mmmm... intriguing 👌🔥🔥
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The Raven Thief
Fantasy · Forteller
a gripping opening and also your vocabulary is impressive , the story is quite intriguing . you've got me hooked author
this a really captivating opening
I tried to recall what had happened before I found myself in this strange place. I remembered reading a novel called <<Lost in Pages>> by the author 'Ailisue' before falling asleep. But for some reason, the details of the story eluded me, as if they were just fleeting dream.
Lost in Pages
Fantasy · Ailiseu
"The opening is well-written, descriptive, and engaging. The protagonist seems interesting and relatable
yeah
nice opening , The first chapter has me hooked, and I'm excited to see where the story goes and I can't wait to read more!
it's full of vivid and evocative details , rooting for you author , I can't wait to see what you come up with next!" 😊
Your writing is well-crafted and the story is compelling. The diction is excellent and the storyline is well-developed .you've a really strong opening this opening is very effective at setting the tone for the story and evoking strong emotions in the reader. Great job! 👏
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original Unravel Aries
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As Aries grew up, he began to notice that he was different from other kids. He was faster and stronger than them, and he had a knack for understanding things that they couldn't grasp. He didn't know why he was different until one day , he sneaked into his dad's office to take his favorite video game his dad seized , he unknowingly found a secret passage and found a broken piece of gem . As he touched it a surge of energy filled his body and he felt more complete He began to unravel mysteries and find his true purpose8 Chs 16 sưu tầm
nicee😀
Spheris's eyes tore open and a black mist poured out of his iris into the corridors of the bastion. The marshals gasped and Mage Anduris took frightened steps backwards, realizing what had just happened.
The Raven Thief
Fantasy · Forteller