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The story writing , plot , character development, and the discipline in the story was awesome...
I had a whole short story's worth of a rant going and decided to just scrap it all since I realized I was putting much more effort than even the author into scrutinizing their work. MC's system eventually becomes the basic mission system you probably hate already(the ones with the 'do this or lose the system'), and it even gives bs op abilities that only vaguely relate to what he did to 'earn' it. The 'ai assisted' might as well be 'ai dictated' because it feels like the author never corrects it, even when it clearly breaks the story. My breaking point was when the reward was essentially a retroactive and permanently applied 3 tomoe sharingan. You know because studying so hard naturally deserves a reward of perfect memory and visual perception buffed to the extreme. All that and more is just base state brainpower so no chakra consumption like those pathetic uchiha and their parlor tricks. There was also some very obvious hinting that MC's going to develop medical ninjutsu in such a way as to make tsunade look stupid for being too "superficial" in her application of the technique she invented.
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i am writing this comment after reading 130 chapters . although writing quality is good but story progresses too slow, chapters are too much repeatetive , 2 or 3 chapters contains the gist that can be completed in one paragraph , like if you read 1 or 2 paragraph in the beginning of the chapter u most likely do not need to read rest of the chapter as they contain almost the same thing and because of this its not interesting anymore. its feels like the author is forced to write the story .
great fanfiction but what happened to chapter release earlier i think it 45 per week but now it's 5 power scaling is a bit weird but it's good
Why is this author kept repeating ting stuff from the old chapters? It's really kill the flow of the book when something like this happen.
I had to put this story down and pick it up later because the beginning was too slow for my taste but I'm glad I did pick it up again. Give this a read. This story has elements I'd usually avoid reading like the mc making sub optimal decisions but for some reason it doesn't bother me as much as other stories do. plus the author has been consistently updating and responsive to his readers' comments, which means to me that the story won't likely be dropped. what's not to love [img=recommend]
Was good upto the early 300's. But after that it's not even worth reading. I recommend reading up to about chapter 300. You'll know when it goes to sh#t.
i just loved it. nothing more to be said. just loved it. read it pls also note this is a slice of life fan fic. so it might be slow to some
even though I don't like the way the story is going. u r trying to improve constantly and you dont stop regardless of the negative feedback and always stays positive. that's one hellay character u have. my opinion of the novel: it has became a cliche and too much to count how many authors have gone down these road. mc reincarnates and associate with all the character and solves all their problem. if only it was that easy. I call these plot "holding hands and shitting rainbows in a dangerous world but the plot armour choses the mc" instead why don't the mc try to live his own live more realistically. he doesn't have to be a hero or a villian. let him just be him. he could still be casual friends with some character. in reality we don't choose friends, they just come along the way in life. some stays some don't. simple as that.
Pretty good for an AI fic. The author cripples the mc then killed sakumo within 3 chapters. Don’t read if you expected the plot to change.
A moment of silence for those who scroll over this masterpiece....(ITS DUCKIN AWESOME)
Why, why did you need to kill him, Sakumo didn't deserve that kakashi either, don't make a shadow of yourself out of the canon, make him much stronger, realize his full potential
Nice story has a lot of potential , I wanted to stop after he lost his eyes . but the latest ch 312 got me interested again .Hope it continues like , again, this a really nice story.
AI generated, butchered source, inconsistent story, this not a novel, its a list. author does nothing other than copy paste
doesn't catch any interest. read 21 chapter and finally got bored of reading about his hard work and other similar stuff
This unfortunately falls into the ever so common webnovel hole of “great ideas, terrible writing.’ The author is highly dedicated, and I respect him for that, but the novel is borderline unreadable. Very clearly heavily written by ai, large numbers of chapters are repetitions of previous chapters. Every 4th chapter is a reflection on the chapters prior, and the author contradicts himself repeatedly to the point he switched it to au to make his story make more sense. Regardless, I enjoyed the 100 odd chapters I read, but I could not bear it any longer.
An overall amusing novel with a good level of emotional development based on the characters and their feelings. 😋😋
Please finish this work I really love it and I’m desperate to read more please.😭😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺. I love it so much you are so intriguing and new and so detailed. The characters have not seen before were made and Naruto was the best. The training regiment was so detailed mysterious and magnificent. I’m honestly blown away. I read works like this but you take the cupcake. Hahaha
in my opinion, this fanfic is written very well. Much better than others I have come across[img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Mad][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Cries][img=Mad]
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Tbh, I don't find anything lacking. It's a very good Naruto fic imho, kindly try.
author, please keep this rate of updates, please don't drop it suddenly. It has a lot of potential
Nice fanfic, However the ages of the characters are kinda hard to keep up with as they differ from the source material.
so far, the story is interesting, the only thing that ruins this is the writing style and how the plot and flow of the story is handled, it become too boring to read. Very poor character design, not much is explained, too plain, could do more work world background: gave 3stars cuz of Naruto background, otherwise I'll give 2stars, lack of description of place. ruins the whole mood of story
Superb Amazing fanfic of Naruto Superb Best update speed Good superb story Superb Weak to Strong MC GENIUS MC SYSTEM SUPERB INTELLIGENT MC LOVELY SHIP(SPOILER) ALL ROUNDED GENIUS CIVILIAN SUPERB HARDWORKING MC WITH NO STUPID DECISION, ALL WISE DECISION SUPERB WORLD BACKGROUND SUPERB fanfic
Very obvious ai generated trash. The writing style is plagued by repetitive content, and useless chapters and the age old case of telling instead of showing. Almost everything up to chapter 25 is told from past tense view of the MC and it really sucks. We are never actually in the moment with the Mc... Ever. Furthermore many chapters are just repeats of the previous ones reworded. Or paragraphs are a reworded repetition of the previous paragraph. Its an obvious tell that the author is using an ai to write the majority of the story and isn't doing anything to proffread whatever they paste into the story that the ai wrote. With the small chapter size and use of ai combined with the respective nature. Some chapter updates are completely worthless. The story moves far too slow as well, never focusing on details that would matter, or doing any actual character building with anyone outside the MC himself. The MC himself is very bland and logical. There is nothing exciting about them at all really. Lastly, plot holes and contrivances abound, aren't addressed, and are glossed over like they don't exist.
The story writing , plot , character development, and the discipline in the story was awesome...
I had a whole short story's worth of a rant going and decided to just scrap it all since I realized I was putting much more effort than even the author into scrutinizing their work. MC's system eventually becomes the basic mission system you probably hate already(the ones with the 'do this or lose the system'), and it even gives bs op abilities that only vaguely relate to what he did to 'earn' it. The 'ai assisted' might as well be 'ai dictated' because it feels like the author never corrects it, even when it clearly breaks the story. My breaking point was when the reward was essentially a retroactive and permanently applied 3 tomoe sharingan. You know because studying so hard naturally deserves a reward of perfect memory and visual perception buffed to the extreme. All that and more is just base state brainpower so no chakra consumption like those pathetic uchiha and their parlor tricks. There was also some very obvious hinting that MC's going to develop medical ninjutsu in such a way as to make tsunade look stupid for being too "superficial" in her application of the technique she invented.
👍aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
i am writing this comment after reading 130 chapters . although writing quality is good but story progresses too slow, chapters are too much repeatetive , 2 or 3 chapters contains the gist that can be completed in one paragraph , like if you read 1 or 2 paragraph in the beginning of the chapter u most likely do not need to read rest of the chapter as they contain almost the same thing and because of this its not interesting anymore. its feels like the author is forced to write the story .
great fanfiction but what happened to chapter release earlier i think it 45 per week but now it's 5 power scaling is a bit weird but it's good
Why is this author kept repeating ting stuff from the old chapters? It's really kill the flow of the book when something like this happen.
I had to put this story down and pick it up later because the beginning was too slow for my taste but I'm glad I did pick it up again. Give this a read. This story has elements I'd usually avoid reading like the mc making sub optimal decisions but for some reason it doesn't bother me as much as other stories do. plus the author has been consistently updating and responsive to his readers' comments, which means to me that the story won't likely be dropped. what's not to love [img=recommend]
Was good upto the early 300's. But after that it's not even worth reading. I recommend reading up to about chapter 300. You'll know when it goes to sh#t.
i just loved it. nothing more to be said. just loved it. read it pls also note this is a slice of life fan fic. so it might be slow to some
even though I don't like the way the story is going. u r trying to improve constantly and you dont stop regardless of the negative feedback and always stays positive. that's one hellay character u have. my opinion of the novel: it has became a cliche and too much to count how many authors have gone down these road. mc reincarnates and associate with all the character and solves all their problem. if only it was that easy. I call these plot "holding hands and shitting rainbows in a dangerous world but the plot armour choses the mc" instead why don't the mc try to live his own live more realistically. he doesn't have to be a hero or a villian. let him just be him. he could still be casual friends with some character. in reality we don't choose friends, they just come along the way in life. some stays some don't. simple as that.
Pretty good for an AI fic. The author cripples the mc then killed sakumo within 3 chapters. Don’t read if you expected the plot to change.
A moment of silence for those who scroll over this masterpiece....(ITS DUCKIN AWESOME)
Why, why did you need to kill him, Sakumo didn't deserve that kakashi either, don't make a shadow of yourself out of the canon, make him much stronger, realize his full potential
Nice story has a lot of potential , I wanted to stop after he lost his eyes . but the latest ch 312 got me interested again .Hope it continues like , again, this a really nice story.
AI generated, butchered source, inconsistent story, this not a novel, its a list. author does nothing other than copy paste
doesn't catch any interest. read 21 chapter and finally got bored of reading about his hard work and other similar stuff
This unfortunately falls into the ever so common webnovel hole of “great ideas, terrible writing.’ The author is highly dedicated, and I respect him for that, but the novel is borderline unreadable. Very clearly heavily written by ai, large numbers of chapters are repetitions of previous chapters. Every 4th chapter is a reflection on the chapters prior, and the author contradicts himself repeatedly to the point he switched it to au to make his story make more sense. Regardless, I enjoyed the 100 odd chapters I read, but I could not bear it any longer.
An overall amusing novel with a good level of emotional development based on the characters and their feelings. 😋😋
Please finish this work I really love it and I’m desperate to read more please.😭😭😭😭🥺🥺🥺. I love it so much you are so intriguing and new and so detailed. The characters have not seen before were made and Naruto was the best. The training regiment was so detailed mysterious and magnificent. I’m honestly blown away. I read works like this but you take the cupcake. Hahaha
in my opinion, this fanfic is written very well. Much better than others I have come across[img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Mad][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Cries][img=Mad][img=Mad][img=Cries][img=Mad]
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Tbh, I don't find anything lacking. It's a very good Naruto fic imho, kindly try.
author, please keep this rate of updates, please don't drop it suddenly. It has a lot of potential
Nice fanfic, However the ages of the characters are kinda hard to keep up with as they differ from the source material.
so far, the story is interesting, the only thing that ruins this is the writing style and how the plot and flow of the story is handled, it become too boring to read. Very poor character design, not much is explained, too plain, could do more work world background: gave 3stars cuz of Naruto background, otherwise I'll give 2stars, lack of description of place. ruins the whole mood of story
Superb Amazing fanfic of Naruto Superb Best update speed Good superb story Superb Weak to Strong MC GENIUS MC SYSTEM SUPERB INTELLIGENT MC LOVELY SHIP(SPOILER) ALL ROUNDED GENIUS CIVILIAN SUPERB HARDWORKING MC WITH NO STUPID DECISION, ALL WISE DECISION SUPERB WORLD BACKGROUND SUPERB fanfic
Very obvious ai generated trash. The writing style is plagued by repetitive content, and useless chapters and the age old case of telling instead of showing. Almost everything up to chapter 25 is told from past tense view of the MC and it really sucks. We are never actually in the moment with the Mc... Ever. Furthermore many chapters are just repeats of the previous ones reworded. Or paragraphs are a reworded repetition of the previous paragraph. Its an obvious tell that the author is using an ai to write the majority of the story and isn't doing anything to proffread whatever they paste into the story that the ai wrote. With the small chapter size and use of ai combined with the respective nature. Some chapter updates are completely worthless. The story moves far too slow as well, never focusing on details that would matter, or doing any actual character building with anyone outside the MC himself. The MC himself is very bland and logical. There is nothing exciting about them at all really. Lastly, plot holes and contrivances abound, aren't addressed, and are glossed over like they don't exist.