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the story and the writing is good, but before you read this story, you need to know that it's a very slow and a very info dump ( 75% of chapter ). this it's a major default of this story, not for the building of the story but for the quality time of the reader. because the author want to explain the development of the mc but hidding his full power for his hidden agenda. you will read the over development of his allie. ( with all the chapter more than 60% of the writing it's monologue or explaination of trainning and development of his friends ). even in figthing, the monologue and explaination broke the hype of action. maybe this will change in the future when all the background and the base of the story will be writing. but you need to know that for this fanfiction you will read more about other perso than the mc
Probably the best story I’ve written so far, lol. Before you even open the book, check its auxiliary volume at the beginning. Read it. Read it so you'll know what to expect and won’t anticipate anything you shouldn't—like harems, systems, etc. Otherwise, enjoy your ride, traveler!
started off strong and went down to harem trash reeaaaal quick. it was fascinating to watch. yui I could understand. setsuna, a bit iffy but why not. then TOGA? hoping the story will come back the original quirk theory and awesome fights that I used to love.
Easily one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. There is no character development but that's fine as it just blows you away with the plot. Very realistic and just makes sense. 100% recommend to check out!
Honestly just a really solid well written fic so far, chapters are long (I love that) and the characters are realistic and behave as they should normally, no janky characterization here. Plus I’m super pumped to see how the MC can take such a basic side-character esque quirk to make it all-might levels of strength
4/5/2/4/5 Good story with a compelling MC and an interesting application of the MC's quirk that had me hooked and enamored with this story in the early chapters, but it takes a sharp nosedive after the plot hard stalls. I wouldn't mind slow pacing/slice-of-life style stuff if we actually had important character moments happening, but instead what the latter half of this volume comprises of is a blur of quirk analysis and training of side characters. Any meaningful moments are sandwiched between layers and layers of unnecessary, unimportant, padding.
Peak Fan fic with incredible realistic conversations with characters as well as a HUGE and interesting description of quirks and how to truly use them Did I forget to say that the chapter's length are longer than your usual fic? And what do I hear? No harem? in MHA? PEAK
love the story the author is actually building a character here not just some super OP mc who can finish the story in 10 chapters
Best MHA fic i've ever read. Especially good is the fact of harem's absence. Characters feels real. Story develops in an interesting way. Recommended for reading.
I always thought that quirks that can bend natural laws of nature like new order, rewind, and Our mc's twin impact has potential to become most powerful so I am all for it. This Fic also has great storytelling and character building. Highly recommended to those looking at reviews before starting.
One of the best works on MHA. Although the development is a little slow, but this is compensated by the maximum full disclosure of the world.
I read the original work but didn’t have much time to actually indulge in the story(that’s why I didn’t actually finish reading it). As far as I remember, the story is very well written and gives a lot of depth to the characters that are ultimately ignored in the original story. It has a few objectionable points, but, overall, the story is amazing.
Unbelievable that this story is not topping every single list. Best (relatively) most realistic ff. Best character work, great world building. Best non-cannon bashing. This is the best Mhalaxmi fr I have read. Please don’t make all might a dumb brute. He should know every single thing about heroism. He should have mastered the art of presence and conversation. I best he has professional certification in hostage negotiation. And has done things like memorising city maps. I hope mc could have used his dad’s fire fighter connection to become skilled in all the things they train I am pretty sure that was a huge missed opportunity to improve his competence. And mathroshka girl not using guns is criminal. I am pretty sure BB guns & airsoft are not banned. Images her shooting a .22 & expanding it to 20mm or artillery rounds. And where is the air going when she suddenly expands or contracts things. Absolutely negative pressure and positive pressure must create explosions. ( imagine snuggly opening a pressure cooker or breaking a vacuum chamber)
the story and the writing is good, but before you read this story, you need to know that it's a very slow and a very info dump ( 75% of chapter ). this it's a major default of this story, not for the building of the story but for the quality time of the reader. because the author want to explain the development of the mc but hidding his full power for his hidden agenda. you will read the over development of his allie. ( with all the chapter more than 60% of the writing it's monologue or explaination of trainning and development of his friends ). even in figthing, the monologue and explaination broke the hype of action. maybe this will change in the future when all the background and the base of the story will be writing. but you need to know that for this fanfiction you will read more about other perso than the mc
Probably the best story I’ve written so far, lol. Before you even open the book, check its auxiliary volume at the beginning. Read it. Read it so you'll know what to expect and won’t anticipate anything you shouldn't—like harems, systems, etc. Otherwise, enjoy your ride, traveler!
started off strong and went down to harem trash reeaaaal quick. it was fascinating to watch. yui I could understand. setsuna, a bit iffy but why not. then TOGA? hoping the story will come back the original quirk theory and awesome fights that I used to love.
Easily one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. There is no character development but that's fine as it just blows you away with the plot. Very realistic and just makes sense. 100% recommend to check out!
Honestly just a really solid well written fic so far, chapters are long (I love that) and the characters are realistic and behave as they should normally, no janky characterization here. Plus I’m super pumped to see how the MC can take such a basic side-character esque quirk to make it all-might levels of strength
4/5/2/4/5 Good story with a compelling MC and an interesting application of the MC's quirk that had me hooked and enamored with this story in the early chapters, but it takes a sharp nosedive after the plot hard stalls. I wouldn't mind slow pacing/slice-of-life style stuff if we actually had important character moments happening, but instead what the latter half of this volume comprises of is a blur of quirk analysis and training of side characters. Any meaningful moments are sandwiched between layers and layers of unnecessary, unimportant, padding.
Peak Fan fic with incredible realistic conversations with characters as well as a HUGE and interesting description of quirks and how to truly use them Did I forget to say that the chapter's length are longer than your usual fic? And what do I hear? No harem? in MHA? PEAK
love the story the author is actually building a character here not just some super OP mc who can finish the story in 10 chapters
Best MHA fic i've ever read. Especially good is the fact of harem's absence. Characters feels real. Story develops in an interesting way. Recommended for reading.
I always thought that quirks that can bend natural laws of nature like new order, rewind, and Our mc's twin impact has potential to become most powerful so I am all for it. This Fic also has great storytelling and character building. Highly recommended to those looking at reviews before starting.
One of the best works on MHA. Although the development is a little slow, but this is compensated by the maximum full disclosure of the world.
I read the original work but didn’t have much time to actually indulge in the story(that’s why I didn’t actually finish reading it). As far as I remember, the story is very well written and gives a lot of depth to the characters that are ultimately ignored in the original story. It has a few objectionable points, but, overall, the story is amazing.
Unbelievable that this story is not topping every single list. Best (relatively) most realistic ff. Best character work, great world building. Best non-cannon bashing. This is the best Mhalaxmi fr I have read. Please don’t make all might a dumb brute. He should know every single thing about heroism. He should have mastered the art of presence and conversation. I best he has professional certification in hostage negotiation. And has done things like memorising city maps. I hope mc could have used his dad’s fire fighter connection to become skilled in all the things they train I am pretty sure that was a huge missed opportunity to improve his competence. And mathroshka girl not using guns is criminal. I am pretty sure BB guns & airsoft are not banned. Images her shooting a .22 & expanding it to 20mm or artillery rounds. And where is the air going when she suddenly expands or contracts things. Absolutely negative pressure and positive pressure must create explosions. ( imagine snuggly opening a pressure cooker or breaking a vacuum chamber)