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Como diabos a hancock vai para o harem sendo que ela já conheceu o luffy de acordo com sinopse?
This story is like the movie Raid, action, battles, blood and iron... and it's damn cool! Especially considering that there is also a plot and it’s good
I'll be disappointed if u don't include Hancock in the harem after u put Hancock on the cover img.
First of all, I hope that the Author continues the Story and lets the critique I have sink in, so he can improve. To the strong points of the Story, the idea of the story is really interesting and something new. Sadly, that's it. Now to the things I will criticize, first is that his power is fluctuating. I understand that you want him to be strong, but with only level 36 to hurt a vice admiral or even Doflamingo but that not really Possible. Doflamingo is a physical and Mental powerhouse, he also has haki. Vice admirals learned the six powers, at least I think so. If that isn't truer, then ignore that. The idea of Haki is okay I guess, but you could just let him learn it from the Boa Hancock Pirates, they imbue their Arrows also with Haki. Next is the MC didn't really change much, that can change, but at least change one thing. Like rescuing Mr.2 or some impact on the Story. Which he had sadly not. Now comes the thing I, Personally, don't like is, that he is a sorcerer. It would be much more exciting for him to have been a Physical fighter. Because now he spams is sorcery and that's it. Please continue your Work, Author, but sadly, I can't read it anymore. Have a great day or night.
Hello, i just added this story to my collection, and im also a fan of Elder Ring, btw will Nami and Robin become Mc Wifes,? because from what i understand the timeline of this story is during Ace execution, and Marineford war
The stories good but the MC is an insufferable idiot who constantly makes stupid decidions and actions and acts all befgudled when his stupid actione don’t pan out. I don’t know if this is intentional, or the author really is just that bad at writing a character without help from another established one, but it drags the quality down whenever they’re the focus of a scene.
It's off to an interesting start, hopefully he'll be getting boss powers from the game. .............................................................................
Elden Ring and One piece ? a new word is needed to describe the level of peak that this combo is, i expect this to be one of the best fics here, i might edit my review later on.
Shameless Author 5* Review!!! Seriously though, If you liked the story, rate it, and invest some power stones in it! Help me improve my writing! also if you want support me on Patreon?
In more than 20 chapters the story is the same as the canon, the Mc is an irrelevant idiot of the peers what's in Webnovel the only thing he knows how to do is curse as if that made him look mature. This review probably won't last published, because it's very rare that such a bad fiction has such a high rating [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Como diabos a hancock vai para o harem sendo que ela já conheceu o luffy de acordo com sinopse?
This story is like the movie Raid, action, battles, blood and iron... and it's damn cool! Especially considering that there is also a plot and it’s good
I'll be disappointed if u don't include Hancock in the harem after u put Hancock on the cover img.
First of all, I hope that the Author continues the Story and lets the critique I have sink in, so he can improve. To the strong points of the Story, the idea of the story is really interesting and something new. Sadly, that's it. Now to the things I will criticize, first is that his power is fluctuating. I understand that you want him to be strong, but with only level 36 to hurt a vice admiral or even Doflamingo but that not really Possible. Doflamingo is a physical and Mental powerhouse, he also has haki. Vice admirals learned the six powers, at least I think so. If that isn't truer, then ignore that. The idea of Haki is okay I guess, but you could just let him learn it from the Boa Hancock Pirates, they imbue their Arrows also with Haki. Next is the MC didn't really change much, that can change, but at least change one thing. Like rescuing Mr.2 or some impact on the Story. Which he had sadly not. Now comes the thing I, Personally, don't like is, that he is a sorcerer. It would be much more exciting for him to have been a Physical fighter. Because now he spams is sorcery and that's it. Please continue your Work, Author, but sadly, I can't read it anymore. Have a great day or night.
Hello, i just added this story to my collection, and im also a fan of Elder Ring, btw will Nami and Robin become Mc Wifes,? because from what i understand the timeline of this story is during Ace execution, and Marineford war
The stories good but the MC is an insufferable idiot who constantly makes stupid decidions and actions and acts all befgudled when his stupid actione don’t pan out. I don’t know if this is intentional, or the author really is just that bad at writing a character without help from another established one, but it drags the quality down whenever they’re the focus of a scene.
It's off to an interesting start, hopefully he'll be getting boss powers from the game. .............................................................................
Elden Ring and One piece ? a new word is needed to describe the level of peak that this combo is, i expect this to be one of the best fics here, i might edit my review later on.
Shameless Author 5* Review!!! Seriously though, If you liked the story, rate it, and invest some power stones in it! Help me improve my writing! also if you want support me on Patreon?
In more than 20 chapters the story is the same as the canon, the Mc is an irrelevant idiot of the peers what's in Webnovel the only thing he knows how to do is curse as if that made him look mature. This review probably won't last published, because it's very rare that such a bad fiction has such a high rating [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]