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As is tradition, here is a five-star review from yours truly to boost the story. Instead of sucking myself off here, I want you all to use this review's comment section for you all to leave comments or suggestions regarding the story. Also, thank you all for reading my goofy story.
Esta buena la historia, a mi gusto personal, el prota me gusta. Mi parte fav es donde se peleo con los héroes estuvo chido esa parte. Ojala en un futuro recuperes la motivación y la creatividad para sacar más caps. Una idea se me ocurre es que creas nuevos villanos de los otros continentes usando la parte donde todo el mundo vio la pelea de Sukuna vs Los Héroes. Otro que puedes hacer es que el prota siga el entrenamiento de desbloquear la CE de su familia, posiblemente con una teoria que abarque los Dedos de Sukuna. Solo son sugerencias, las puedas tomar para que te hagas unas ideas en la historia. Gracias por la novela.
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Love this fic but please make souta make sense in his actions and not just because he likes a character like I get it but mans gotta slowly stop thinking they are just characters because I think he still sees them as that rather than real people??
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I love this. It's good, fun and overall it is a fantastic read. The system makes sense and the development of the MC is well-written and paced.
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Like what the fuck are you doing this novel is what happen when author have the iq of an infant, its full of self fulfilling fantasy of its author ,typical bitch who wont feel the touch of a woman
Its actually really nice! I thought it was gonna be dogshit cause of some of the reviews but it turns out its just webnovel users being webnovel users! Don't knock this book till ya try it! Only complaint I have is how frickin' op he is right now! He could realistically beat All for one with ease so I'm looking forward to how the author tackles that problem
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It started off strong but lost its spark as it went on. Letting people vote to decide what path the protagonist took really hurt the flow, as a cohesive narrative needs clear intent, not a mix of competing ideas. Additionally, the harem dynamic doesn’t fit here. I’ll admit I’m biased, as I’m not a fan of harem stories in general, but even without that, it feels out of place in this setting. Still, even after all of that, it’s not that bad just somewhere in the middle. Not good, not bad
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first of all I appreciate your Hardwork and dedicated for the story and as a reader I think I should say this to for your further improvement the story was good till a point but mc's charcter development was too bad he doesn't have a accurate personality jumping to both sides and it would be great as he would goes to the story pretty fastly but it took time and that was too boring the first thing that kept people hear was the crosover of jjk system to mha and honestly other than powerblending ther isnothing new in this story it pretty genric but iIlove these typical cliche so I continued to read even after i dropped in chapter 6 and till 28 but i think iIcouldn't read more sorry no hate but ithing this isnot my cup see you in your other fan fics honestly speaking iIloved your mcu crossover book and had completed it but this i coudnt is too .....
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One for all the histories of mha. I think that the major reason i dont like mha ff in general is the selfshness of the Mc. He/she just want tô be all powerfull and beat the bad guy and fuck everything else. But this is different. The way He heals the other characters is one of the best work i have even seen. Even with some craziness here and there. This is one of or the best ff about mha i have seen. Thanks author, the Last chapter was fabulous about dabi and i will wait ansious for more.
the story begins well with well-performed character development before the author decides it was time to slip up. without one or two explanations the mc begins to kill the bad guys under the pretext that he wants to train and accumulate experience which is seen enough that he explains that he receives not only the techniques but also the experiences of their use. The Mc trains while the results do not exist! I mean that these powers and these reserves are defined by the gacha so what's the point?? he also has dramatic behavior in scenes that reminds me of sasuke but in victim mode. (no, I'm too weak! I can't protect the little girl who was adopted and who I haven't seen for years! I'm too weak! I can't protect my colleague mei mei who lives perfectly in security and who uses me as a guinea pig! I'm too weak I can't protect Jin who I met a day ago no there are too many criminals in this city when I walk around at night and in places! dark alleys as a little 12 year old boy) In short my opinion is made
Honestly, after reading these reviews to see if I'd like the story only to find out it wasn't anywhere near as bad as they said it was, I'm quite disappointed in the people who blasted it so harshly I'd say the only thing of note about this story that's negative is that the earlier chapters didn't flow as well as the later ones beyond that I really have no complaints the author was very interactive with the readers and everything that the protagonist did was easily comprehendable overall I'd say this 4.8 out of 5 is very justified.
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So honestly at this point I'm sorta just skimming through the story than actually reading it, but the story did start out very strong, like incredibly so that I honestly would have given it a rapid five stars, but now at this point from just the build-up alone, it's pretty much him screwing people over just to make more enemies to keep the story going and him having a Hail Mary gacha pull in preparation for the next arc to make him stronger than he already is and just bulldoze everyone, and honestly I don't even know where he's going with playing both sides anymore, it's like he was cooking but then the kitchen is sorta on fire now. It's still a pretty decent story that I'll read but I feel like my expectations have sorta dimmed.
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J'ai pas aimé l'histoire et l'auteur n'est pas capable d'accepter les critiques donc ce n'est pas la peine d'en rédiger une mais dans toutes les cas bon courage pour la suite cher auteur je vous souhaite le meilleur dans votre vie.
I loved it, yes, it may have certain low points. However, being picky with a fic as nice as this one is very mean. For my part, I like the somewhat slow and leisurely development with its interactions.[img=Out of it]
So far so good, the story actually separates cursed energy as a foreign energy instead of letting the techniques work using the sheer will alone. The mc actions and thought process is entertaining to follow. And most importantly, this is a gacha themed system, thats one way to not let the mc become all powerful immediately
As is tradition, here is a five-star review from yours truly to boost the story. Instead of sucking myself off here, I want you all to use this review's comment section for you all to leave comments or suggestions regarding the story. Also, thank you all for reading my goofy story.
Esta buena la historia, a mi gusto personal, el prota me gusta. Mi parte fav es donde se peleo con los héroes estuvo chido esa parte. Ojala en un futuro recuperes la motivación y la creatividad para sacar más caps. Una idea se me ocurre es que creas nuevos villanos de los otros continentes usando la parte donde todo el mundo vio la pelea de Sukuna vs Los Héroes. Otro que puedes hacer es que el prota siga el entrenamiento de desbloquear la CE de su familia, posiblemente con una teoria que abarque los Dedos de Sukuna. Solo son sugerencias, las puedas tomar para que te hagas unas ideas en la historia. Gracias por la novela.
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Love this fic but please make souta make sense in his actions and not just because he likes a character like I get it but mans gotta slowly stop thinking they are just characters because I think he still sees them as that rather than real people??
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I love this. It's good, fun and overall it is a fantastic read. The system makes sense and the development of the MC is well-written and paced.
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Like what the fuck are you doing this novel is what happen when author have the iq of an infant, its full of self fulfilling fantasy of its author ,typical bitch who wont feel the touch of a woman
Its actually really nice! I thought it was gonna be dogshit cause of some of the reviews but it turns out its just webnovel users being webnovel users! Don't knock this book till ya try it! Only complaint I have is how frickin' op he is right now! He could realistically beat All for one with ease so I'm looking forward to how the author tackles that problem
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It started off strong but lost its spark as it went on. Letting people vote to decide what path the protagonist took really hurt the flow, as a cohesive narrative needs clear intent, not a mix of competing ideas. Additionally, the harem dynamic doesn’t fit here. I’ll admit I’m biased, as I’m not a fan of harem stories in general, but even without that, it feels out of place in this setting. Still, even after all of that, it’s not that bad just somewhere in the middle. Not good, not bad
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Está reseñas solo es para equilibrar un poco los bots de 5 estrellas , como puede haber tantos bots dando 5 estrellas en un mismo fic ??? [img=Out of it][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived]
first of all I appreciate your Hardwork and dedicated for the story and as a reader I think I should say this to for your further improvement the story was good till a point but mc's charcter development was too bad he doesn't have a accurate personality jumping to both sides and it would be great as he would goes to the story pretty fastly but it took time and that was too boring the first thing that kept people hear was the crosover of jjk system to mha and honestly other than powerblending ther isnothing new in this story it pretty genric but iIlove these typical cliche so I continued to read even after i dropped in chapter 6 and till 28 but i think iIcouldn't read more sorry no hate but ithing this isnot my cup see you in your other fan fics honestly speaking iIloved your mcu crossover book and had completed it but this i coudnt is too .....
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One for all the histories of mha. I think that the major reason i dont like mha ff in general is the selfshness of the Mc. He/she just want tô be all powerfull and beat the bad guy and fuck everything else. But this is different. The way He heals the other characters is one of the best work i have even seen. Even with some craziness here and there. This is one of or the best ff about mha i have seen. Thanks author, the Last chapter was fabulous about dabi and i will wait ansious for more.
the story begins well with well-performed character development before the author decides it was time to slip up. without one or two explanations the mc begins to kill the bad guys under the pretext that he wants to train and accumulate experience which is seen enough that he explains that he receives not only the techniques but also the experiences of their use. The Mc trains while the results do not exist! I mean that these powers and these reserves are defined by the gacha so what's the point?? he also has dramatic behavior in scenes that reminds me of sasuke but in victim mode. (no, I'm too weak! I can't protect the little girl who was adopted and who I haven't seen for years! I'm too weak! I can't protect my colleague mei mei who lives perfectly in security and who uses me as a guinea pig! I'm too weak I can't protect Jin who I met a day ago no there are too many criminals in this city when I walk around at night and in places! dark alleys as a little 12 year old boy) In short my opinion is made
Honestly, after reading these reviews to see if I'd like the story only to find out it wasn't anywhere near as bad as they said it was, I'm quite disappointed in the people who blasted it so harshly I'd say the only thing of note about this story that's negative is that the earlier chapters didn't flow as well as the later ones beyond that I really have no complaints the author was very interactive with the readers and everything that the protagonist did was easily comprehendable overall I'd say this 4.8 out of 5 is very justified.
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So honestly at this point I'm sorta just skimming through the story than actually reading it, but the story did start out very strong, like incredibly so that I honestly would have given it a rapid five stars, but now at this point from just the build-up alone, it's pretty much him screwing people over just to make more enemies to keep the story going and him having a Hail Mary gacha pull in preparation for the next arc to make him stronger than he already is and just bulldoze everyone, and honestly I don't even know where he's going with playing both sides anymore, it's like he was cooking but then the kitchen is sorta on fire now. It's still a pretty decent story that I'll read but I feel like my expectations have sorta dimmed.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler J'ai pas aimé l'histoire et l'auteur n'est pas capable d'accepter les critiques donc ce n'est pas la peine d'en rédiger une mais dans toutes les cas bon courage pour la suite cher auteur je vous souhaite le meilleur dans votre vie.
I loved it, yes, it may have certain low points. However, being picky with a fic as nice as this one is very mean. For my part, I like the somewhat slow and leisurely development with its interactions.[img=Out of it]
So far so good, the story actually separates cursed energy as a foreign energy instead of letting the techniques work using the sheer will alone. The mc actions and thought process is entertaining to follow. And most importantly, this is a gacha themed system, thats one way to not let the mc become all powerful immediately