Dragon Ball The Next

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Charles_Warriors

Is it a translation or an original story? It is interesting, maybe one or two grammatical errors but it is entertaining. Regarding the ssj4 remember that in GT Vegueta could transform without tail with the Bruits Beam Generator, it could be possible that on a full moon night if goten flies up to overcome the atmosphere could trigger its transformation to Ōzaru, taking into account what would receive the rays of the moon in greater intensity to be outside the atmosphere.

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Lovenkira

I was always disappointed by the low quality of dragon ball fan fic. However, this is the type of fan fic that I have read the most because I love the DB universe. For now this fic is by far the Dragon ball fic with the best debut I have ever seen the characters are really constructed they have relationships. Plus there's none of the misoginy and brainwashing of Chinese fan fic. It looks very good to me, I just hope that the author won't suddenly stop writing or make a harem at the mc, even if for the moment that doesn't seem to be the case. A big thank you to the author for finally making a respectable Dragon Ball fan fic. ps: If you have other dragon ball fan fics of this quality in mind, don't hesitate to recommend them to me

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R0B

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ghostensaop

love the fic

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No_Name_Character

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Gon_6888

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