One Piece: Chaos Kong

LV 4

QuiteSarcastic

Writing Quality: Amazing, almost no errors or typos, and it reads fluently. 5/5 -- Updates: Pretty quick considering the length of the chapters, -/- -- Story Development: Here's where personal preference comes in, or why I rate it slightly lower than I usually would. The start was amazing, no doubt about it. Still, the story direction was affected by what the MC was turning into, perhaps to a very high degree, which derailed much of its potential toward a full villain-sided story. 3/5 from me, sorry. --- Character Design: In all honesty, the MC's personality is what made this story.... not something I looked forward to reading once I saw there was an update. It singlehandedly destroyed my interest to see him grow, become stronger, and thrive in the danger he exposed himself to. It all turned the MC into some kind of second-rate murderhobo whenever possible. I do understand how you wrote the character, I truly do, but when at every turn things are resolved with slaughter and mayhem and chaos, it quickly turns stale. (This is only my personal view.) --- World Background: One-Piece world, what more do I have to say. --- Overall: Great, but not my cup of tea. Highly recommend people to at least check it out and make their own opinions.

LV 15

Anthiaris

Absolute masterpiece, not wanting to spoil but don't get caught up with the average reviews of people who just red the 15 first chapters, it is a very well written story, like every other work by this author. This is a story about a non-human MC, a battle junkie through and through with an astonishing talent for battle and martials arts. The pace of the story is really good and the MC is in no way completely broken OP or whatever at 15 yo like way too much One Piece fanfics. He gains strenght like you could expect him to regarding his training, doesn't get to tussle with Admirals at the beginning and most importantly doesn't steamroll the whole canon story by being Yonko commander level at chapter 15.

LV 4

Lord_Cynrik

If you don’t mind an MC that is lowkey evil, then this fanfic is amazing. Writing quality is god tier by webnovel standards, and the story is very good, side characters are almost all OC’s but they’re very likable and well done, and we’re starting to see more and more canon characters as the MC rises in fame and power. Updates are very frequent, and I really have no complaints. Just know that the mc doesnt mind slaughtering islands lol

LV 14

C_K_3132

You took an interesting fighting maniac, and made him into a cold blooded murderer. Ruined it. Being psycho is fine, but murdering innocent civilians and children? No.

LV 4

Humbuub

MC with his senseless killing really brought down any good thing about this fanfic. I don't mind MC's killing enemies, but he even killed the ones who saved him.

LV 14

Ryan_42

Liked it till about chapter 20, and then the author decides to do some weird stuff. Give it a try though, it's petty interesting. The author does a great job of further building on the One Piece world.

LV 13

KGM

Certified OzoneLayer classic. Can’t say much because it was literally just released but so far its been good.

LV 3

ethan_martineau

what garbage this fan fic is was good until chapter 20 and some bofore thats why even give that lady a devil fruit then she dose r 18 thing so im dropping this aslo you shold add a r 18 tag so people who dont like that suff wont read it. aslo iknow i made so many spelling mistakes

LV 3

GodOfPride_z

Very good beginning, it really caught my attention, I liked the quality of writing, it is one of the best beginnings I have read. But, from chapter 20 or so, at the moment the girl takes the devil fruit, Everything goes downhill, the simple scene that happens after the fight in the gym leaves me with a feeling of disgust, simply incredible.Fast forward a few chapters, around 50 or 80 I think? Where Diddy gives her vitality to save her in a fight, and apparently you want her to be her partner, honestly ruined the story in my opinion.Obviously they are my tastes, there must be people who liked the story, simply giving my opinion, I really like your ff, I'm reading the new one in fact, this one is simply not to my taste.Good luck (Google Translate)

LV 4

LazyMartialSage

Another extraordinary story keep it up, all your previous novels are amazing I'm looking forward to this novel

LV 1

Sonata_0149

Все хорошо начиналось, а потом просто с главы 19 пошло так себе...прочитал, нет скорее дотерпел до 62 главы и все больше не могу..а жаль( был потенциал, но гг своими действиями убил фик, так что 1 звезда

LV 4

Bomberman

it's written well, done well, and all around good BUT chapter 19(and onwards) makes me want to leave a 1 star review for how incredibly foul this book becomes, it gives that same vibes as a Celestial Human in DC(old version as i haven't read the new one and don't plan on it).

LV 4

Taher_Saket

great op ff idea please keep it up and don't drop it

LV 4

Immortal_Duck7

Almost every thing is good with it EXCEPT THAT FREYJA EXISTS, that is my biggest complaint and i have NEVER seen ANYONE actually like her

Lot of review in this fic isn’t justified at all, like there’s literally no problem with authors writing plot development or what not, the mc is acting like a pirate, some cannot take this and just cry atvthe review section for me this fic is truly underrated. Author just keepo on writing and just write. You’ll be better or someday you’ll make a book that will be loved by many. Ciao

LV 1

Rubi_Stone

At first you think that it's a decent novel but the reality will hit you very hard. The case of being talentless again, with so many mistakes, like forgetting the stuff you spoke before, making dumb decisions like not giving mc the knowledge about world, but mc act as if he knows it all, having no understanding of martial arts and real fight but speaking as if you spend 3-5 hours on streets fighting other gangs. Shame that spent my time reading like 20 something chapters

LV 4

Glebby_Boi

One of the best written ff out there. Definitely not a story for those who dislike psycopathic-killer type of MC’s. However, i believe the author does a decent job at justifying such character development, for both the Mc and the crew. I understand some might not enjoy the beginning of story (although I hardly see why not), but please give it a shot. I’m on chapter 108 so far, and I can say that the story development, character growth (both in strength and nature) have been great. Keep up the good work author🙌🏻

One of the best one piece fan fic! You’ll see that his personality of leaving his ‘enemy’ or foe alive is kinda real and make sense later on with the story! It makes his personality more consistent. Try it guys, you’ll not regret it!

LV 14

hyorinmaru

Let me start this review off with something positive. I'll gladly admit that you’re far better than most fanfic authors on this app, but I am somewhat concerned with the abrupt change from Traning/Battle maniac to psychopathic killer. I wouldn't mind killing if it made sense, but reading about the MC killing randoms for nonsensical reasons was a major mood killer. He went straight to killing without any motive other than basic information or because their fear gave him a sense of sick satisfaction. Sorry for rambling on and on, I hope you continue to improve despite any negative reviews you receive.