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Pretty epic dawg.hjjdjejjdjenememskksksksksmsmsmsmsmmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmmsmsmsmsmsmsmsms
Chapters are super short and most of it is the MC whining or confused. Even powder seems more mature than this MC. Can you fix whatever prompt you gave to the AI?
Author's got me by the balls. The writing has amazing quality with thought out development and realistic characters and growth. Am eagerly awaiting each new chapter.
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Just amazing overall I love the amazing come up the author is doing a great job
Really like that somebody making a story about Arcane more than 10 chapters. Keep up thiis work man.
reading your fanfiction brings me so much comfort, and its something i truly look forward to after a long day at work. theres something about your writing that helps me unwind and escape yk. keep it up brother.
As fellow fanfiction writer I love your story. The way you write your characters are so distinct. They great individual personalities also the story flow is great please finish this story. I really like you writing style.
Although im giving this work a good score (because writing quality is decent) i see no point in reading it anymore. Each and every fanfic on arcane i read so far (except one work in russian) ends up with the same issue - changing outcome of the prologue and saving everyone. At this point arcane becomes just a fantasy slice of life. Founding conflict is gone, character development is not possible, all future events nullified. Jinx is not Jinx , VI is not Vi, because events, that made them who they are never occurred. So what's the point in reading it if there is no characters of the original series only their doppelgangers?
Me a gustado mucho el desarrollo quw se a llevado en el personaje principal junto a la interacciones de los personajes con este y por supuesto la historia que es entretenida y intrigante, otra cosa que agrada es que el protagonista no es super poderoso inmediatamente y se va desarrollando de manera inteligente su poder. Otra cosa es el hecho de saber cosas de la trama pero aun si no poder solucionar todo de inmediato pero que poco a poco se muestre una idea de solución es muy agradable.
So far i really like how you did this and the way that it’s going. This could only be the arcane fanfic i’m satisfied with after reading so many others 😅 pls keep up the good work and i’ll support you till the end 🙇♀️😂
The story is amazing so far I hope the author explores outside of the city and meet more characters in the League of Legends lore and maybe fight some of them.
It is magnifique. I have been on an arcane binge, and this is one of the better ones I have read. aaaaaaaarrrrrrrrccccccccsaaaaaaaannnnneeeeeeeee(140 Limit)
Arcane has potential. Although the chapters are short, the story is captivating. Great job, author! Just don't make the main character too overpowered and develop the relationships slowly
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This is a very good one. Of course that might be my post Arcane Depression talking but this is truely great. infact of all the three Arcane fics that came out on Webnovel during this week, this one's the best. Chapters could use more length tho. But he's updating multiple chapters during a day so it evens out but I could go for a 50k a day and still want more so
A solid read so far. The author gives the characters their due, keeping the personalities convincingly realistic and faithful to the original. Interactions between characters feel fluid and natural, but the writer’s inexperience writing dialogue shines through during a few conversations. Other than that I can’t fault this work in any way. Great job so far, and keep it up 👍
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I'm really enjoying the story, the way the MC experiences this and finally realizes how much life in Zaun sucks and suffers from some events that lead him to emotional despair, the magic is also really cool, nothing too op, for now .
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I’ve been loving the arcane show I hope you don’t change nothing major because I do like the characters arcs that the characters go through p.s if if goin do a romance just do the poly with him, vi, and Cati don’t touch timebomb
my man, there's very few Arcane Stories over here, even less as good as this one, so, take this five stars, and please... continue this to the end, and all my power stones are yours. :)
It’s too early to give a proper review, but I’m obsessed with Arcane, so I’m still going to give it a decent score. The grammar is fine not perfect, but good enough. The chapters feel a bit short; I’m used to 3k words per chapter, and these seem shorter than that. Still, good job, author—you’re doing a semi-decent job! Hope you dont make the main character overpowerd or rush romance. its always the best to take it slow.
I can't find myself to feel anything for this story at this point other than annoyance tbh. You had a solid start, then you got too enthusiastic about punishing the kids. Despite all the changes, you had to keep things close to canon with the main events e.g. having benzo die, vandar die, jinx causes an explosion again, vi not learning anything despite having caused problems multiple times. If youre gonna add another character to change things have canon characters develop alongside them. Your MC is always confused or in pain, despite 50+ chapters he’s still the same as he was in chapter 10, both character and ability wise. Whenever important events happen everyone is reset to default settings as if none of the original events happened.
Pretty epic dawg.hjjdjejjdjenememskksksksksmsmsmsmsmmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmmsmsmsmsmsmsmsms
Chapters are super short and most of it is the MC whining or confused. Even powder seems more mature than this MC. Can you fix whatever prompt you gave to the AI?
Author's got me by the balls. The writing has amazing quality with thought out development and realistic characters and growth. Am eagerly awaiting each new chapter.
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Just amazing overall I love the amazing come up the author is doing a great job
Really like that somebody making a story about Arcane more than 10 chapters. Keep up thiis work man.
reading your fanfiction brings me so much comfort, and its something i truly look forward to after a long day at work. theres something about your writing that helps me unwind and escape yk. keep it up brother.
As fellow fanfiction writer I love your story. The way you write your characters are so distinct. They great individual personalities also the story flow is great please finish this story. I really like you writing style.
Although im giving this work a good score (because writing quality is decent) i see no point in reading it anymore. Each and every fanfic on arcane i read so far (except one work in russian) ends up with the same issue - changing outcome of the prologue and saving everyone. At this point arcane becomes just a fantasy slice of life. Founding conflict is gone, character development is not possible, all future events nullified. Jinx is not Jinx , VI is not Vi, because events, that made them who they are never occurred. So what's the point in reading it if there is no characters of the original series only their doppelgangers?
Me a gustado mucho el desarrollo quw se a llevado en el personaje principal junto a la interacciones de los personajes con este y por supuesto la historia que es entretenida y intrigante, otra cosa que agrada es que el protagonista no es super poderoso inmediatamente y se va desarrollando de manera inteligente su poder. Otra cosa es el hecho de saber cosas de la trama pero aun si no poder solucionar todo de inmediato pero que poco a poco se muestre una idea de solución es muy agradable.
So far i really like how you did this and the way that it’s going. This could only be the arcane fanfic i’m satisfied with after reading so many others 😅 pls keep up the good work and i’ll support you till the end 🙇♀️😂
The story is amazing so far I hope the author explores outside of the city and meet more characters in the League of Legends lore and maybe fight some of them.
It is magnifique. I have been on an arcane binge, and this is one of the better ones I have read. aaaaaaaarrrrrrrrccccccccsaaaaaaaannnnneeeeeeeee(140 Limit)
Arcane has potential. Although the chapters are short, the story is captivating. Great job, author! Just don't make the main character too overpowered and develop the relationships slowly
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This is a very good one. Of course that might be my post Arcane Depression talking but this is truely great. infact of all the three Arcane fics that came out on Webnovel during this week, this one's the best. Chapters could use more length tho. But he's updating multiple chapters during a day so it evens out but I could go for a 50k a day and still want more so
A solid read so far. The author gives the characters their due, keeping the personalities convincingly realistic and faithful to the original. Interactions between characters feel fluid and natural, but the writer’s inexperience writing dialogue shines through during a few conversations. Other than that I can’t fault this work in any way. Great job so far, and keep it up 👍
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I'm really enjoying the story, the way the MC experiences this and finally realizes how much life in Zaun sucks and suffers from some events that lead him to emotional despair, the magic is also really cool, nothing too op, for now .
Tiết lộ Spoiler I’ve been loving the arcane show I hope you don’t change nothing major because I do like the characters arcs that the characters go through p.s if if goin do a romance just do the poly with him, vi, and Cati don’t touch timebomb
my man, there's very few Arcane Stories over here, even less as good as this one, so, take this five stars, and please... continue this to the end, and all my power stones are yours. :)
It’s too early to give a proper review, but I’m obsessed with Arcane, so I’m still going to give it a decent score. The grammar is fine not perfect, but good enough. The chapters feel a bit short; I’m used to 3k words per chapter, and these seem shorter than that. Still, good job, author—you’re doing a semi-decent job! Hope you dont make the main character overpowerd or rush romance. its always the best to take it slow.
I can't find myself to feel anything for this story at this point other than annoyance tbh. You had a solid start, then you got too enthusiastic about punishing the kids. Despite all the changes, you had to keep things close to canon with the main events e.g. having benzo die, vandar die, jinx causes an explosion again, vi not learning anything despite having caused problems multiple times. If youre gonna add another character to change things have canon characters develop alongside them. Your MC is always confused or in pain, despite 50+ chapters he’s still the same as he was in chapter 10, both character and ability wise. Whenever important events happen everyone is reset to default settings as if none of the original events happened.