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Bro first time giving such bad review. story was rushed . You just made a curry of the story. MC was TOO cold , creepy and what's up with the cold reactions to his own family
Pretty nice story though it's quite confusing sometimes and how the emotions of the MC can be quite a creep but overall it's good 👍
Story was rushed with the character’s motive not making anysense and overall doesn’t seem very thought out with a lot of mistakes like getting the gender wrong in the story with them at times calling the female characters he and vice verses.
Good story. The ending is not very satisfying. Just as the main character is about to kill the God that reincarnated him, five other "God Kings" show up. Then, just as he's about to kill them, six "God Emperors" show up. It felt like a cultivation story for a second. BUT, it makes me excited for a sequel for this story. Hopefully, it doesn't take him multiple lifetimes to kill the "God Emperor," I don't want this to become a pattern.
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grammer ain't that bad but mc literally does not have a personality and his actions don't make sense and seems like they also don't have any consequences nahhhh
Honestly would be an enjoyable read IF the author actually gave us interactions. If i were to explain this story, It’s like pulling an ssr character but skipping the special animation. It just feels empty. I hope the Authot does a rewrite and fixes the story.
Author, your novel's plot is too fast, and why does the MC suddenly become emo? with unclear reasons? plus, in every story it's still too random, and your novel can't be enjoyed... if the author makes the character have an EMO nature, it should be explained at the beginning of reincarnation, not just change abruptly like this, so it seems very strange... I hope in your next novel you will be better at writing...
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I don't know what to say about this work i will be honest i never have given a bad review to any novel or fanfic so here goes basically Author destroyed the charcter i mean literally mc is emotional less rock and the reason author gives he lived in limbo for 95,000 years man come in if any body lives that much time do you know how he will be normal extremely normal they want hide their time in that place as much as possible didn't you read manhwa or fanfics with same concept like sword King and limit breaker other works the people like them want to Cherise the moments they have with loved ones and any body tries mess with they will show the monster they are hiding or you could have gone with orphan route it would have given idea that he is like that . And author mess with gender when it comes to he/she concept. Any way story,concept and idea are good all i could say is I don't want another Arthur Leywin who is kinda breaks the girls heart and make family cry by being righteous and other things sometimes being selfish and loving being emotional is good so please try to improvise the story
the story is kinda fast super fast you should rewrite this author it has potential but you wasted your like the guy who has the arc of embodiment from fairy tail who use the in a stupid way
Şimdi ilk olarak türk bir yazarin en azından bir şeyler denemesi beni mutlu etti açıkçası umarım kendini yazma konusunda geliştirirsin ilk olarak ağır bir eleştiri geliyor kendini hazırla türksün diye sana kolay davranmayacağım ilk olarak çok hızlı mı ilerliyoruz ne kanka tamam iyi hoş o oldu bu oldu ama time skipleri biraz fazlaya kaçırıp sanki zorla yazdırıyorlarmışcasına hikayenin önemli ve karakter geliştirilebilecek yerlerini atlamak büyük bir hata karakter gelişimi desen hiç yok gibi bir şey direkt karakter böyle böyle diyerek tek bir karakteristik yapıyı ana karaktere aşılamak aşırı sıkıcı bu yazdığın içerikten nereden baksan 250-300 bölümlük bir yazı çıkar yaptığın her bir time skipten farklı farklı hikayeler dünyayı ana yazarın yazdığı dünyanın üstüne yazabileceğin fırsatlar ile dolu bak 6 yıldır falan fanfic vb her şeyi okuyorum yapılan hataları anlarım herkes annesinin karnından yazar olarak çıkmadı kendini geliştirmek senin elinde o yüzden pov unu yazardan okuyucuya değiştirmek çokça pragmatik bakış açısı kazandırabilir gelelim dünya inşasına TBATH'ın dünyası üzerine hiçbir şey eklememişsin okuyucuya hiçbir hayal gücü gereksinimi sağlamıyorsun özel bir haraket yapıyor MC ama bunun nasıl olduğu veya nasıl yapabildiği ile ilgili hiçbir detay yok hiçbir eğitim arkı yok sanki büyülü birisi (senden bahsediyorum) parmağını şıklatıyor ve ana karakter op oluyor hadi ama bunun eğitimi nerede her bir güç parçasını inşa etmesini izlemek inan daha keyifli insanlar sıkılır diye karakter diyaloğunu veya yaptığı ufak maceraları veya en küçük bir normal hayat parçası fanfic e renk katan okuyucuların bagalanti kurabileceği şeylerdir bunlar benim için açıkça göze çarpan şeylerdir canım umarım yazdığım her şeyi olmasa da en küçük bir şey bile senin yazarlık kariyerinde etkisi olduysa ne mutlu bana çalışmalarinin devamını beklerim
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I really like it but can u make him more caring of his family and the people he cares for
The protagonist's lack of emotion and interaction with others makes the story uninteresting. The story is just following the original direction and no originality. There's no noticeable difference. Writing needs improvmements.
It's actually pretty good, but the problem here is that's theres barely any dialogue and interaction, like it's really little and the pacing is a little bit to fastMy suggestion here is to kinda add more dialogues because the character here feels very robotic, but so far it's good
I'm liking it so far, i hope after tbate, he will cross to another dimensions where he can grow more stronger and stronger till he can defeat the god itself
This is my first book and I'm really hopeful because I think I can hold on please support me
WRITE A FUDGING SYNOPSIS! PLEASE! Is not that hard, instead of a bunch of nothing just tell me what the story is about.
Bro first time giving such bad review. story was rushed . You just made a curry of the story. MC was TOO cold , creepy and what's up with the cold reactions to his own family
Pretty nice story though it's quite confusing sometimes and how the emotions of the MC can be quite a creep but overall it's good 👍
Story was rushed with the character’s motive not making anysense and overall doesn’t seem very thought out with a lot of mistakes like getting the gender wrong in the story with them at times calling the female characters he and vice verses.
Good story. The ending is not very satisfying. Just as the main character is about to kill the God that reincarnated him, five other "God Kings" show up. Then, just as he's about to kill them, six "God Emperors" show up. It felt like a cultivation story for a second. BUT, it makes me excited for a sequel for this story. Hopefully, it doesn't take him multiple lifetimes to kill the "God Emperor," I don't want this to become a pattern.
Tiết lộ Spoiler grammer ain't that bad but mc literally does not have a personality and his actions don't make sense and seems like they also don't have any consequences nahhhh
Honestly would be an enjoyable read IF the author actually gave us interactions. If i were to explain this story, It’s like pulling an ssr character but skipping the special animation. It just feels empty. I hope the Authot does a rewrite and fixes the story.
Author, your novel's plot is too fast, and why does the MC suddenly become emo? with unclear reasons? plus, in every story it's still too random, and your novel can't be enjoyed... if the author makes the character have an EMO nature, it should be explained at the beginning of reincarnation, not just change abruptly like this, so it seems very strange... I hope in your next novel you will be better at writing...
Tiết lộ Spoiler I don't know what to say about this work i will be honest i never have given a bad review to any novel or fanfic so here goes basically Author destroyed the charcter i mean literally mc is emotional less rock and the reason author gives he lived in limbo for 95,000 years man come in if any body lives that much time do you know how he will be normal extremely normal they want hide their time in that place as much as possible didn't you read manhwa or fanfics with same concept like sword King and limit breaker other works the people like them want to Cherise the moments they have with loved ones and any body tries mess with they will show the monster they are hiding or you could have gone with orphan route it would have given idea that he is like that . And author mess with gender when it comes to he/she concept. Any way story,concept and idea are good all i could say is I don't want another Arthur Leywin who is kinda breaks the girls heart and make family cry by being righteous and other things sometimes being selfish and loving being emotional is good so please try to improvise the story
the story is kinda fast super fast you should rewrite this author it has potential but you wasted your like the guy who has the arc of embodiment from fairy tail who use the in a stupid way
Şimdi ilk olarak türk bir yazarin en azından bir şeyler denemesi beni mutlu etti açıkçası umarım kendini yazma konusunda geliştirirsin ilk olarak ağır bir eleştiri geliyor kendini hazırla türksün diye sana kolay davranmayacağım ilk olarak çok hızlı mı ilerliyoruz ne kanka tamam iyi hoş o oldu bu oldu ama time skipleri biraz fazlaya kaçırıp sanki zorla yazdırıyorlarmışcasına hikayenin önemli ve karakter geliştirilebilecek yerlerini atlamak büyük bir hata karakter gelişimi desen hiç yok gibi bir şey direkt karakter böyle böyle diyerek tek bir karakteristik yapıyı ana karaktere aşılamak aşırı sıkıcı bu yazdığın içerikten nereden baksan 250-300 bölümlük bir yazı çıkar yaptığın her bir time skipten farklı farklı hikayeler dünyayı ana yazarın yazdığı dünyanın üstüne yazabileceğin fırsatlar ile dolu bak 6 yıldır falan fanfic vb her şeyi okuyorum yapılan hataları anlarım herkes annesinin karnından yazar olarak çıkmadı kendini geliştirmek senin elinde o yüzden pov unu yazardan okuyucuya değiştirmek çokça pragmatik bakış açısı kazandırabilir gelelim dünya inşasına TBATH'ın dünyası üzerine hiçbir şey eklememişsin okuyucuya hiçbir hayal gücü gereksinimi sağlamıyorsun özel bir haraket yapıyor MC ama bunun nasıl olduğu veya nasıl yapabildiği ile ilgili hiçbir detay yok hiçbir eğitim arkı yok sanki büyülü birisi (senden bahsediyorum) parmağını şıklatıyor ve ana karakter op oluyor hadi ama bunun eğitimi nerede her bir güç parçasını inşa etmesini izlemek inan daha keyifli insanlar sıkılır diye karakter diyaloğunu veya yaptığı ufak maceraları veya en küçük bir normal hayat parçası fanfic e renk katan okuyucuların bagalanti kurabileceği şeylerdir bunlar benim için açıkça göze çarpan şeylerdir canım umarım yazdığım her şeyi olmasa da en küçük bir şey bile senin yazarlık kariyerinde etkisi olduysa ne mutlu bana çalışmalarinin devamını beklerim
Tiết lộ Spoiler I really like it but can u make him more caring of his family and the people he cares for
The protagonist's lack of emotion and interaction with others makes the story uninteresting. The story is just following the original direction and no originality. There's no noticeable difference. Writing needs improvmements.
It's actually pretty good, but the problem here is that's theres barely any dialogue and interaction, like it's really little and the pacing is a little bit to fastMy suggestion here is to kinda add more dialogues because the character here feels very robotic, but so far it's good
I'm liking it so far, i hope after tbate, he will cross to another dimensions where he can grow more stronger and stronger till he can defeat the god itself
This is my first book and I'm really hopeful because I think I can hold on please support me
WRITE A FUDGING SYNOPSIS! PLEASE! Is not that hard, instead of a bunch of nothing just tell me what the story is about.