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LV 5

AlayaShiki

read synopsis sound mehh.......after see the name of author..........

LV 4

TrashyWriter01

Everything’s good but what makes no sense is his lengendary pull. A waifu summoning card but pulled a (at most) uncommon green waifu, then to make matters worse she was NERFED from an Uncommon green to a Common grey, now you need to remember he got this from a LEGENDARY pull. The choices went from ALL the True magics from fate to a waifu summoning Thats not even legendary. Even the epic pulls made no sense, Mc’s first epic pull went from the doujutsu’s from naruto to which in all honestly should’ve been blue to a falna from danmachi which should’ve been green at least. Then his next epic pull was which in all honestly shouldn’t even be a pull at all was the merging of his original world with the DxD world. Something that could’ve happened when he was struck by lightning. The writing is good. The characters are good. Everything is good except for the things i just listed off.

LV 4

ClearSkySage

"My armor is like tenfold shields, my teeth are swords, my claws spears, the shock of my tail a thunderbolt, my wings a hurricane, and my breath death!" ~ A True Dragon

LV 14

Zhorvak

Okay, I've just read the first chapter, and it is a good start, the story looks primising and the protagonist looks likeble to me, though the story description need improvements, like a lot, otherwise you risk people not giving a chance because of it.

LV 3

ValentineSnacks

The Dragon GOAT? Real romance and characters that feel genuinely refreshing to read with a fun concept? I read current chapters too fast. Take my 5 stars, I'm begging you!

LV 2

kujiki

I give ⭐⭐⭐⭐, it may change when it exceeds 50 chapters. I haven't read it yet but hopefully this story won't be one of the ones left out. ............... ........ . . .

LV 4

fantacia_000

one of the best dxd fanfic . waiting for more chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯.

LV 4

Death_to_all_2816

Great story so far, like the concept behind the story.

LV 4

Asura69s

hey author this is a good novel and why the heck are you not posting more ch for 2 months please author post a minimum of 5 to 6 ch a week this novel has good potential just plz don't ruin it

LV 15

Anime_fan1234

It could use more lemon scenes otherwise it’s great

LV 4

Thebumberserker

Ok the story is actually good ,the characters are great,i see nothing wrong with it ,the only thing that’s questionable is the author’s taste in women (it’s sucks a**)but hey I don’t care,as long as she has good character then that’s fine.

LV 5

Psan

Ok... i must say im F impressed. I read all the current 55 chapters in 2 days. All categories have 5 stars. Nothing to whine about or things to improve comes to mind. The ONLY BUT is that lemons are short and barely detailed. We need good lemons. Not ecchi enough. Also they can have segs inside the dungeon for a month straight with no consecuences. He just gotta bring a bed there and check if they can sleep on it without leaving the dungeon. Its also a good idea to construct a proper house there with handmade shower and bring some food to eat something once in a while.

LV 2

Dagonoid

Muito bom muito obrigada. Por favor não desista e continue. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] Ele irá compartilhar a falna com Rias e Sona?

LV 4

kal90

bro iIlike this novel very much with julis being female lead but please don't add Sona into harem plz iIthink u can add inori she is atleast better

LV 4

EggButt_

Liked it. The writing is good I just hope there’s no harem even tho theirs that tag. I’d like it if it was just him and Julis.

LV 3

Altairshadow00

The story is quite exciting and the MC becomes quite strong easily, that's predictable and acceptable because of the system. Power scaling is still not clear because mc's power is based on the falna of danmachi. Lv2 is the weakest level of strength in the supernatural world and it is still unknown what level the strong people are in dxd.

LV 1

Arsene_Holmes

What a great day gentlemen, I will finally have some hope of updates, I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

LV 4

Erick200

Minha expectativa para essa fanfic era muito baixa, mas essa fanfic se mostrou surpreendente interessante, espero que o autor volte a postar. ........................................................

LV 15

Drigok_Yuri_Is_NTR

This is not a review just want to ask a question then will write proper one if its mh kind of novel. Will there be any yuri in this not a fan?