The book wasn't that bad. I would love to keep reading
Great premise for a story. Would love to see more keep it up.
The story is good Great premise needs some work on the pacing but I don't think it's a bad
Great story premise would love to see more. Hope you keep writing.
Love the story needs longer chapters great premise------------------///////-----------------
Like the story
Hell yeah
+1
Great chapter needs some work though
If it is fire, bending should give him Shira abilities
Marvel: Stark Tower Dungeon
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