LoserIam

chill out, some readers just enter a phase in which they enjoy certain types of books or web novels or fanfictions like edgy or harem ones that are mostly on webnovel.

This story had potential and it still does, but the constant confusion of names is annoying as fuck, author is constantly changing the names and by extension, genders of his characters... I'll be honest this review is a little subjective/ biased, I'm frustrated by how Peter's spiderman identity is hardly secret, plenty of people know which is pretty annoying, his encounter with Helen is also maddening, I'm not angry that he lost or anything, but his alien reproducing???? And being ingested by her to strengthen her afterwards? I sincerely hope my review is hasty and that you have some plans in mind. Anyway lets get on with the usual... Writing quality: 3.0 Surprisingly good for a webnovel fanfic, doesn't feel like chat gpt nor is it written by a stupid 10 year old (no offense to any 10 year olds reading this). My biggest problem which arguably caused me the most frustration is the name changing. Why tf is Antonia Aguilar replacing every name, and changing the genders of guys to girls, like come on some effort please. I'm also suspecting this might be a chinese translation since the school was given a chinese name at some point, which wasn't repeated but hey. Story development: 3.0 The way the story is going is making me unhappy, I know this is the authors story and I'm not complaining, but like I said, the alien reproducing and its offspring being absorbed by someone else, is to put it frankly, fucking annoying. It's ok otherwise, or at least I can't think of anything. Character design: 4.0 It's a nice character, not too edgy, nor to weak willed, nor a simp which is nice. The character is well integrated within the story, Gwen isn't very aware of the public though when using her strength it seems. The rest are, to my knowledge in character as well. Updating stability: 5.0 99 chapters in, 8 chapters per week. Very impressive honestly since I can't even reach 30 chapters in my own fanfic lol, but it reinforces my suspicion of this being a translation though. World background: 4.0 Its a marvel AU lol, what did you expect? Overall, a 3.8/5, a respectable rating considering my earlier criticism but it is, for now, well deserved.