Hello I’m the guy who makes fics on surprisingly non findable things. I am also somehow the top supporter of my SCP fic despite not putting any powerstones in it.
2023-04-12 đã tham gia Global
TF does anything you typed even mean?
"I don't care about your grand designs! You can't play with people's lives like this! Undo the wish right now!" Sarah demanded, her emotions spiraling out of control.
Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
Actual Clone Wars series moment.
Wow, of course, it had to start now.
Movies · L0rds2278
When you can easily hyperdrive out of a battle through emergency cruisers or the hyperdrive fighters they have it isn’t that risky. Though it is rather stupid to do so.
In front of me stood General Tyr, Admiral Jaime, and Lord Commandant Alexander. All the 3 Military Oversight of the Veridian Military.
Movies · L0rds2278
The sheep still react when the cries of their infants torture is heard.
In fact, Lester went to prison entirely to take the blame for a son of a dignitary, and he was a poor scapegoat.
Movies · sabina_ali
It’s the Harry Potter universe, Harry Potter has plot armour. It being alternative dosen’t matter in that regard as their plot armour is derived from the prophecy, “One cannot live while the other survives.” In regards to Voldemort and Harry. And if we’re going into it being an AU then the author may do what most fanfics do with parseltongue and have it have extra stength with healing magic. Additionally we have the three Deathly Hollows. The objects which are only able to be collected by the Gaunt lineage, and when collected make you master of death. And even if being “Master of Death” dosen’t give any benefits having the invisibility cloak that no one can perceive, the elder wand and the ressurection stone sure would help. Not to mention that in his first year as Harry the MC could go after the Philosopher Stone.
"Harry Potter... Steal his body... Make it your own..." the voice echoed before disappearing altogether.
Book&Literature · Xcalibur_Xc
Parseltongue, and plot armour.
"Harry Potter... Steal his body... Make it your own..." the voice echoed before disappearing altogether.
Book&Literature · Xcalibur_Xc
NO, the Ctan
He saw visions. Terrifying visions of an ancient civilization whose people lived and breathed the craft of death and dark magic, the embodiment of undeath itself. It showed him its secrets, the rise and fall of such people, the extinction of the gods, and the dawning of a new era for humanity. The source of life and death magic and beyond.
Book&Literature · Xcalibur_Xc
[HOW LONG ARE YOU GOING TO EAT HUMAN FOOD, RYAN?]
Book&Literature · Xcalibur_Xc
I didn’t enjoy this pargraph when I read it. Hence why I’ve commented about it. I’m not thinking deep when I say this paragraph made me feel like a toddler whos being read a bedtime story with how basic bland and the lack of substance it has. The simple fact that I got confused at first when I read it because of the sudden drop of quality compared to the earlier descriptions was jarring. I more commented to suggest to you alternatives to improve your writing.
Since there was a car to take them to school, Peter and Gwen naturally would not walk to school. They opened the door and got into the police car.
Anime & Comics · Ravinder_Singh_807
Does the gem work in different universes?
[Scientific Gem: A gem condensed from scientific power. It is above the six Marvel gems and can provide the host with wisdom far beyond that of ordinary people. There is a chance that the host will have a flash of inspiration and create something very scientific in a unscientific way. It can absorb the energy of the six gems, and each time it absorbs one, it can gain related abilities.]
Anime & Comics · Ravinder_Singh_807
Just gonna point out this sentence feals a little unnatural. Have them agree in dialogue or say a “thanks” before transitioning. Pointing out the obvious like they didn’t need to walk with a car and since they didn’t have one they agreed feels long and unnecessary.
Since there was a car to take them to school, Peter and Gwen naturally would not walk to school. They opened the door and got into the police car.
Anime & Comics · Ravinder_Singh_807
Before I get a “Next line explains it bozo”, I know dipsh*t, you think I can’t go back to delete this?
"You have been asleep for 2 days" She said after a deep silence. Causing Suzaku's eyes to widen like platters.
Anime & Comics · The_Synonym
No that’s physical. If my physical body is doomed to shut down and die 10-20 years earlier that’s physical harm, regardless if the cause of it is spiritual.
'I'll skip the fact that I use my magic to increase cell division therefore cutting a bit of their lifespan for the more deadly wounds. I gotta love mundane medicine books. And my beautiful enhanced brain. I learned how to heal just about anything IF it is caused by my magic. Since I caused the wound, I can easily manipulate it to close and heal.
Anime & Comics · Alcoholic_Panda
Is it just me or did the dialogue suddenly bottom out in quality? Why is the grammar at a noticably worse level between the UA staff when it was good earlier?
"Alright, alright. I get that you are happy, Vlad King. But we must continue checking the rest of the students" Nezu reminded him. Causing the blood hero to bow as he scratched embarrassedly the back of his head.
Anime & Comics · The_Synonym
What? Did he inhale the entire exhaust of a coal plant?
"You have been asleep for 2 days" She said after a deep silence. Causing Suzaku's eyes to widen like platters.
Anime & Comics · The_Synonym
That makes more sense thanks.
Title: It's my mom
Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
Movies · Ax_nevermay_cry