Your grammar is horrible, holy shit if you don't even know the concept of the word "the" just use grammarly
The sorcerer kingdom was founded 800 years ago. They conquered the whole continent in 50 years and a whole new world in 400 years. because New World is so much bigger than Ainz's Old World. After occupying the whole world, they are focused on inventing technology. Aniz turned the whole new world into Utopia.
Anime & Comics · Blackcovra
Bro chill
What they found in the center of the crater shocked them to their very cores. A being of immense power, clearly not a Gem, lay broken and bleeding. Her form, usually radiant with the light of a thousand suns, was dim and flickering. Golden ichor, the blood of the gods, seeped from numerous wounds across her body.
Anime & Comics · Kingkillerdj2023
Bro really said "Looks female enough."
Your chapters make me want to beta read, and rewrite this entire thing, so much wasted potential
Unless he literally said clap this doesn't make sense
"Clap, clap, clap! Well done, two for two," Nannyra says with an approving smile as she watches him. "I hope you've rested, because I've got a new mission ready for you." In front of her, a screen activates quickly, showing the image of a new world.
Anime & Comics · SalveYing
Sigh... like, why? Genuinely, why? Why do you INSIST on keeping stating the obvious People. Do. Not. Speak. Like. That.
Diluc nodded, his gaze focused on the machine. "It's impressive. If it works as intended, it will make a significant difference in the construction work. Satoshi has proven that his ideas have real value."
Video Games · via_mai45
14 chapters in and we still don't have a single proper interaction between characters, just a random guy entering the city, generic reactions and suddenly they're friends this went from 0 to 100 real quick. Have you ever thought that, I don't know, maybe we'd like to see the history progressing in the slice of live aspect? No? oh silly me why would readers ever enjoy reading a history if not for the human interaction.
You... are a horrible story teller author, I don't mean this offensively but you just jump over everything, we were supposed to see the festival, all we got was a damn description of what was happening, not even 2 pages long. Show us what's happening for fucks sake you're writing this history as if you're dragging your finger through the keyboard.
... He literally just said that
The crowd murmured, intrigued. One of the blacksmiths, Wagner, raised his hand. "An innovation hub? What exactly would we be doing there?"
Video Games · via_mai45
Smut, and when is he going to visit his past girls?
Author's note: Question, are you here for the story or for the smut? Be honest, I want to know. Also, a 5k chapter? Did I go crazy or did I get inspired while writing? Whatever the answer is, I want to see a comment or a review. I think I deserve it.
Multiversal Babysitter
Anime & Comics · SalveYing