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This is an amazing story and my favorite naruto fanfiction, I hope you don't drop this and I'll be really happy if you could recommend similar stories
Excelente no deja de encantarme hasta el momento, ahora que lo pienso como reaccionara tobirama, cuando vea el modo mokuton de Mc, si es que llega a aparecer bueno sera de ver y esperar
Very good nothing else to say just very good I have neem reading this book since it had like 10 chapters and I still read it very very good keep it up author!
I’ve been following this fic for a while, and I have to say it’s a masterpiece. It’s perfect to the very last detail. It feels good to be born at a time when I get to read it.
The work is obviously of , the story is well-developed. The translation is... It's extremely bad. It's practically equivalent to machine translation via Google Translate
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There comes a point where all you need to do is read the chapter titles to know more or less how this goes. It's pulling that deeply from a certain genre that there is no suspense. As a translation though, this is A+
It's rare for me to give 5 stars review but this story definitely deserve it. Good Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
give 5star bcos i was satisfied at the story and having fun reading it. thanks for the story!
A very good fanfic, the only drawback is the unnecessary delay to upgrade the MC's eyes to mangekyo.
I'm quite impressed with this author ( Chinese author) ( never happened before for a fanfic) The story was extremely satisfying - 1. Danzo's dead at right time 2. hokage's death at right time 3. this all happened before uchiha massacre 4. it didn't feel weird in anyway, story was smooth and interesting. 5. revealed hokage's seven deadly sins ( crime ) and published it 👍 6. Itachi's outcome was satisfying ( of course he joined AKATSUKI but it was to redeem himself for raising the blade against his own family) 7. MC compares many things to the real world ( memes, jokes etc.) mentioned Russian as well - I'm not Russian but i like this comparison most somehow. - still this wasn't annoying at all , story was smooth 8. MC doesn't hide his talent 👍( but didn't mentioned his system) 9. MC has a clear mind, his thoughts are clear and explained properly but briefly. 10. The author seems knowledgeable enough. 11. i can't really find any problems and that's my inner problem. even in power level and MC's progress. 12. of course lack of chapter is a issue but guys is posting them quickly. if it's slow we might lose the touch 13. it's lacking a bit of something but i can't figure it out. only conclusion is i need more of it . because the fun was short ( too short for me)
Way too OP MC and the MC is too Young, personally if the author starts with the character being older then having the life simulator work for once a week the the progress would feel more natural as we could see the growth.
Overally, mid story. If you have free evening, give it a read. But don't expect too much of it. Story is pretty... Well... Let's just say it's same thing, in just new wrapping. MC is slave of system, quite literally. But. Writting quality, is not that bad. It is decent translation of terrible novel.
This fic might not be a masterpiece without flaws but it certainly is one of the best naruto fics ever written and translated. hats off to the translator for consistenly translating this into perfectly readable english.honestly only the original authors chinese vibes makes it recognizable as a chinese novel otherwise it almost seems like originally written fic .keep up the great work!!:)
Stop focusing on a small group of ppl that leave negative reviews….. Most of us here love this story ❤️
Thanks for the chapter, this no el is very good, i need more chapters. I reed the all novel in 2 days. The system is no very present bat is ok.
Tiết lộ Spoiler
Overall this novel is one the better ones. Power leveing is a little fast at the beginning but MC can still die every other simulations which maintain the stakes. Pacing is good and doesn’t get stuck too much on any one arc. Nothing annoying about the MC.
It's a good read but mc goes around telling important characters their past and feature then it gets boring and the way mc mentions it is cringe 😬. And the biggest problem in this fanfic is the age of mc Man he is stronger then most of the Kage at just 7 years, and the story is extremely slow like just 1 year passed in 100 chapters so u can guess how slow it is and most of the story is in stimulation and very less is written out of it .
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fun system, fun mc, and good pacing. very little to no Chinese propaganda. there is a lot of nerf comments but I only sigh in confusion, the autbor has explained the mc initial problems due to talent and how the mc overcomes this with simulator efforts but bah. good novel.
To be honest, I didn't really want to review this fanfic, but because of how the translator reacted to some of the reviews, I'll review this fanfic. The quality of translation is good (at least for me). For the story, it's a mix of somewhat in-depth naruto story with a little bit added xianxia with chinese mc that's a bit too patriotic. The update schedule is similar to other translation fanfic. it's okay, but for some, the reading experience will be like swallowing your throw up back into your mouth, so beware for readers who don't like chinese related things in naruto story. note: this fanfic is supposed to be rated 4.2, but because I don't like the translator, it'll become 3.4.
About this fanfic, from the first time I read this fanfic when it first uploaded more than a week ago, I already knew that the thing that's gonna be the main complaints of a lot of people is the MC's abysmal talent. It's important to note that this Fic is a Life Simulator System fic, one of the many subgenre of the more usual System fic. And like most other Life simulator fics, the author will have to impose a restriction upon the mechanics of the system, usually by limiting the times of possible simulation, simulation rewards, limiting the MC's talent so that he can only grow with simulation rewards, etc. This is important thing that's necessary to be done so that an actual story could take place, without restrictions to the Simulator System the MC could possibly spends time training for thousands of years in just a matter of 1 real time years. This would trivialize everything and destroy any hope of writing an action or adventure type story because the MC became so strong that nothing would matter. This of course did not matter if it's intended to be more focused on a slice of life or even a story that revolves around the side characters more than the MC, like Onepunch-Man for example. But it's clear that's not what this story specifically intended to be. So, with all that been said, it's a good fanfic in my opinion, is it a masterpiece without flaw? No it is not. But is it good enough that it can be enjoyable despite the flaw? I certainly think it is.
This is an amazing story and my favorite naruto fanfiction, I hope you don't drop this and I'll be really happy if you could recommend similar stories
Excelente no deja de encantarme hasta el momento, ahora que lo pienso como reaccionara tobirama, cuando vea el modo mokuton de Mc, si es que llega a aparecer bueno sera de ver y esperar
Very good nothing else to say just very good I have neem reading this book since it had like 10 chapters and I still read it very very good keep it up author!
I’ve been following this fic for a while, and I have to say it’s a masterpiece. It’s perfect to the very last detail. It feels good to be born at a time when I get to read it.
The work is obviously of , the story is well-developed. The translation is... It's extremely bad. It's practically equivalent to machine translation via Google Translate
one of the best naruto fanfic i've ever read one of the best naruto fanfic i've ever read one of the best naruto fanfic i've ever read one of the best naruto fanfic i've ever read one of the best naruto fanfic i've ever read one of the best naruto fanfic i've ever read
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There comes a point where all you need to do is read the chapter titles to know more or less how this goes. It's pulling that deeply from a certain genre that there is no suspense. As a translation though, this is A+
It's rare for me to give 5 stars review but this story definitely deserve it. Good Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
give 5star bcos i was satisfied at the story and having fun reading it. thanks for the story!
A very good fanfic, the only drawback is the unnecessary delay to upgrade the MC's eyes to mangekyo.
I'm quite impressed with this author ( Chinese author) ( never happened before for a fanfic) The story was extremely satisfying - 1. Danzo's dead at right time 2. hokage's death at right time 3. this all happened before uchiha massacre 4. it didn't feel weird in anyway, story was smooth and interesting. 5. revealed hokage's seven deadly sins ( crime ) and published it 👍 6. Itachi's outcome was satisfying ( of course he joined AKATSUKI but it was to redeem himself for raising the blade against his own family) 7. MC compares many things to the real world ( memes, jokes etc.) mentioned Russian as well - I'm not Russian but i like this comparison most somehow. - still this wasn't annoying at all , story was smooth 8. MC doesn't hide his talent 👍( but didn't mentioned his system) 9. MC has a clear mind, his thoughts are clear and explained properly but briefly. 10. The author seems knowledgeable enough. 11. i can't really find any problems and that's my inner problem. even in power level and MC's progress. 12. of course lack of chapter is a issue but guys is posting them quickly. if it's slow we might lose the touch 13. it's lacking a bit of something but i can't figure it out. only conclusion is i need more of it . because the fun was short ( too short for me)
Way too OP MC and the MC is too Young, personally if the author starts with the character being older then having the life simulator work for once a week the the progress would feel more natural as we could see the growth.
Overally, mid story. If you have free evening, give it a read. But don't expect too much of it. Story is pretty... Well... Let's just say it's same thing, in just new wrapping. MC is slave of system, quite literally. But. Writting quality, is not that bad. It is decent translation of terrible novel.
This fic might not be a masterpiece without flaws but it certainly is one of the best naruto fics ever written and translated. hats off to the translator for consistenly translating this into perfectly readable english.honestly only the original authors chinese vibes makes it recognizable as a chinese novel otherwise it almost seems like originally written fic .keep up the great work!!:)
Stop focusing on a small group of ppl that leave negative reviews….. Most of us here love this story ❤️
Thanks for the chapter, this no el is very good, i need more chapters. I reed the all novel in 2 days. The system is no very present bat is ok.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Overall this novel is one the better ones. Power leveing is a little fast at the beginning but MC can still die every other simulations which maintain the stakes. Pacing is good and doesn’t get stuck too much on any one arc. Nothing annoying about the MC.
It's a good read but mc goes around telling important characters their past and feature then it gets boring and the way mc mentions it is cringe 😬. And the biggest problem in this fanfic is the age of mc Man he is stronger then most of the Kage at just 7 years, and the story is extremely slow like just 1 year passed in 100 chapters so u can guess how slow it is and most of the story is in stimulation and very less is written out of it .
Nice👍 Need more chapter Djdidjdidhdkdjdiekdhejsjdhddjdjdjsjdkskskjssjjssjsisjdhdjdjdjsjjseiiejddjdjsjkskdjddkkdjdjdjdjdkdjduddjjdjdjdjdjdkdjdjdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkd
fun system, fun mc, and good pacing. very little to no Chinese propaganda. there is a lot of nerf comments but I only sigh in confusion, the autbor has explained the mc initial problems due to talent and how the mc overcomes this with simulator efforts but bah. good novel.
To be honest, I didn't really want to review this fanfic, but because of how the translator reacted to some of the reviews, I'll review this fanfic. The quality of translation is good (at least for me). For the story, it's a mix of somewhat in-depth naruto story with a little bit added xianxia with chinese mc that's a bit too patriotic. The update schedule is similar to other translation fanfic. it's okay, but for some, the reading experience will be like swallowing your throw up back into your mouth, so beware for readers who don't like chinese related things in naruto story. note: this fanfic is supposed to be rated 4.2, but because I don't like the translator, it'll become 3.4.
About this fanfic, from the first time I read this fanfic when it first uploaded more than a week ago, I already knew that the thing that's gonna be the main complaints of a lot of people is the MC's abysmal talent. It's important to note that this Fic is a Life Simulator System fic, one of the many subgenre of the more usual System fic. And like most other Life simulator fics, the author will have to impose a restriction upon the mechanics of the system, usually by limiting the times of possible simulation, simulation rewards, limiting the MC's talent so that he can only grow with simulation rewards, etc. This is important thing that's necessary to be done so that an actual story could take place, without restrictions to the Simulator System the MC could possibly spends time training for thousands of years in just a matter of 1 real time years. This would trivialize everything and destroy any hope of writing an action or adventure type story because the MC became so strong that nothing would matter. This of course did not matter if it's intended to be more focused on a slice of life or even a story that revolves around the side characters more than the MC, like Onepunch-Man for example. But it's clear that's not what this story specifically intended to be. So, with all that been said, it's a good fanfic in my opinion, is it a masterpiece without flaw? No it is not. But is it good enough that it can be enjoyable despite the flaw? I certainly think it is.