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Let's go about the review one point at a time. 📍WRITING QUALITY: It is great. You may find an error or two in 10 chapters, but that is negligible compared to the overall quality of writing. 📍STORY DEVELOPMENT: You will find the flow of story natural. No random info dump, only there when needed and it seems to fit perfectly in the story(I mean it doesn't feel much like info dump) 📍CHARACTER DESIGN: You will most likely find the characters are as real as they can get. I won't explain more on this as you will find out when reading. 📍UPDATE STABILITY: You get 2 doses every 2 days(approx. 8 chapters a week). 📍WORLD BACKGROUND: All I would say is that it is an interesting and vast world. 🎯CONCLUSION: ALL IN ALL, I WOULD SAY IS THAT, I AM CONFIDENT ENOUGH THAT YOU WILL LIKE THIS STORY.
This is a peak novel, with an even better set of MC’s. Rin and Erix ARE the Supreme Couple, their intense love for each other, their hunger for power and strength, and their combat styles just cement that idea. The power system is fun seeing how free you are to develop your own attributes, concepts, and skills. The world building and other characters are fun and engaging and I’m looking forward to what’s more to come.
i enjoyed this novel because most romantic novel are so boring that mc loves the female lead but won't even kiss, or do ( YOU KNOW WHAT 🙄 ) . honestly I love this novel.
Like the way the author writes the novel, always keep the story moving forward. A little fast something for me, but think that makes this novel work better that way. Hopefully the novel continues as I really liked reading up to the last chapter released. Adds on enough details at the right time to not bore you to death, and not leave you lost wondering what is happening.
author is this novel going to get dropped cause you have been only updating 1 ch a week also author does mc love his other woman or not
great story love the concept of race changes like the setup of the skills as well its refreshingly different but still similar to classic system types would be great if an audiobook of this was made I'd pay for sure keep up the good work man have a great day!
I’ve read up until chapter 300 and can say it is a pretty casual and fun read, you basically have 2 protagonist that makes you look forward to their growth 🗿 Some might find a turn off if you are expecting monogamy… as you can see it is a harem tag however it always feels like the main couple is running the show 👍 Only noticed a few downsides but it’s not a big deal, for example the pacing of the story is pretty fast, the fights are done pretty fast too, there are waaaay too many concepts that you might find overwhelming sometimes since something gets introduced 1 chapter and gets forgotten/left behind/turns useless because as I’ve said the story moves pretty fast Aside from the downsides, I think this novel has a pretty unique power system which I’m sure the author has only shown the tip of the iceberg so far👍 The world building is immense as well which means loads of content( a big plus on my book). I would recommend the book for sure, it is worth the time that you invest in it… Happy reading 👾
One of the greatest novels I've ever read by far. It may not have regular updates on time but it's worth the wait and wait between updates that aren't so far. I greatly recommend this novel to those who like apocalypse novels. The world background is very interesting and the character design is also great. I like the fact that the author hasn't made the usual mistake of the main characters just wins all time which is regular in novels nowadays. Also it's a novel with a harem genre which has a proper harem development not like those novels where it's given hints of harem but makes MC look like a good guy for fan servicing readers with different interests. Thanks a bunch for the great novel and please kip up the good work, dear author...
A romance novel about a couple, but apparently it's also harem? Do both of the leads have their own separate harem?
well,came thinking it will be something like ending maker( though its not). still ,it's very much recommended .The romance,harem and especially the way they develop their own skills(which vis new,atleast for me) is very good .and yeah, i think the notion of supreme couple is there.
Definitely a diamond in the rough! I found the book randomly but haven’t been able to put it down since. The beginning reminded me of blood warlock at first but they are definitely not the same. The writing quality is very good with only a few mistakes. The world building is also good, I would give it a chance if your looking for something new!
very nice and refreshing as plot is with some new way and the most i liked about it is, that it has couple as a mc and the chemistry between them is nice. waiting for more chapters. best of luck for the author.
Bruh I haven’t read this, but how is there a harem if it’s about a couple? R there just random chicks for no reason?
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Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
Im on ch50 I really don't Rin got like all the good skill without any consequence for it ,but every time the mc got a skill there is a consequence and every time there is an orb or chest rin gets almost everything
I'm not necessarily good with words but I would still like to pay my respects to the author for this so far incredibly well-written and well-thought-out novel. It is really remarkably well-written and has many good moments. Please keep it up
Great novel. I even went as far as to purchase privilege towards the end of the month, which to me is a waste, but the novel had me hooked and I wanted to keep reading.The writing quality is good. You will find occasional grammatical errors, but nothing that will disrupt your reading pace or cause difficulties in understanding the context of the sentences or paragraphs. I personally believe the story is developing quite well so far. Nothing has been drawn out, and I haven't found myself ever having to fast-forward through chapters, which is great. I am enjoying the main characters in this novel. It's centered around MC and his wife, instead of the normal solo MC. Therefore, the author does a great job never letting her fall behind, and instead of the wife being in his shadow we get to see her improvement along with his, which is cool. As for their characters, I would describe them as the typical good to their friends (very few they have can count on one hand) and ruthless to their enemies.The world background is probably one of the best things about the novel you'll understand once you start reading.
This is by far one of the best novels I have ever read the update speed may not be very fast but it is worth the wait I'd recommend this novel for people that are looking for good apocalypse novels and the character design is very nice I also like Erix's personality and way of reasoning . One of the many reasons why I really like this novel is because of the female lead's personality , most novels have the the mc focusing too much on female lead because she is weak which slows down the story development. I hope this review can help the author
Writing Quality: Few enough mistakes that it doesn’t really impact flow of the novel and the descriptions are easy to imagine while still looking amazing. Updating Stability: At the time of writing, the author posts two chapters everyday consistently. Story Development: The story pacing is fairly good, allowing you to easily follow what is happening while still being packed full of action and storytelling. Character Design: The character designs are all simplistic yet unique, allowing each character to feel fresh while not overloading your brain with information whenever a new character appears. World Background: The novel is set in an apocalypse where many people turned into zombies and animals mutated into powerful beasts, while the remaining survivors have a system to help them get stronger and survive in this lawless and deadly world.
Great novel, love the main characters they have a unique way of doing stuff.The system seems great and the theme of it being zombies at the start with some mutated monsters such as flies made it extreme fun for those who enjoy this genre! I suggest you give it a try.
Full 5 stars, very good novel. Everything is balanced, though it's not my type of story, so I'll have to drop it. Of course, there are the common small mistakes, but back to my point, a well-done novel.
Writing my second review here, I'll tell what you can expect from the story after I've written 294 chapters, and nearing the end of my 2nd volume, which was a one hell of a journey in the Abyss. The main focus of the novel is MCs, their thrilling adventures of ups-downs and gaining/learning exotic powers that I cook with limitless creativity for cool/hype factor purpose and quick, Bloodpumping, and comprehensive fights of all kinds and avenues. There are RI8 scenes, only 1 in 1st volume, several in 2nd volume early and then very low through the rest, so know that e-chi is not the focus here despite the tags R-I8 and H@rem. R-I8 here also means it's dark and gritty. It's no fairy tale, so expect brut@lity, both psychologically and physically. There is H@rem, but title is Supreme Couple, and this remained, remains, and will remain true throughout the story. The h@rem is also not run-of-mill cuz this is not a H@rem story. It became one due to circumstances and plot, and it couldn't be otherwise with the way I've developed main characters. They are outlandish, for all my purpose and intent, and i immensely enjoy writing their developing journey in my fantastic world of Grand Primal Cosmos. The power structure is simple but broad, and unique because I can't be satisfied otherwise. All ticks of world-buildings are ticked. If you dig fine, immaculate, BIG world-building, you'll enjoy it more and more as you continue to learn about it more in 2nd volume, and then see it in action in 3rd one, but...this one is a long ride. I want to write 1k+ chapters, and it's highly possible with the world-building's skeleton structure i have and I've only revealed 20% of it so far. The current cast of characters, and expanded world-building that I laid out will play big role in the 3rd volume, so wars, drama, and more action. Expect cool dialogues and edginess, but naturally flowed, ingrained in theme, situational, and characters. This is all, folks. Give this one a try if you dig the above mention things and even if you don't, you might come to enjoy them, who knows? :P PS: I reward both: hunger & patience. Thank you for reading, have a good day ^.^/
Let's go about the review one point at a time. 📍WRITING QUALITY: It is great. You may find an error or two in 10 chapters, but that is negligible compared to the overall quality of writing. 📍STORY DEVELOPMENT: You will find the flow of story natural. No random info dump, only there when needed and it seems to fit perfectly in the story(I mean it doesn't feel much like info dump) 📍CHARACTER DESIGN: You will most likely find the characters are as real as they can get. I won't explain more on this as you will find out when reading. 📍UPDATE STABILITY: You get 2 doses every 2 days(approx. 8 chapters a week). 📍WORLD BACKGROUND: All I would say is that it is an interesting and vast world. 🎯CONCLUSION: ALL IN ALL, I WOULD SAY IS THAT, I AM CONFIDENT ENOUGH THAT YOU WILL LIKE THIS STORY.
This is a peak novel, with an even better set of MC’s. Rin and Erix ARE the Supreme Couple, their intense love for each other, their hunger for power and strength, and their combat styles just cement that idea. The power system is fun seeing how free you are to develop your own attributes, concepts, and skills. The world building and other characters are fun and engaging and I’m looking forward to what’s more to come.
i enjoyed this novel because most romantic novel are so boring that mc loves the female lead but won't even kiss, or do ( YOU KNOW WHAT 🙄 ) . honestly I love this novel.
Like the way the author writes the novel, always keep the story moving forward. A little fast something for me, but think that makes this novel work better that way. Hopefully the novel continues as I really liked reading up to the last chapter released. Adds on enough details at the right time to not bore you to death, and not leave you lost wondering what is happening.
author is this novel going to get dropped cause you have been only updating 1 ch a week also author does mc love his other woman or not
great story love the concept of race changes like the setup of the skills as well its refreshingly different but still similar to classic system types would be great if an audiobook of this was made I'd pay for sure keep up the good work man have a great day!
I’ve read up until chapter 300 and can say it is a pretty casual and fun read, you basically have 2 protagonist that makes you look forward to their growth 🗿 Some might find a turn off if you are expecting monogamy… as you can see it is a harem tag however it always feels like the main couple is running the show 👍 Only noticed a few downsides but it’s not a big deal, for example the pacing of the story is pretty fast, the fights are done pretty fast too, there are waaaay too many concepts that you might find overwhelming sometimes since something gets introduced 1 chapter and gets forgotten/left behind/turns useless because as I’ve said the story moves pretty fast Aside from the downsides, I think this novel has a pretty unique power system which I’m sure the author has only shown the tip of the iceberg so far👍 The world building is immense as well which means loads of content( a big plus on my book). I would recommend the book for sure, it is worth the time that you invest in it… Happy reading 👾
One of the greatest novels I've ever read by far. It may not have regular updates on time but it's worth the wait and wait between updates that aren't so far. I greatly recommend this novel to those who like apocalypse novels. The world background is very interesting and the character design is also great. I like the fact that the author hasn't made the usual mistake of the main characters just wins all time which is regular in novels nowadays. Also it's a novel with a harem genre which has a proper harem development not like those novels where it's given hints of harem but makes MC look like a good guy for fan servicing readers with different interests. Thanks a bunch for the great novel and please kip up the good work, dear author...
A romance novel about a couple, but apparently it's also harem? Do both of the leads have their own separate harem?
well,came thinking it will be something like ending maker( though its not). still ,it's very much recommended .The romance,harem and especially the way they develop their own skills(which vis new,atleast for me) is very good .and yeah, i think the notion of supreme couple is there.
Definitely a diamond in the rough! I found the book randomly but haven’t been able to put it down since. The beginning reminded me of blood warlock at first but they are definitely not the same. The writing quality is very good with only a few mistakes. The world building is also good, I would give it a chance if your looking for something new!
very nice and refreshing as plot is with some new way and the most i liked about it is, that it has couple as a mc and the chemistry between them is nice. waiting for more chapters. best of luck for the author.
Bruh I haven’t read this, but how is there a harem if it’s about a couple? R there just random chicks for no reason?
greatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreatgreat
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
Im on ch50 I really don't Rin got like all the good skill without any consequence for it ,but every time the mc got a skill there is a consequence and every time there is an orb or chest rin gets almost everything
I'm not necessarily good with words but I would still like to pay my respects to the author for this so far incredibly well-written and well-thought-out novel. It is really remarkably well-written and has many good moments. Please keep it up
Great novel. I even went as far as to purchase privilege towards the end of the month, which to me is a waste, but the novel had me hooked and I wanted to keep reading.The writing quality is good. You will find occasional grammatical errors, but nothing that will disrupt your reading pace or cause difficulties in understanding the context of the sentences or paragraphs. I personally believe the story is developing quite well so far. Nothing has been drawn out, and I haven't found myself ever having to fast-forward through chapters, which is great. I am enjoying the main characters in this novel. It's centered around MC and his wife, instead of the normal solo MC. Therefore, the author does a great job never letting her fall behind, and instead of the wife being in his shadow we get to see her improvement along with his, which is cool. As for their characters, I would describe them as the typical good to their friends (very few they have can count on one hand) and ruthless to their enemies.The world background is probably one of the best things about the novel you'll understand once you start reading.
This is by far one of the best novels I have ever read the update speed may not be very fast but it is worth the wait I'd recommend this novel for people that are looking for good apocalypse novels and the character design is very nice I also like Erix's personality and way of reasoning . One of the many reasons why I really like this novel is because of the female lead's personality , most novels have the the mc focusing too much on female lead because she is weak which slows down the story development. I hope this review can help the author
Writing Quality: Few enough mistakes that it doesn’t really impact flow of the novel and the descriptions are easy to imagine while still looking amazing. Updating Stability: At the time of writing, the author posts two chapters everyday consistently. Story Development: The story pacing is fairly good, allowing you to easily follow what is happening while still being packed full of action and storytelling. Character Design: The character designs are all simplistic yet unique, allowing each character to feel fresh while not overloading your brain with information whenever a new character appears. World Background: The novel is set in an apocalypse where many people turned into zombies and animals mutated into powerful beasts, while the remaining survivors have a system to help them get stronger and survive in this lawless and deadly world.
Great novel, love the main characters they have a unique way of doing stuff.The system seems great and the theme of it being zombies at the start with some mutated monsters such as flies made it extreme fun for those who enjoy this genre! I suggest you give it a try.
Full 5 stars, very good novel. Everything is balanced, though it's not my type of story, so I'll have to drop it. Of course, there are the common small mistakes, but back to my point, a well-done novel.
Writing my second review here, I'll tell what you can expect from the story after I've written 294 chapters, and nearing the end of my 2nd volume, which was a one hell of a journey in the Abyss. The main focus of the novel is MCs, their thrilling adventures of ups-downs and gaining/learning exotic powers that I cook with limitless creativity for cool/hype factor purpose and quick, Bloodpumping, and comprehensive fights of all kinds and avenues. There are RI8 scenes, only 1 in 1st volume, several in 2nd volume early and then very low through the rest, so know that e-chi is not the focus here despite the tags R-I8 and H@rem. R-I8 here also means it's dark and gritty. It's no fairy tale, so expect brut@lity, both psychologically and physically. There is H@rem, but title is Supreme Couple, and this remained, remains, and will remain true throughout the story. The h@rem is also not run-of-mill cuz this is not a H@rem story. It became one due to circumstances and plot, and it couldn't be otherwise with the way I've developed main characters. They are outlandish, for all my purpose and intent, and i immensely enjoy writing their developing journey in my fantastic world of Grand Primal Cosmos. The power structure is simple but broad, and unique because I can't be satisfied otherwise. All ticks of world-buildings are ticked. If you dig fine, immaculate, BIG world-building, you'll enjoy it more and more as you continue to learn about it more in 2nd volume, and then see it in action in 3rd one, but...this one is a long ride. I want to write 1k+ chapters, and it's highly possible with the world-building's skeleton structure i have and I've only revealed 20% of it so far. The current cast of characters, and expanded world-building that I laid out will play big role in the 3rd volume, so wars, drama, and more action. Expect cool dialogues and edginess, but naturally flowed, ingrained in theme, situational, and characters. This is all, folks. Give this one a try if you dig the above mention things and even if you don't, you might come to enjoy them, who knows? :P PS: I reward both: hunger & patience. Thank you for reading, have a good day ^.^/