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Mc trained strawhats for 27 chapters... The story didn't even start yet, so everything is unpredictable. Grammar is good, but for me personally, authors writing style annoys me. Also, mc never watched tv in his entire life, because he know nothing tv/anime/manga related whatsoever.
This is so good not gonna lie i finished reading all available chapters already I need more!!!
The writing quality is good but, it's not for me. There were just a few things that kept me from fully enjoying it. #1 The MC can't keep or otherwise obtain or utilize the powers and skills he teaches beyond using them for demonstrations, and there was no indication he'd be able to learn/train them himself. So he's stuck in a cycle where he teaches people powers/abitlies/skills and can't actually grow from it. #2 The MC can teach things that have no business being in one piece and the people should have zero capabilities of learning, such as Chakra (Naruto jutsus), Ki (Dragonball), Harry Potter spells etc. It simply just doesn't belong there. #3 Admittedly it's a rather minor one but it still kinda annoyed me by repetitively comparing basically everything that happens to his old agriculture class and students. We get it, he's an ag teacher, no need to bring it up 2-3-4 times a chapter.
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Keep up the good work. Take your time, but of course, more chapters pleeeaase. Do what you gotta do IRL and don't forget us readers. lol
Mc trained strawhats for 27 chapters... The story didn't even start yet, so everything is unpredictable. Grammar is good, but for me personally, authors writing style annoys me. Also, mc never watched tv in his entire life, because he know nothing tv/anime/manga related whatsoever.
This is so good not gonna lie i finished reading all available chapters already I need more!!!
The writing quality is good but, it's not for me. There were just a few things that kept me from fully enjoying it. #1 The MC can't keep or otherwise obtain or utilize the powers and skills he teaches beyond using them for demonstrations, and there was no indication he'd be able to learn/train them himself. So he's stuck in a cycle where he teaches people powers/abitlies/skills and can't actually grow from it. #2 The MC can teach things that have no business being in one piece and the people should have zero capabilities of learning, such as Chakra (Naruto jutsus), Ki (Dragonball), Harry Potter spells etc. It simply just doesn't belong there. #3 Admittedly it's a rather minor one but it still kinda annoyed me by repetitively comparing basically everything that happens to his old agriculture class and students. We get it, he's an ag teacher, no need to bring it up 2-3-4 times a chapter.
Tiết lộ Spoiler 
Keep up the good work. Take your time, but of course, more chapters pleeeaase. Do what you gotta do IRL and don't forget us readers. lol