].
It wasn’t until Phil, clad in formidable armor, stood on the bridge that the people of Piltover realized one undeniable truth:
Zaun had changed.
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Viết đánh giáThe whole novel lacks originality, the main character just keeps filling jinx’s role in arcane , but the dialogues and everything is straight from the series, sure it adds some new elements but there is no character development or any thing that makes it more unique compared to other trash arcane fanfics that just copy and pasted the whole series into a book. Overall I would say this story lacks originality and creative thinking.
First/the writing quality is good not the best but good. (***) Second/the update stability is fantastic. (*****) third/the story development and here the problem start that is nothing new in the story. The protagonist takes the place of jinx in missions and task and jinx become a side character who keep jumping around without actual reason. (*) Fourth/character design this character from the beginning until now haven’t changed it is the same character I see at the beginning and he adapted to the world of arcane so fast that you don’t see it.(*) fifth/the world building also didn’t add anything new to the story. Yes the original arcane world is amazing however that doesn’t change the fact that the author didn’t add anything new or interesting and that’s all for me.(***)
Tác giả FFAddict
I thought this was a fanfic about someone reborn as silco on the day of the bridge fight and although I would like to see that,the story is still really good thanks!