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Never read a shadow slave fanfic but this was surprisingly interesting. I’m considering reading shadow slave which I dropped before. Anyways, I have to offer my praise to the author for such splendid writing. Also question. Will you be writing another story once you complete this one?
writing quality is really good and it's a very unique take on the shadow slave fan fic. 10/10
My experience until the end of Forgotten Shores,an MC who at first seemed normal and experienced in the story until the current chapters after the 3rd nightmare of Shadow Slave,but this quickly becomes unpleasant because the MC gains darkness (same as Daemon) and he basically acts like a Megalomaniac Edgelord,he literally divides people into Existences and "Non-existence" the latter being people who are lambs who follow other people's desires. He acts all powerful because he "knows" the future and that he will not follow the main story because he has his own path,but he continues to join the original characters but is disgusted by Nephis' actions of "taking advantage" of the residents of FS,not to mention the incredible coincidence of him always being near things involved with the Nether, or easily gaining memories and echoes,or even the aspect legacy that apparently involves Chaos. To be honest, it had potential but the author went down the Edgelord path where everything below the MC is either belittled or taken advantage of.Consider this a Power Trip or Wish Fulfillment, because outside of following the main story the few things added are that. Seriously, the way the story goes, it wouldn't impress me if he suddenly considered the entire world to be NPCs and thought he was a God, since he already said that the worship of Nephis by the residents of FS,"It's disgusting "and they give up their will to act with someone else's and say "This is how the Supremes see humanity?"
This is genuinely the best shadow slave fanfic I have ever read and the writing is very similar to the original and the main character is pretty cool.
Can’t describe how much I love this. Please never stop updating this. your work is amazing and you’re battle scenes are just perfect👍
This fanfic is absolutely amazing and undoubtedly the best shadow slave fanfic, I love this so much and the updates are also so fast. If you're reading this review to decide whether to read or not then stop hesitating and just read it I absolutely love it and i think you will too
Thank you author for writing this masterpiece🤌 Please try to launch some chapter combos every now and then......🙈🙊🤍....................................................
I'm not good at writing reviews but I really love this one, good lore and characters...
Unadulterated peak throughout. I love the writing and dialogue and I ESPECIALLY love the mc, literally the perfect character. Give this a try you won't regret it.
This is the best Shadow Slave fanfic that I have ever read, so if you like Shadow Slave be sure to give this one a read. It is awesome and very inspiring. Just wow, great work.
Its really good and it's one of the best shadow slave fanfics i have ever read. Keep on the good work and please don't drop it like the other shadow slave fanfics are usually dropped.
A rare gem among the trash heap that is shadow slave fanfiction. Worth the read, good pacing which keeps the story separate enough from canon. Hope the current update schedule keeps up.
This is really good!! really maintains each characters personality while adding individuality to the MC and seamlessly inserting him into the story love his powerset as well, can't wait to read more
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It's great. MC isn't simp, weirdo or any diabolical stuff other authors like to make. MC has creative power with advantages and disadvantages. Not like others when MC is overpowered and is killing Corrupted terrors in first nightmare. There's no harem which is just great. MC has clear goals and doesn't sucks up to main cast. In overrall it's great so keep up.
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This is a beautiful fanfic, the MC doesn't suck up to the other main characters, he has a clear goal and his powers are unique and creative. The author is not short on imagination or writing quality, plus the suspense and the MC not always being lucky but also having his fair share of problems like SS MC is something I really like of this FF. What I like the most is the author's way of writing that makes it seem as if I really am reading SS.
A real good fanfic of shadow slave. I just hope it doesn't follow in on those other fanfics that just die out after 25-30 chapters. All things considered however the story is certainly good, entertaining even.
It’s pretty great. The writing is amazing, the grammer and spelling are flawless. My only complaints mainly have to do with the content of the fanfic and not stuff like writing or spelling. Let’s start with the MC. Good ole basic reincarnation into a teenagers body, orphanage blah blah blah. Nothing new but that’s fine. Then we get to his powers… He is essentially Sunny 2.0. Yeah it’s kind of different but not really. I personally would have liked to see something other than darkness abilities but it’s not a deal breaker for me. The mc’s personality is okay, nothing to write home about. Then we have the pacing. Overall I’d say it’s not bad, however I do feel that there are a lot of time skips, like 30 days or 60 days that feel a little out of place. If there was just a bit more time or a few more paragraphs of what the mc went through during those time skips It would be fine. Basically, it has a fast pace, which isn’t bad, it just needs to be toned down a tiny bit more for my liking personally. Lastly we have the lead characters. Unfortunately, as of chapter 23, the mc hasn’t interacted with any and I mean literally any character from the original story. He has seen them, and had a bit of a staring contest, but that’s it. Having a fanfic mc that’s does his own thing is fine, but the whole essence of a fanfic in my opinion is to interact with lead characters and change some parts of the story because of it. And so far, that hasn’t happened. Overall though, it’s an amazing fanfiction. Even if none of my complaints are addressed I’ll still continue reading and enjoying the story im sure. I’ll be gladly looking forward to the future of this fic. I swear every Shadow Slave fanfiction I read gets dropped… I hope that isn’t the case for this one as it’s truly the best I’ve read.
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It’s a shadow slave fanfic and 90% of them a great so is this if you liked shadow slave you will definitely like this hope this makes it past awakening
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Good up until recent chapters. Fanfic dramatically fell off after the Forgotten Shore, and even then it’s not unreadable, but the author posts like one chapter a month, so there’s just no point in reading when you don’t remember anything about the story.
Never read a shadow slave fanfic but this was surprisingly interesting. I’m considering reading shadow slave which I dropped before. Anyways, I have to offer my praise to the author for such splendid writing. Also question. Will you be writing another story once you complete this one?
writing quality is really good and it's a very unique take on the shadow slave fan fic. 10/10
My experience until the end of Forgotten Shores,an MC who at first seemed normal and experienced in the story until the current chapters after the 3rd nightmare of Shadow Slave,but this quickly becomes unpleasant because the MC gains darkness (same as Daemon) and he basically acts like a Megalomaniac Edgelord,he literally divides people into Existences and "Non-existence" the latter being people who are lambs who follow other people's desires. He acts all powerful because he "knows" the future and that he will not follow the main story because he has his own path,but he continues to join the original characters but is disgusted by Nephis' actions of "taking advantage" of the residents of FS,not to mention the incredible coincidence of him always being near things involved with the Nether, or easily gaining memories and echoes,or even the aspect legacy that apparently involves Chaos. To be honest, it had potential but the author went down the Edgelord path where everything below the MC is either belittled or taken advantage of.Consider this a Power Trip or Wish Fulfillment, because outside of following the main story the few things added are that. Seriously, the way the story goes, it wouldn't impress me if he suddenly considered the entire world to be NPCs and thought he was a God, since he already said that the worship of Nephis by the residents of FS,"It's disgusting "and they give up their will to act with someone else's and say "This is how the Supremes see humanity?"
This is genuinely the best shadow slave fanfic I have ever read and the writing is very similar to the original and the main character is pretty cool.
Can’t describe how much I love this. Please never stop updating this. your work is amazing and you’re battle scenes are just perfect👍
This fanfic is absolutely amazing and undoubtedly the best shadow slave fanfic, I love this so much and the updates are also so fast. If you're reading this review to decide whether to read or not then stop hesitating and just read it I absolutely love it and i think you will too
Thank you author for writing this masterpiece🤌 Please try to launch some chapter combos every now and then......🙈🙊🤍....................................................
I'm not good at writing reviews but I really love this one, good lore and characters...
Unadulterated peak throughout. I love the writing and dialogue and I ESPECIALLY love the mc, literally the perfect character. Give this a try you won't regret it.
This is the best Shadow Slave fanfic that I have ever read, so if you like Shadow Slave be sure to give this one a read. It is awesome and very inspiring. Just wow, great work.
Its really good and it's one of the best shadow slave fanfics i have ever read. Keep on the good work and please don't drop it like the other shadow slave fanfics are usually dropped.
A rare gem among the trash heap that is shadow slave fanfiction. Worth the read, good pacing which keeps the story separate enough from canon. Hope the current update schedule keeps up.
This is really good!! really maintains each characters personality while adding individuality to the MC and seamlessly inserting him into the story love his powerset as well, can't wait to read more
Good keep going ,good keep going Good keep going !! Good keep going ,good keep going Good keep going !! Good keep going ,good keep going Good keep going !! Good keep going ,good keep going Good keep going !!
It's great. MC isn't simp, weirdo or any diabolical stuff other authors like to make. MC has creative power with advantages and disadvantages. Not like others when MC is overpowered and is killing Corrupted terrors in first nightmare. There's no harem which is just great. MC has clear goals and doesn't sucks up to main cast. In overrall it's great so keep up.
Goood very goood ,keep going !!!!!!!! Goood very goood ,keep going !!!!!!!! Goood very goood ,keep going !!!!!!!! Goood very goood ,keep going !!!!!!!! Goood very goood ,keep going !!!!!!!!
This is a beautiful fanfic, the MC doesn't suck up to the other main characters, he has a clear goal and his powers are unique and creative. The author is not short on imagination or writing quality, plus the suspense and the MC not always being lucky but also having his fair share of problems like SS MC is something I really like of this FF. What I like the most is the author's way of writing that makes it seem as if I really am reading SS.
A real good fanfic of shadow slave. I just hope it doesn't follow in on those other fanfics that just die out after 25-30 chapters. All things considered however the story is certainly good, entertaining even.
It’s pretty great. The writing is amazing, the grammer and spelling are flawless. My only complaints mainly have to do with the content of the fanfic and not stuff like writing or spelling. Let’s start with the MC. Good ole basic reincarnation into a teenagers body, orphanage blah blah blah. Nothing new but that’s fine. Then we get to his powers… He is essentially Sunny 2.0. Yeah it’s kind of different but not really. I personally would have liked to see something other than darkness abilities but it’s not a deal breaker for me. The mc’s personality is okay, nothing to write home about. Then we have the pacing. Overall I’d say it’s not bad, however I do feel that there are a lot of time skips, like 30 days or 60 days that feel a little out of place. If there was just a bit more time or a few more paragraphs of what the mc went through during those time skips It would be fine. Basically, it has a fast pace, which isn’t bad, it just needs to be toned down a tiny bit more for my liking personally. Lastly we have the lead characters. Unfortunately, as of chapter 23, the mc hasn’t interacted with any and I mean literally any character from the original story. He has seen them, and had a bit of a staring contest, but that’s it. Having a fanfic mc that’s does his own thing is fine, but the whole essence of a fanfic in my opinion is to interact with lead characters and change some parts of the story because of it. And so far, that hasn’t happened. Overall though, it’s an amazing fanfiction. Even if none of my complaints are addressed I’ll still continue reading and enjoying the story im sure. I’ll be gladly looking forward to the future of this fic. I swear every Shadow Slave fanfiction I read gets dropped… I hope that isn’t the case for this one as it’s truly the best I’ve read.
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It’s a shadow slave fanfic and 90% of them a great so is this if you liked shadow slave you will definitely like this hope this makes it past awakening
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Good up until recent chapters. Fanfic dramatically fell off after the Forgotten Shore, and even then it’s not unreadable, but the author posts like one chapter a month, so there’s just no point in reading when you don’t remember anything about the story.