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this is one of my favorite novels i will be a lot happy if you do another novel like this one....... one reason is because,i can't read chapter 49 to 52 and probably the remaining chapters
love this,but the thing you wrote about what kakashi said isn't in chapter 46 it is in chapter 47 just a little mistake people all make mistakes actually love this
Wanted to wait till I finished reading before i drop a review but I can't because this book is soo good. On chapter two but I love the plot already. I recommend!!!
I like this kind of writing! I am on chapter 1 for now but I will definitely read this! This kind of writing style is refreshing, and I enjoy it ^^)/
just new to webnovel and just started reading this. the novel dialogues seems fine, the description is good and the scenes are nice, nothing more to say. just do your best, and to anyone reading this. if you like action anime you should definitely try it
The dialogues are nice and interesting to read. Yet there are too many which, as far as I know, Webnovel doesn't like when it comes to writing novels... Keep writing and upload more chapters... I hope you get a contract offer soon.
new to this genre , but I have a feeling that I will love it . Looking forward to it
Very good first person POV, I like the MC's chararacter... would prefer a slow down because at apoint I stopped imagining
Great job author. Will definitely look forward to more awesome chapters from you.
Not exactly my type of genre but somehow this book instantly drew me to it. It has quality in it's writing style and an adaptable world background. I totally recommend this book 👍🥰
The author’s ability to balance action with deeper philosophical questions makes this story not just an adventure, but a thought-provoking exploration of power, responsibility, and the human condition. Fans of fantasy and action will find this story to be a satisfying journey through a richly imagined world full of danger, mystery, and the potential for redemption.
The first chapter feels a bit confusing due to the rapid introduction of characters, leaving readers with little time to catch their breath. While I understand the intention to create a tragic start, the fast pace can be overwhelming. Some chapters have messy pacing that could benefit from re-editing. However, with a little refinement in scene transitions and pacing, the story has potential and can be a great read!
this is one of my favorite novels i will be a lot happy if you do another novel like this one....... one reason is because,i can't read chapter 49 to 52 and probably the remaining chapters
love this,but the thing you wrote about what kakashi said isn't in chapter 46 it is in chapter 47 just a little mistake people all make mistakes actually love this
Wanted to wait till I finished reading before i drop a review but I can't because this book is soo good. On chapter two but I love the plot already. I recommend!!!
I like this kind of writing! I am on chapter 1 for now but I will definitely read this! This kind of writing style is refreshing, and I enjoy it ^^)/
just new to webnovel and just started reading this. the novel dialogues seems fine, the description is good and the scenes are nice, nothing more to say. just do your best, and to anyone reading this. if you like action anime you should definitely try it
The dialogues are nice and interesting to read. Yet there are too many which, as far as I know, Webnovel doesn't like when it comes to writing novels... Keep writing and upload more chapters... I hope you get a contract offer soon.
new to this genre , but I have a feeling that I will love it . Looking forward to it
Very good first person POV, I like the MC's chararacter... would prefer a slow down because at apoint I stopped imagining
Great job author. Will definitely look forward to more awesome chapters from you.
Not exactly my type of genre but somehow this book instantly drew me to it. It has quality in it's writing style and an adaptable world background. I totally recommend this book 👍🥰
The author’s ability to balance action with deeper philosophical questions makes this story not just an adventure, but a thought-provoking exploration of power, responsibility, and the human condition. Fans of fantasy and action will find this story to be a satisfying journey through a richly imagined world full of danger, mystery, and the potential for redemption.
The first chapter feels a bit confusing due to the rapid introduction of characters, leaving readers with little time to catch their breath. While I understand the intention to create a tragic start, the fast pace can be overwhelming. Some chapters have messy pacing that could benefit from re-editing. However, with a little refinement in scene transitions and pacing, the story has potential and can be a great read!