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Viết đánh giáThe concept is good and the author is ambitious. Probably would help to research animals and creatures from time periods at the story progress'. Short chapters so far but saving it in library for updates. Keep it up Author
Really great start overall. Been looking for a good monsterverse book and the fact that the mc is just an intelligent snake rather than a transmigrater or reincarnator is also a big plus. Thank you author for the read and please update soon thx
Loving the story so far! great concept! i love that it starts all the way back in the stone age so we get to see his complete growth! There's also plenty of room for him to encounter other titans and solidify his position in the food chain. we haven't discovered his abilities yet besides rapid growth and Echolocation. Would be interesting to see if he has venom or any other power.
So this is how the novel is right now. Writing quality: 5.0 Few grammar and spelling mistakes if any at all. Story Development: 4.0 While reading I don't get bored at all, but the story isn't big enough to earn more points in that area. Character design: 3.0 As I said earlier, the story hasn't given enough details about it's characters for me to give any more points. Updating stability: 4.0 At the moment it has been only four days since he last updated, so I can't say that the story is dropped or that it is inconsistent or slow. World background: 5.0 For now, since the world is the Monster Verse and he hasn't shown much in the two chapters I have read.
The concept is good and the author is ambitious. Probably would help to research animals and creatures from time periods at the story progress'. Short chapters so far but saving it in library for updates. Keep it up Author
Really great start overall. Been looking for a good monsterverse book and the fact that the mc is just an intelligent snake rather than a transmigrater or reincarnator is also a big plus. Thank you author for the read and please update soon thx
Loving the story so far! great concept! i love that it starts all the way back in the stone age so we get to see his complete growth! There's also plenty of room for him to encounter other titans and solidify his position in the food chain. we haven't discovered his abilities yet besides rapid growth and Echolocation. Would be interesting to see if he has venom or any other power.
So this is how the novel is right now. Writing quality: 5.0 Few grammar and spelling mistakes if any at all. Story Development: 4.0 While reading I don't get bored at all, but the story isn't big enough to earn more points in that area. Character design: 3.0 As I said earlier, the story hasn't given enough details about it's characters for me to give any more points. Updating stability: 4.0 At the moment it has been only four days since he last updated, so I can't say that the story is dropped or that it is inconsistent or slow. World background: 5.0 For now, since the world is the Monster Verse and he hasn't shown much in the two chapters I have read.
A very promising beginining l hope it meet the expectations.