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Everything was good! Just wondering why I cannot read other chapters? do i need to subscribe? but anyway I hope I can watch ads or something to go with other chapters
Wow! This book provides an amazing reading experience. One especially appreciates your excellent command of English. Well done Melvin Dash.
The title got me hooked instantly.Am addicted now and giving a warning to the author.Dont stop posting chapters.
totally added to library. this was the first book to read as recommended and the perfection of the words and characters got me really hook and and fell into this novel.
It's a great book to read, the writing is neat and the language is easy to understand, so it's perfect for your bibliography.
I'm new to this platform and most novels seemed very similar, but I'm thrilled to have found this masterpiece. The MC, Azrael, has a mysterious background, and the author's choice of True Archangel and Devil Sin names adds depth. The plot and characters are excellent, and the writing style draws you in. I hope the author continues this beautiful story that's not the typical reincarnation trope. While it's still early, it shows great potential. The poetic English is a standout. It's a treasure that doesn't rely on reincarnation or demon lords. The fight scenes could use more intensity, but character development and the writing style are fantastic. Keep it up!
NGL, It was like a hidden gem for me. Azrael's journey unfolds in the compelling narrative of memory loss and a mysterious past, where the MC grapples with the fragments of his forgotten history. As the veil of oblivion obscures his origins, Azrael is driven by an unwavering sense of purpose, navigating through an unfamiliar realm of enigmas and uncertainties.
Worth the read!!!! truely best recommendation by webnovel so far. some chapters need to be unlock tho. but still full support with the author
Alright! so... here's my review I was actually new to this platform and there a lot of Novel that has beautiful Cover images. but honestly. all of it were totally the same. "POWERFUL, SSS, IMMORTAL, REINCARNATION AS SOMETHING". I'm so very glad to find this novel! this one here is a true masterpiece. very detailed and the MC (Azrael my love [img=recommend]) has a very mysterious background this is very catchy. and the way the author was Giving names of the True Archangels and Sins of the Devils was the perfect touch of the whole story. I will be waiting for more
Atlast! a beautiful story that doesn't involve reincarnation and the main characters where not demon lord or something! this should be the one that we are supporting!
Best Chapters Best Writing Best Character Developer Best Author Not Reincarnation like most of the novels here Not Over powered and had better explanations Unique 100%
This Novel is such a treasure. truly out of this world writing and story. Not Reincarnation not Time Travel like most of other stories. Ill be looking forward for this
**Review:** ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ This narrative is a masterpiece. Right from the outset, readers are thrust into a whirlwind of emotions, thanks to relatable, multi-dimensional characters who feel like old friends by the end. The intricate plot, filled with suspenseful twists, ensures you’re constantly on the edge of your seat, eager for the next revelation. The author’s knack for describing scenes is commendable, effortlessly transporting readers to different locales. Themes explored resonate deeply, prompting introspection long after the final page. Combining evocative prose with a compelling storyline, this book is not just another read—it's a journey. Truly, a remarkable piece of literature.
It only has very few chapters, but has quite some potential. Being a sucker for fight scenes, i would request the author to work on it a bit and make it more intense and real. Rest I have no complaints about. Kudos!
Writing is at times overly wordy, with too many adverbs/adjectives. You'll say things like "inexplicable surge _ without any rational explanation [...]", so there's a bunch of tautologies in your writing. "an undeniable compulsion arising to mete out retribution" could be simplified to "an undeniable urge to seek revenge." and I'm only suggesting this because the rest of the paragraph already has some repetitive descriptions. In essence, cut down some of the fluff. For actions scenes, make sure you aren't squeezing them in the same format as normal scenes to give them a more fight/suspenseful feeling. Things like immediate reactions and introspection/thoughts of the antagonists and protagonist can help the readers can help the fight feel more real. Overall, that's my only critique so far, when it comes to writing style. Keep up the good work!
Outstanding story. Love the writing style and character development. The author is doing a good job. Can't wait for more chapters. Keep up the good work.
perfect writing perfect story and perfect characters. i can feel every words from the story it was amazing and ill be looking forward for more
A story that is worth reading with excellent writing and poetic wording, description of the action is well-written hope to read more... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story is nicely done. It kept me reading for quite a while and then I noticed that I had read it all. I really fall in love with you writing style!
This book is still new but it has a great potential that will drag us into a long exciting adventure. The plot is great and so are the characters done here. The writing style helps us to know what on going Great work author!!
Just an Author review for myself. Thank you everyone for the wonderful reviews that kept me moving forward with this novel. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm speechless. the writing style, the character, the story. Everything is totally unbelievable. best one so far and would really love to wait for the upcoming updates
I think the author didn't even realize that he has the potential to create such a wonderful novel with very poetic words. this is a MASTERPIECE
Nice book, it's very detail and makes you create a vivid image in your mind. A lot of poet and I know it's gonna be an interesting book. The work is a masterpiece, I'm rooting for you. All the best author.
Supporting the book of Fall with poetic words and much more detailed. [img=recommend][img=update]
The author know his way of words! The narration is engaging, vivid and descriptive! Writing is absolutely perfect, I didnt find any mistake and choices of words aren't redundant but instead poetic and deep. And the plot line, it still early to tell but I'd like to see how this story unfolds!
The novel is very interesting, the author needs to realise more chapters, I also think this novel has very high potential. Great job author!
There are only two chapters but the story shows an interesting plot. The writing style and grammar were so fluent. It didn't have many unfamiliar or deep words but the way it was written was so mesmerizing. What I mean is, it gives the feeling like you're reading poetry. I hope that the author continues with the work on this book.
I'm inlove with this. totally get my attention with the wordings and the complete details of each story. very poetic and well explained at the same time.
The book has deep words that makes me wanna open my dictionary lol. By just reading it, it also helped me to learn words that aren't familiar to me. On the other hand, great job to the author who narrates the story very well. Keep on writing. The story is great. Added to my collection [img=gift]
Everything was good! Just wondering why I cannot read other chapters? do i need to subscribe? but anyway I hope I can watch ads or something to go with other chapters
Wow! This book provides an amazing reading experience. One especially appreciates your excellent command of English. Well done Melvin Dash.
The title got me hooked instantly.Am addicted now and giving a warning to the author.Dont stop posting chapters.
totally added to library. this was the first book to read as recommended and the perfection of the words and characters got me really hook and and fell into this novel.
It's a great book to read, the writing is neat and the language is easy to understand, so it's perfect for your bibliography.
I'm new to this platform and most novels seemed very similar, but I'm thrilled to have found this masterpiece. The MC, Azrael, has a mysterious background, and the author's choice of True Archangel and Devil Sin names adds depth. The plot and characters are excellent, and the writing style draws you in. I hope the author continues this beautiful story that's not the typical reincarnation trope. While it's still early, it shows great potential. The poetic English is a standout. It's a treasure that doesn't rely on reincarnation or demon lords. The fight scenes could use more intensity, but character development and the writing style are fantastic. Keep it up!
NGL, It was like a hidden gem for me. Azrael's journey unfolds in the compelling narrative of memory loss and a mysterious past, where the MC grapples with the fragments of his forgotten history. As the veil of oblivion obscures his origins, Azrael is driven by an unwavering sense of purpose, navigating through an unfamiliar realm of enigmas and uncertainties.
Worth the read!!!! truely best recommendation by webnovel so far. some chapters need to be unlock tho. but still full support with the author
Alright! so... here's my review I was actually new to this platform and there a lot of Novel that has beautiful Cover images. but honestly. all of it were totally the same. "POWERFUL, SSS, IMMORTAL, REINCARNATION AS SOMETHING". I'm so very glad to find this novel! this one here is a true masterpiece. very detailed and the MC (Azrael my love [img=recommend]) has a very mysterious background this is very catchy. and the way the author was Giving names of the True Archangels and Sins of the Devils was the perfect touch of the whole story. I will be waiting for more
Atlast! a beautiful story that doesn't involve reincarnation and the main characters where not demon lord or something! this should be the one that we are supporting!
Best Chapters Best Writing Best Character Developer Best Author Not Reincarnation like most of the novels here Not Over powered and had better explanations Unique 100%
This Novel is such a treasure. truly out of this world writing and story. Not Reincarnation not Time Travel like most of other stories. Ill be looking forward for this
**Review:** ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ This narrative is a masterpiece. Right from the outset, readers are thrust into a whirlwind of emotions, thanks to relatable, multi-dimensional characters who feel like old friends by the end. The intricate plot, filled with suspenseful twists, ensures you’re constantly on the edge of your seat, eager for the next revelation. The author’s knack for describing scenes is commendable, effortlessly transporting readers to different locales. Themes explored resonate deeply, prompting introspection long after the final page. Combining evocative prose with a compelling storyline, this book is not just another read—it's a journey. Truly, a remarkable piece of literature.
It only has very few chapters, but has quite some potential. Being a sucker for fight scenes, i would request the author to work on it a bit and make it more intense and real. Rest I have no complaints about. Kudos!
Writing is at times overly wordy, with too many adverbs/adjectives. You'll say things like "inexplicable surge _ without any rational explanation [...]", so there's a bunch of tautologies in your writing. "an undeniable compulsion arising to mete out retribution" could be simplified to "an undeniable urge to seek revenge." and I'm only suggesting this because the rest of the paragraph already has some repetitive descriptions. In essence, cut down some of the fluff. For actions scenes, make sure you aren't squeezing them in the same format as normal scenes to give them a more fight/suspenseful feeling. Things like immediate reactions and introspection/thoughts of the antagonists and protagonist can help the readers can help the fight feel more real. Overall, that's my only critique so far, when it comes to writing style. Keep up the good work!
Outstanding story. Love the writing style and character development. The author is doing a good job. Can't wait for more chapters. Keep up the good work.
perfect writing perfect story and perfect characters. i can feel every words from the story it was amazing and ill be looking forward for more
A story that is worth reading with excellent writing and poetic wording, description of the action is well-written hope to read more... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story is nicely done. It kept me reading for quite a while and then I noticed that I had read it all. I really fall in love with you writing style!
This book is still new but it has a great potential that will drag us into a long exciting adventure. The plot is great and so are the characters done here. The writing style helps us to know what on going Great work author!!
Just an Author review for myself. Thank you everyone for the wonderful reviews that kept me moving forward with this novel. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm speechless. the writing style, the character, the story. Everything is totally unbelievable. best one so far and would really love to wait for the upcoming updates
I think the author didn't even realize that he has the potential to create such a wonderful novel with very poetic words. this is a MASTERPIECE
Nice book, it's very detail and makes you create a vivid image in your mind. A lot of poet and I know it's gonna be an interesting book. The work is a masterpiece, I'm rooting for you. All the best author.
Supporting the book of Fall with poetic words and much more detailed. [img=recommend][img=update]
The author know his way of words! The narration is engaging, vivid and descriptive! Writing is absolutely perfect, I didnt find any mistake and choices of words aren't redundant but instead poetic and deep. And the plot line, it still early to tell but I'd like to see how this story unfolds!
The novel is very interesting, the author needs to realise more chapters, I also think this novel has very high potential. Great job author!
There are only two chapters but the story shows an interesting plot. The writing style and grammar were so fluent. It didn't have many unfamiliar or deep words but the way it was written was so mesmerizing. What I mean is, it gives the feeling like you're reading poetry. I hope that the author continues with the work on this book.
I'm inlove with this. totally get my attention with the wordings and the complete details of each story. very poetic and well explained at the same time.
The book has deep words that makes me wanna open my dictionary lol. By just reading it, it also helped me to learn words that aren't familiar to me. On the other hand, great job to the author who narrates the story very well. Keep on writing. The story is great. Added to my collection [img=gift]