Take my stones
in three days i will be uploading regularly again.
Anime & Comics · alex02373
It would be a better explanation to say its an animal zetsu
(Author's note: So basically, how Observation Haki works (Based on the one-piece Wiki) is that the user will sense his opponent's intent and predict his attack based on it. That is why Momonga couldn't sense Wilson coming at him because even though he looks like a human, he is still a gorilla.)
Anime & Comics · Wicked132
I have exams next week as well Good luck sir
ch 76 Announcement
Video Games · Remoon
Sorry to hear you are getting writers block. maybe you need more conflicts for tayaw. you already had realistic push back in the ealier phases but woth how powerful he is now maybe you cna go into supernatural conflicts. Antognists are good for making the character shine. maybe someone smart tring to ruin him or a creature that goes after his view points.
ch 241 Attachments
Urban · Intayaw_din_Dagem
Do you have any questions about Uni? I went to an american One if you want a q and a
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Anime & Comics · Paradox_
Been waiting for the movie reveal Cant wait for it to show up on scene I will give you all my power stones and all my free passes siR
ch 91 Professional Analysis of Workplace Systems
Urban · Intayaw_din_Dagem
I enjoyed the novel. Sorry to hear about the haters. I liked the intimacy and the romance. i want to say he got too strong to fast but thats normal for a fanfic and Overall still enjoyed it. now im sad to hear We are going to miSs out on entire saGa
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Movies · I_am_potato_lord
Sad to hear about that But im haooy yonhear i can get even more
ch 84 Finality of Film Production (Please read my note at the bottom)
Urban · Intayaw_din_Dagem
Thats good. It is a good place to stop. i appreciate your hard work and really enjoy your work so far. just dont want it to get too complicated which will make it hard for both you and us
ch 42 The Perfect Host
Anime & Comics · Anubis_Creationz
Thanks for the hardwarok
ch 99 Chapter 27 : Dodgeball
Anime & Comics · Otaku_king
Im sticking with you DOnt giVe up
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Anime & Comics · Otaku_king
Overall I’ll say this is pretty good. There’s a healthy dose of world building beyond the series which adds depth and prevents the story from being stagnant. Writing is also solid but not like I’m a writer but as a reader of many fanfics, the 20 chapters flew by pretty fast. There is a bit of repetition that can be addressed. Rather than say he isn’t open to other characters because he doesn’t know they’re authentic you can phrase it in different contexts. It works but it gets stale if you say it 3+ times the same way. Maybe a bit of consistency in direction would help. Either he’s transmigrating abusing knowledge or he’s a 13 year old out of his depths.
Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
TV · Nathe07