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Impossibile est ut hoc opus legas, MC tam mutum est et ne dicas mihi quod mundum non intelligat, cibum ab extraneis in spatio non recipias, et multo minus circumire sermonem tuum de tellure tua, homunculus Saiyan est et agit sicut Goku ille, tam mutus est.
fucking price of shitty ff a mc elwho thinks with hos dick rather than brain and functions on animal based instinct of food fight and mate I don't understand the thinking of author here on what basis did he write this shit of a ff
Don't waste your time, this MF took one of the most powerful characters created and made him pathetic, spineless, and dumb. Jesus Christ
even though this story has some horny elements, it's fucking peak, so I recommend reading this.
Please author sir write more frequently if at all possible this story is great
Until now I can only say perfect! Fights/Action/Emotion/Romance/Dark/“Harem?” (at least side flings) really good! Please continue with regular updates and don’t drop!
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this is would have been a shiny novel but the author have to add a cloning part ruined it. shitty ass cloning fuck story
Very good surprisingly nobody has ever done a saiyan in dc right until now keep up the good work
I am enjoying the read. Don't look at how many chapters there are, each chapter is massive.
Sad theirs no update. I like the fact that Diana and arius are getting comfortable. I'm not the one for love rivals but I ship wonder woman and arius alot. It's actually a dream pairing of mine that and gohan with zatanna
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Not bad but it makes me annoyed. he basically is being use like a little bitch by the league they want him stranded on a shitty world with no one so they can call him when they need him. This MC has no balls to say fuk u if u want my help protecting this place u make me a citizen. if not u can try and make me leave.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing advance chapters of this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
how often are you going to be uploading chapters here?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like it. Good job. Continue doing a good job. I like broly, I like dc, I like si's, And this has all three. I Like Scared Darkseid.
Not worth the oxygen required to sustain life whilst reading this 💩 Broly level Mc that loses every fight like a retard, can’t protect his mother and can’t even kill the person that kills her. So incredibly pathetic it’s disgusting
Absolutely amazing finally, broly in DC seems to be such a good and easy Idea but after Like 5 other authors fcked IT up, I'm glad this one got IT right.
I like the story and it's very interesting to read. Hope you keep posting more chapters
I loved it! It's a super engaging story with great writing and a great script! I'm really looking forward to reading more chapters of this story.
I find it wild that stories like this with drastically better writing and well crafted dialogue can somehow go completely unnoticed and then you have absolute garbage on the top of the leader board. There is literally a story like this with the same premise that feels like it is written by an edgy 7 year old and then you have this. Webnovel is weird
Okay so a shameless self review hope you all enjoy the story and have great days, if you have any advice or notice anything wrong let me know.
Impossibile est ut hoc opus legas, MC tam mutum est et ne dicas mihi quod mundum non intelligat, cibum ab extraneis in spatio non recipias, et multo minus circumire sermonem tuum de tellure tua, homunculus Saiyan est et agit sicut Goku ille, tam mutus est.
fucking price of shitty ff a mc elwho thinks with hos dick rather than brain and functions on animal based instinct of food fight and mate I don't understand the thinking of author here on what basis did he write this shit of a ff
Don't waste your time, this MF took one of the most powerful characters created and made him pathetic, spineless, and dumb. Jesus Christ
even though this story has some horny elements, it's fucking peak, so I recommend reading this.
Please author sir write more frequently if at all possible this story is great
Until now I can only say perfect! Fights/Action/Emotion/Romance/Dark/“Harem?” (at least side flings) really good! Please continue with regular updates and don’t drop!
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
this is would have been a shiny novel but the author have to add a cloning part ruined it. shitty ass cloning fuck story
Very good surprisingly nobody has ever done a saiyan in dc right until now keep up the good work
I am enjoying the read. Don't look at how many chapters there are, each chapter is massive.
Sad theirs no update. I like the fact that Diana and arius are getting comfortable. I'm not the one for love rivals but I ship wonder woman and arius alot. It's actually a dream pairing of mine that and gohan with zatanna
🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
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Not bad but it makes me annoyed. he basically is being use like a little bitch by the league they want him stranded on a shitty world with no one so they can call him when they need him. This MC has no balls to say fuk u if u want my help protecting this place u make me a citizen. if not u can try and make me leave.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing advance chapters of this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
how often are you going to be uploading chapters here?[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like it. Good job. Continue doing a good job. I like broly, I like dc, I like si's, And this has all three. I Like Scared Darkseid.
Not worth the oxygen required to sustain life whilst reading this 💩 Broly level Mc that loses every fight like a retard, can’t protect his mother and can’t even kill the person that kills her. So incredibly pathetic it’s disgusting
Absolutely amazing finally, broly in DC seems to be such a good and easy Idea but after Like 5 other authors fcked IT up, I'm glad this one got IT right.
I like the story and it's very interesting to read. Hope you keep posting more chapters
I loved it! It's a super engaging story with great writing and a great script! I'm really looking forward to reading more chapters of this story.
I find it wild that stories like this with drastically better writing and well crafted dialogue can somehow go completely unnoticed and then you have absolute garbage on the top of the leader board. There is literally a story like this with the same premise that feels like it is written by an edgy 7 year old and then you have this. Webnovel is weird
Okay so a shameless self review hope you all enjoy the story and have great days, if you have any advice or notice anything wrong let me know.