Fourth Scourge of Star Wars

LV 4

Guy_Slade

The quality of the writing. •The first hundred pages the quality is ok, not great but not bad, a decent number of things are spelt wrong, but the structure is medium to high. • The second batch of a hundred pages the quality is better but still not amazing, the spelling and structure has improved. • The third batch the spelling seems to be on point and the structure is now pretty good. The stability of the updates. •The number of updates at this current stage of reading (306) is high, as it is still in translation mode. •As the story here has yet to reach the current untranslated release I cannot speak to the future stability. The story. •The story starts off slow, but for a novel of length this is what you really want. •In the early chapters the story is a tale of the underdogs trying to boost their tech to be at least on par with the standard. •In the middle releases it is about growth. Growing the colony and personal growth of power of the MC, both of which are done in a rewarding and well paced fashion. •In the later releases it is now all about prepping for the coming galactic war. •In the future releases the story has implied that it will revolve around them trying to find themselves a place within the galactic empire, but that is a long way away from now and will remain to be seen. The character design. •The design of the authors own personal characters is done well, all of them, mc included, seem to be real people, and act and think in realistic ways. •The design of the characters imported from outside the starwars universe is done reasonably well, some of them are brought in to fill the gaps in certain rolls and not really heard from again, which makes sense considering. Some imported characters though are brought in and grown in an interesting yet authentic fashion which flows well with the story and their own expectations. •The design of the native starwars characters is decently done, in the places where changes have occured due to the mc on pre-established characters they are all done in a way which accounts for the traits of these characters, which the author even goes on to explain sometimes at the end of the chapters. World background. •It is Starwars with a hints Homeworld, Sins of the Solar Empire, Starcraft, EVE Online and more. I have tried to write this without putting any real spoilers in it, rather just highlighting the general direction so if someone does bother reading all of this, then it does not ruin anything. All in all I would recommend reading this, as it is decent so far, and how often do you come across a Starwars FF with this many chapters. Also, no harem, no system, weak to strong mc, video game elements, these are the most relevant tags I could think of putting in.

LV 5

Skyriano

This is an amazing Chinese fan fiction. I'm currently on chapter 229, and what sets it apart is the absence of remarkable nationalism that's often found in other stories. The progress in the plot may be slow, but it's constant and engaging, presented from various points of view. The story always provides the background of almost every situation, ensuring you don't feel lost as a reader.

LV 1

DaoistfzhGr5

Hello everyone, I'm Kagami, the original author of this book.I'm very happy to see that my novel can also be recognized abroad, especially thanks to Mr. Sean_Morabito for his translation work, thank you very much. I've been wanting to post this book here for a long time, but my primary job is still to ensure the novel plot continues to progress, so Mr. Sean_Morabito's translation work is very important. The novel plot has been advanced to chapter 1762, "First Contact with the Chiss", and then the Chiss will fight against the threat of Mnggal-Mnggal —— the Mugg Fallow, please continue to look forward to. I will be here permanently in the future, if you have any questions about the plot of the novel, Chinese elements, you can consult me here, I will try to answer as soon as I see, thank you. I hope you continue to support my novel, and I hope you support Mr. Sean_Morabito's translation work.

LV 14

AinzO0alGown

Alright I shall sacrifice myself Wish me luck

LV 5

Bogdan7

the usuall chinesse ff with every1 acting and talking like they were born in china (aliens included), face slaping this or that and "i/we am/are better" vibe....

LV 2

Dusilindironlordor

I love to read stories, and I love even more when the stories I read change. I love "what if?", but a lot of novels roll into the trash, too many. I'll give this novel a chance, but sorry for the racism, I don't trust Chinese novels that also change the characters a lot. If it doesn't come in, I'll leave a comment under the review, good luck, padawans. sorry for english

LV 1

DaoistfzhGr5

Made a 4th civilization flag, using Stellaris，hahaha It may be a little different from what I thought, but it's roughly the same. What I really want is a galaxy in the middle.

LV 4

Rillik

although it's a translation, it's one of the best translations here, if you like politics, conquest and so on, then this fanfic is for you, the writing quality can be messy sometimes but it's mostly readable, the plot is compelling and so is world building, so if you wanna give it a try, please do

LV 11

Ranzidd

Read around 140 chapters, different things to point out: Slow world/society building. Multiple perspectives. Large variety of niche characters and media you may or may not have heard of. MC is all over the place, sometimes competent other times incompetent. That being said if you like world building and colonization novels you'll probably like this, personally its a bit too slow for me who likes to see more individual progress rather than societal.

LV 11

Iskarriot

Review as of Chapter 700: It's a disappointing read. While the author does an excellent job of portraying the world of Star Wars with great attention to detail—from characters and locations to battleships and lore—the problems arise when it comes to the original content created by the author. These issues, while not significant on their own, collectively affect the story in a very negative way. Here are a few glaring issues: 1.The protagonist essentially forced his entire civilization into becoming military extremists based on a fabricated story about three calamities. 2.Cheap deus ex machina: making the protagonist Darth Plagueis' apprentice within 50 chapters, instead of a longer, more gradual plot. 3.The protagonist lacks a personality, appearing cartoonishly evil solely to represent his fall to the dark side. 4.Since the protagonist's faction is built on a lie, there is no genuine goal or greater purpose that would keep the reader engaged. 5.The government/faction created by the protagonist is, in some aspects, worse than Palpatine's empire. While this isn't inherently bad, coupled with the previous issue, the reader has no reason to care about or root for the protagonist and the success of his fledgling empire. 6. No real crisis for the Mc. The Clone Wars are based on Palpatine's secret identity. All Mc has to do is uncover it, and any danger disappears the moment Mace Windu cuts off Palpatine's head. With these problems combined, the plot falls apart for one simple reason: I stopped caring about the protagonist and his goals. The author may write 20 chapters of fierce space battles between the Republic and the Dawn, but I find myself skipping them because whether the Dawn wins or loses has no significance to me. Protagonist's Force grows stronger ? Who cares ? MC also ends up being the story's weakest link. He falls to the dark side before he could ever be likable, so both his fall and his actions afterward are boring at best. It's not helping that, as I mentioned earlier, the author makes his dark side cartoonish and edgy to the point where it almost becomes a parody of itself. The story would have been much better if the Mc were not a Force-sensitive person. Address the issue that most of the galactic wars were caused by Force users and their conflicting ideologies. Emphasize that both the Jedi and the Sith are extremists and unfit to lead any government. There was so much good stuff to explore, yet the author chose the most boring option. Not to mention, the author poorly balances personal power progression with kingdom-building. Imo author could have put a band aid on those problems by including chapters showing that the planets joining the Fourth Alliance were better governed than under the Republic. Early in the story, there were chapters showcasing these aspects when Planet Dawn was colonized, but after chapter 300 there are none.

LV 1

Alexander_Kim_2419

Not update to date by several hundred chapters.Not consisent to sizes like star wars frigates are 150-200m but this story frigates somehow are 50m and destroyers are 100m which is stupid cause even Real life frigates average 125m so I don't know where he thought 50m is a good size or 100m is a good size for a destroyer

Ladies and gentlemen, I am a Chinese reader of this novel. Believe me, as a Star Wars enthusiast, I think this novel is written very brilliantly! The author meticulously studied the background and settings of Star Wars, and even made some clever additions. Believe me, as the story progresses to the execution of Order 66, the fall of the Jedi Order, the rise of the Empire, and the appearance of Marshal Sauron, it will definitely make you very excited! The adaptation of Order 66, in my personal opinion, is even more shocking than the original novel, blending black humor and Greek tragedy.

LV 13

The_Lazy_Slime

I'm rating 4 stars before going in, I'll change it as I read. Though I'm not sure how accurate the translation is because stellaris is in the synopsis, and I'm pretty sure it's not sold in China.

LV 4

TharinduIndunil

Author Don't Just Like a Comment!just Answer the Question!Is There Will Be Saiyan, Kryptonian & Venom in the Story??

LV 4

TharinduIndunil

Will there be Kryptonian & Saiyan??Will there be Kryptonian & Saiyan??Will there be Kryptonian & Saiyan??

LV 4

sumsum_83460

Today I found this series and I am very happy that you translated it because I was following the other one and was quite sad when it stopped. I really like the fact that you corrected the MTL Thanks.

LV 5

IMPAiLER

The fic is nice, it focuses on empire building. Translation is a bit rough around the edges, but it isn't unreadable. Names get mixed up quite a few times, not to mention lots of Chinese names. Dialogues sound Chinese tho since it is written by a Chinese writer so I guess it was to be expected. And that's it basically, if you want to read an empire building sith practicing fic, Then go ahead.

LV 11

Raul_Romero

First of all, very surprised by the quality of the translation, I know it could be much better but compared to others it's not bad at all. Since it's a translated book I can't comment on anything other than the translation, I must say that what bothers the reading pace a lot are the name changes in each chapter, I'm currently at ch 380 and I can say that the quality improves but the names don't, for example Aayla Secura shouldn't even be mentioned but it turns out to be the slave with blonde hair, Aayla doesn't even have hair hahahah. In the end, at least I would expect an improvement in the names since reading more than 1000 ch with changing names kills the reading pace. Lastly, I sincerely hope that you make it to the end and keep up the good work, congratulations

LV 4

Nob7

For support.. [ I'll make a real review once I'll read 50 or so chapters]

LV 3

DaoistgK3LCv

It can be slow sometimes but it has a really good development of the story nad the character, the fourth groups development is really great too