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When a teacher Lucius Matthews dies in a grain silo accident, he expects eternal darkness. Instead, he wakes up on a mysterious island with a supernatural teaching system that lets him demonstrate but not use incredible martial arts techniques. His first students? A rubber-bodied pirate captain, a money-loving navigator, a compulsive liar, a mysterious princess, and her oversized combat duck.
Welcome to the strangest classroom in any world, where the new teacher just needs to stay alive long enough to give his first lesson.
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Author Note: I loved NunuXD "Marvel: Game Maker System" and give him full credit for the first chapter.
Disclaimer: I do not own any characters or the world created by Oda Sensei and most of the story will stray away from the cannon but I will try my best to keep you guys interested.
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Viết đánh giáThe writing quality is good but, it's not for me. There were just a few things that kept me from fully enjoying it. #1 The MC can't keep or otherwise obtain or utilize the powers and skills he teaches beyond using them for demonstrations, and there was no indication he'd be able to learn/train them himself. So he's stuck in a cycle where he teaches people powers/abitlies/skills and can't actually grow from it. #2 The MC can teach things that have no business being in one piece and the people should have zero capabilities of learning, such as Chakra (Naruto jutsus), Ki (Dragonball), Harry Potter spells etc. It simply just doesn't belong there. #3 Admittedly it's a rather minor one but it still kinda annoyed me by repetitively comparing basically everything that happens to his old agriculture class and students. We get it, he's an ag teacher, no need to bring it up 2-3-4 times a chapter.
Tiết lộ SpoilerKeep up the good work. Take your time, but of course, more chapters pleeeaase. Do what you gotta do IRL and don't forget us readers. lol
Mc trained strawhats for 27 chapters... The story didn't even start yet, so everything is unpredictable. Grammar is good, but for me personally, authors writing style annoys me. Also, mc never watched tv in his entire life, because he know nothing tv/anime/manga related whatsoever.
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I love this bro pls keep it up ………………………