The idea being a rip-off from some low level Chinese novel with plot thinner then paper. So hopefully u will make this idea a better one and have a decent read. gl
doesn't worth your time at all, not interesting and bad editing
too short !
such editing with repetitive text
Chapter 17 got me hooked with this story for. life. Finally we have someone who understands that he is unstoppable and can act as he sees. I like that cannon is first taken than shredded to pieces and thrown away. hope mc will be the same with random strangers and continue showing that he is in fact a BOSS not some side char with need to consider strangers thoughts and reactions keep up the good work
Omg ! this is so epic and cool. I swear this chapter is the best one so far!
Silly Mc beating Kakashi is easier , just ask him to lose to you in spar and offer something in return. and it's done! silly mc always follow systems likes a puppets
I lost count of face-palms I had to do, to get through this chapter.
ugh... what catalyst what materials? how tf he synthesized a new metal? too abstract to be interesting so much lack of details lead me to believe that Tony is in fact harry potter with Hagrig next to him , saying single phrase over and over again :" It's magic , Harry! " . maybe it's only me , but I'm really dissappointed. I thought he will be real deal business man, but he turned out to be a kid playing in sand, choosing Japan, which is tiny plot of land compared to an entire world. No matter the world, strong heroes are only 1% or even less of the population, most of the people are those with useless quirk or without one, he could make so many money with them but focuses only on tiny % , also he could find so many good workers cos usually oppressed one try the best so quirk less would work their ass out for a chance of their lives. overall I don't really find characteristics of charismatic Tony , for one he is still a kid and will be a kid since otherwise how can author put him into the plot to be a pawn there , while he could very much be a player or at least a king . No matter what others think, Tony importance is not in the suit , but in his brain , suit ate just extra support
started off good , but here he just ruined it for me
Reborn as shield hero with Garps Template
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