I'm assuming you're a girl then. Because any guy would know that a kid can get hard.
'It's a good thing his thing still can't get hard or else I might really be penetrated by my own son, not to mention he's just a minor now.' She sighed in relief as she reflected and realized that if something of that sort really were to happen, she wouldn't even show a hint of resistance and let him take her completely.
Cheat Cultivator's Ascension
Fantasy · Heavenlydelusion
Review after about 30 chapters: The writing is reasonable. The story is generic. The amount of indecent scenes is a bit too much for me. I believe it should be better balanced, like dual cultivation. Although lately there are too many scenes about this. The biggest problem is the plot holes... there are so many that I can't even count them, a simple search or an opinion from a friend would save this story. Here are some points that I remember that I found strange: 1- Childhood impotence: I don't know why some authors believe that a young boy can't harden his penis. Guys, even a baby can do that, literally. What really changes after adolescence is just the pleasure one gets from it, and a few other factors. I believe this type of mistake is typical of female authors, since they have never experienced it. 2- Ridiculously stupid characters: the protagonist receives an absurd talent, everyone knows it, but even so they try to make enemies of him and let him leave the house calmly, as if nothing could happen. Without contradicting the main characters, I know that his mother is a dual cultivator, but not even prostitutes would want to fuck a 7-year-old child, unless they are crazy. 3- System: the system gives him points for cultivating, a lot of points, but he practically doesn't use them. The system allows him to buy practically anything, but he is so retarded that my head hurts. Anyway, I only recommend this story to those who can completely turn off their brains to read. I usually don't care that much about plot holes, but there are some that are so stupid that they simply don't allow me to continue the story. Anyway, I praise the author for writing, since not everyone can do that. I also hope that he doesn't take my criticism personally, but rather as points that he should pay more attention to so that he can evolve in his writing.
Why can't he get hard? Does the child have impotence?
'It's a good thing his thing still can't get hard or else I might really be penetrated by my own son, not to mention he's just a minor now.' She sighed in relief as she reflected and realized that if something of that sort really were to happen, she wouldn't even show a hint of resistance and let him take her completely.
Cheat Cultivator's Ascension
Fantasy · Heavenlydelusion
One of the most frustrating stories I've ever read. The MC system is practically useless, his talent is also bad. The "MC" of his world is very arrogant, I don't understand why even after reading 150 chapters the author left him alive, he's practically a retard with a bunch of people inside him who help him for no reason. Anyway, the aur is also kind of bland. For everyone who reads this story, I don't recommend it, unless it has changed drastically after chapter 150. Only by god, after so many chapters practically nothing relevant has happened.
Wow! Are you and your family okay? I hope no one got hurt. The physical and psychological pressure must be immense. It's very strong of you to keep writing after all this. But also remember to take care of yourself.
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Thank you, now it's much clearer
Is a sentient sword dead then?
1. Divine Retribution: Calls forth heavenly light to strike down enemies who have committed grievous sins. The power scales based on the target's level of corruption, causing greater damage to darker or evil foes (All Race).
Reincarnated With Three Unique Skills
Fantasy · Elias_Nightwalker
Hey author, this cover isn't bad, if you make it more clickable with more colors and contrasts it will probably be even better. There are several AIs nowadays that can help you with this. There is one that is free, sea art, but I recommend you to watch a short tutorial to learn how to use it, since it is a bit messy. Another thing, your point of view transitions are still a bit abrupt, I don't know the right way to do it, but it seems strange to me.
Producing sperm and getting hard are different things. A child can get hard, but because his reproductive organs are not developed, he will not, in fact, produce sperm.
'It's a good thing his thing still can't get hard or else I might really be penetrated by my own son, not to mention he's just a minor now.' She sighed in relief as she reflected and realized that if something of that sort really were to happen, she wouldn't even show a hint of resistance and let him take her completely.
Cheat Cultivator's Ascension
Fantasy · Heavenlydelusion