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Viết đánh giáI read it and now I'm speechless on how to describe it. The concept is good, It's a Martial Spirit World and the protagonist has 2 Martial Spirits ( cause why not ) and its the same old routine with Father dead and mother unknown and little clumsy maid who'll be a heroine in the future as well as clan beauty whose talent is world class with a similar friend ( beautiful and talanted ) both are possible heroines. Now, the problem is there are too damn many plot holes which are not explained or which contradict what has been stated before. One example is he said before he can only take 3 books from the scripture pavilion but later on he takes 3 more and no one explained how. And that he is too over powered his body before reincarnation takes 4 years to reach 2nd stage and after reincarnation and martial spirit awakening he takes 1 day to reach 6th stage , on the 2nd he reaches 8th stage and on 3rd he reaches 9th stage which should take more than 10-15 years for a normal genius. Also he can do alchemy after just reading a normal roadside book with mastery reaching such a high level that only the topmost alchemist can reach.... yeah so I dropped it after he reached the Inate stage as the cheat became even more over powered.
The story is very good, but I think the author deviated too much from the main story and simply put a bunch of side stories in it. These stories are not bad, I dare say that their power systems are all very interesting. What I believe is that these stories should all be individual, in separate books, not all in one. I hope the author does that after he finishes with this story.
Tiết lộ SpoilerI'm at chapter 80 and I want to know what happened to Lou Li and I also hope both his pets become somewhat relevant to the story cause I feel like they are just there with no purpose to the story and even mc forgets about them
I like the story and all the other things, but I feel he is a half-baked villain, In coming to the story, the author introduces female characters and shows a kind of romantic interaction and MC kills them. I was not too fond of that part. I read until 70.
nice story about what would you do if you had power, the MC has nanobots so he likes to use them to eat his enemies and anyone they know. you have angered me, where do you live ,nanobots eat every everyone here eat the children as well, one day they could grow up better to nip the bud! anger me,,watch me devour everything you own and all your family!
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How lin lee become Great immortal.You say he need to merge another law to his space-time law but he become great immortal without merging how?
First of all I will say Thank to the author for bring this amazing book to us . this novel is an absolute gem. mc is ruthless to enemy he think more logically then emotionally. this is why i like this novel so much. the power system is also unique. my only complaint is chapter update weakly only 8. i would like to have more chapter if there was 12 chapter weakly it would be best it my personal opinion.
I quite liked the novel. I always thought about why other novels aren't using different types of power systems to power up MC. But this one did exactly that i liked it. It shows that MC can still grow using other power systems like mage , genetics, immortal way etc. Other novels just limit the MC and world background by adhering to a single system.
Tiết lộ SpoilerAuthor lin lee always use space time and Darkness law why he Don't use his others law. Show us more of his law power and different law power
With 70 chapters in I can say it’s a good book with a great plot. Maybe a bit too harsh on killing the potential female leads, but still if you want a villian you get a villian. My main criticism is that there isn’t enough usage of future technology, I mean he could recreate most modern devices and totally upgrade this power and sect, I pretty sure some nukes would destroy any enemy he had. Let alone the usfullness of phones in war. He is wasting to much of his nanobots potential like his. I do like how he make a gun at the start, but still wished he put a bullet ahead of the energy blast increasing its power. I hope in the future you can pay more attention to the sect building and tech advancement. Keep it up 👍
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Lol....didn't mind me. Just decided to mark this novel as one of the top new novels that i have to surpass...soon enough!!!
Is there a raw tittle for this novel that actually exists? The other raw title in the reviews doesn't work.
Is this what happens when Chatgpt reincarnates? It becomes a nanobot... or should I say, a nannybot xD sry I know I'm lame
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Good work with great explanation upto present chapters.. Looking for more such quality chapter to read.. The I think the mc is op but I hope to see him op and get more powerful because I think it's gust a bignning
I picked this novel as a back up novel thinking I'll just read it until other novels update I was not ready for this level of writing and character building and ten other things great about this. This is now the first thing I check when I open this app I highly HIGHLY recommend reading this 10/10 🔥
Story starts of great. Evil MC with over powered abilities and only cares for his own benefits. Story goes downhill drastically once he returns to earth and meets his sister. All his bad ass-ness vanishes and is replaced with the will of his sister. So basically she is the MC now. Very disappointing. Great concept. Execution falls flat the longer the story goes on.
Tiết lộ SpoilerI read it and now I'm speechless on how to describe it. The concept is good, It's a Martial Spirit World and the protagonist has 2 Martial Spirits ( cause why not ) and its the same old routine with Father dead and mother unknown and little clumsy maid who'll be a heroine in the future as well as clan beauty whose talent is world class with a similar friend ( beautiful and talanted ) both are possible heroines. Now, the problem is there are too damn many plot holes which are not explained or which contradict what has been stated before. One example is he said before he can only take 3 books from the scripture pavilion but later on he takes 3 more and no one explained how. And that he is too over powered his body before reincarnation takes 4 years to reach 2nd stage and after reincarnation and martial spirit awakening he takes 1 day to reach 6th stage , on the 2nd he reaches 8th stage and on 3rd he reaches 9th stage which should take more than 10-15 years for a normal genius. Also he can do alchemy after just reading a normal roadside book with mastery reaching such a high level that only the topmost alchemist can reach.... yeah so I dropped it after he reached the Inate stage as the cheat became even more over powered.
The story is very good, but I think the author deviated too much from the main story and simply put a bunch of side stories in it. These stories are not bad, I dare say that their power systems are all very interesting. What I believe is that these stories should all be individual, in separate books, not all in one. I hope the author does that after he finishes with this story.
Tiết lộ SpoilerI'm at chapter 80 and I want to know what happened to Lou Li and I also hope both his pets become somewhat relevant to the story cause I feel like they are just there with no purpose to the story and even mc forgets about them
I like the story and all the other things, but I feel he is a half-baked villain, In coming to the story, the author introduces female characters and shows a kind of romantic interaction and MC kills them. I was not too fond of that part. I read until 70.
nice story about what would you do if you had power, the MC has nanobots so he likes to use them to eat his enemies and anyone they know. you have angered me, where do you live ,nanobots eat every everyone here eat the children as well, one day they could grow up better to nip the bud! anger me,,watch me devour everything you own and all your family!
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How lin lee become Great immortal.You say he need to merge another law to his space-time law but he become great immortal without merging how?
First of all I will say Thank to the author for bring this amazing book to us . this novel is an absolute gem. mc is ruthless to enemy he think more logically then emotionally. this is why i like this novel so much. the power system is also unique. my only complaint is chapter update weakly only 8. i would like to have more chapter if there was 12 chapter weakly it would be best it my personal opinion.
I quite liked the novel. I always thought about why other novels aren't using different types of power systems to power up MC. But this one did exactly that i liked it. It shows that MC can still grow using other power systems like mage , genetics, immortal way etc. Other novels just limit the MC and world background by adhering to a single system.
Tiết lộ SpoilerAuthor lin lee always use space time and Darkness law why he Don't use his others law. Show us more of his law power and different law power
With 70 chapters in I can say it’s a good book with a great plot. Maybe a bit too harsh on killing the potential female leads, but still if you want a villian you get a villian. My main criticism is that there isn’t enough usage of future technology, I mean he could recreate most modern devices and totally upgrade this power and sect, I pretty sure some nukes would destroy any enemy he had. Let alone the usfullness of phones in war. He is wasting to much of his nanobots potential like his. I do like how he make a gun at the start, but still wished he put a bullet ahead of the energy blast increasing its power. I hope in the future you can pay more attention to the sect building and tech advancement. Keep it up 👍
more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.more.
Lol....didn't mind me. Just decided to mark this novel as one of the top new novels that i have to surpass...soon enough!!!
Is there a raw tittle for this novel that actually exists? The other raw title in the reviews doesn't work.
Is this what happens when Chatgpt reincarnates? It becomes a nanobot... or should I say, a nannybot xD sry I know I'm lame
Começando agora, é legal 💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻
Good work with great explanation upto present chapters.. Looking for more such quality chapter to read.. The I think the mc is op but I hope to see him op and get more powerful because I think it's gust a bignning
I picked this novel as a back up novel thinking I'll just read it until other novels update I was not ready for this level of writing and character building and ten other things great about this. This is now the first thing I check when I open this app I highly HIGHLY recommend reading this 10/10 🔥
Story starts of great. Evil MC with over powered abilities and only cares for his own benefits. Story goes downhill drastically once he returns to earth and meets his sister. All his bad ass-ness vanishes and is replaced with the will of his sister. So basically she is the MC now. Very disappointing. Great concept. Execution falls flat the longer the story goes on.
Tiết lộ Spoiler