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Leezertje

So, let me finally write a review for my favorite novel on WN. Where to start.. this is an absolutely amazing novel with solid world building of not 1 but 2 worlds. It already starts with an interesting synopsis, a, for me, new concept of going from one survival zombie apocalypse to a monster apocalypse combined with fantasie aspects and for a big part city building aspect. You would expect the city building part to at some point get old. But it doesn’t as there is a nice combination of fighting, building, surviving, system growth, character growth, new characters that each grow in their own way, romance, new couples, old couples, children, exploration and different cultural and moral views. The author has clearly thought everything out really far in to the future. There are clear rules wich are kept and never changed because of “plot armor” and such. The rules are absolutely consistent and can be build upon. And even tough the rules don’t change for convienience sakes it does not get predictable. Somehow the author keeps thinking of new situations in a repeating cycle in a way that doesn’t bore me. The world is incredibly big and promises to be further explored. The characters are heart warming and mostly very loving. There is darknes in the story as there is bound to be due to the differing worldviews between our protagonists world and the natives of the new world. It makes you life and die for the characters. The story both me laugh, cry and angry, but mostly it warms my heart. This is a story that grows on you. It starts a bit slow but with it it makes sure the characters that you will grow to love and the different worlds make sense to you. It is all very “complete”. The people aren’t two dimensional they learn, and grow, they work hard and change mostly for the beter. That doesn’t mean to say the story is perfect. Some parts take a bit long but I have noticed that when pointed out the author has never made the same mistake twice. She is very active and talks and listens to her readers though not so much as to influence the story. As an author she grows and makes this story more and more amazing. If you like a good story with likable characters that don’t get everything for free, that make reasonable and not spur of the moment short sighted decisions, with action, fantasie, systems, romance, adorable baby’s, spicy couples, survival, science, building, slice of life and more, this is for you. If you like quick transmigration with an immediately over powered main character that build her city the moment she gets transfered, understands everything immediately as she is a “genius” (she is but let’s not talk about that, we all love our mad plant scientist 👌❤️), and has everything magically going her way whiteout rime nor reason, this is not for you. She makes mistakes, she will have her regrets, she will have her worries. It is what makes her more than just a character and what makes me love her and this story. Give this book a chance and maybe we will meet as fellow Altherrans ❤️ #onceanAltherranalwaysanAltherran 💪 #cometooursidewehavemanacookies 😋

4mth
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XxErenxX

rarely I review stories but this one deserves the time, it has been so long since I found a story that has plot, development of world and so many interesting characters and a story so endearing that makes me wait for the upload of new chapters, author-nim you are awesome and your imagination is unmatched, there are few authors that can make a story that interesting and with a good flow to read, until now I hadn't found any kind of hole in the plot or something important that was forgotten, which for someone that reads stories all the time is hard to find, what I mean is that the story is great and you wont be lost because the plot fits right in to what it proposes. Again thank you for allowing us to be able to read and enjoy a little of your likings on you book. it's not my first language so forgive me for any kind of misspelling :)

1mth
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AlyxAtlas

I love this book, it starts off fun and action packed before leading into some well thought out and great world buidling. The story fleshes out the characters and community where you feel a part of Alterra. The action slowed down as we made it to Town stage but hey, who told these villages to be so weak? Also the author is amazing and really takes the time to ensure all the points and little details remain consistent and important. I never feel as thought something or someone was introduced for the simple push of a small plot point. They are all helping build the new world of Alterra together. On to the next Volume and new level to the adventure, hoping the runes come back into play now that Alterra has a wider network of reach and information. Also, who wouldn’t love Althea? Our badass zombie killing theif in the night that made an entire Town off the sweat of her pregnant back during an apocalypse. Alright…Ive rambled my thoughts enough. Just read it lol 🏹

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DaoistusLPJe

Very Good Story Even De pizza e selfie ou the Time

8d
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Vanessa_Pillai

phenomenal novel. yet intriguing and interesting

11d
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Vivian_Gwea

The story line is quite interesting and nice to read

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14d
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tamara_Leigh

Well i love this book so much,i always check for updates,new chapters and always waiting for limited free so i can binge reading it hahaha,the characters titles & names are so funny for me coz its sounds familiar,.really2x good👍👍👏👏

22d
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DaoistzLappd

I support this book I love the progression along the way

23d
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Lilly_7093

IT was amazing i would definitely recommend it forever

26d
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Jessica_Woodside

Although there's a lot of repeated phrases and words, the story is pretty great and it's so long that you can keep coming back to it.

28d
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DaoistOLDhFv

The story is the best written and building similar to Lord of shadows in quality. I stopped at chapter 100. I can't no afford the book. To complete it It`s more than 100eur. Also i will desintall the app. Sorry for the author. It's to expensive for me.

29d
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Ali_Shah_2166

ok. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .

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1mth
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alouisse

a decent read. would be better if MC's husband tones down his sexism and toxic masculinity outbursts.

1mth
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Zook_51
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this story has a lot of promise that I'm looking forward to reading

1mth
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Page_Holland

The story is amazing 😻, please 🙏 am at upcoming writer , i will really appreciate if you can support my book. Title: The Runaway Moon 🌙

1mth
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Mercy_Ani_3502

This is an absolutely amazing novel. A must read

1mth
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Sethekele_Moyo

Interesting I am hooked. [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=Out of it]

1mth
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4568aditya

Amazing stories good character lines and buildup of there character, it need some here and there touch-up but all together it fine time spending stories

2mth
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Marziel
LV 13 Badge

One more fine Kingdom Building Novel, love the different character personalities and detailed discriptions. sometimes the reading flow / chapter order doesnt feel as perfect as it could be, as the flashbacks before migration and changing pov's in wars suspend the arc of suspense a bit. But overall i like it very much and want to explore more of the world and wish for at least another 2k Chapters.

3mth
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Kat_DC
LV 13 Badge

I love this book. I know I’m late on the uptake, but I’ve been binging since I started. Characters are awesome. Pacing is great!! Apart from some minor grammatical errors, I’d give this book 10 stars if I could. Great job author!! 🔥🔥🔥

3mth
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Daoistto07Gy

This is really well written and the storyline remains fresh despite it being an apocalyptic novel

4mth
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Ann9y_Sm

This is a great story with a lot of potential😻😻😻😻😻

4mth
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Lncea
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Good story and I especially like the Female Lead. I wanted to be reborn as her son lol. Anyway, great writing and story, the pacing is also great and I don't have any negative to say as I am satisfied with how the story is going.

5mth
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Fi3ry_Gurl

must read 🌷✨ one of the best in this genre.

5mth
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hks
LV 13 Badge

I just started reading this story yesterday in a different app (Wattpad), I thought it was dropped but luckily you've put a link. It's great but sometimes the fl forgets that she's pregnant 😅. But it's good overall for me.[img=recommend]

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5mth
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DaoistDRm5t3

A primeira historia que encontro que é animada, envolvente e tem romance [img=Loving it] adorei, virei fã, espero que continue assim.

5mth
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Badboss
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This story is just amazing and fun to read and is not boring at all but I just want to know if this novel is paid only and not free anywhere on any website. Other than free pass of course. If it is free on any website please do tell me as I cannot afford to pay to read a novel but I really like this novel.

6mth
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shaely_wilbur

Great Read, well written, captivating! looking forward to the next chapter

6mth
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vanny_6082

Really really amazing book with such lovely characters

6mth
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cloverme

the first novel on my reading list... it's totally hooked me.... almost always make me comment, after reading. well...sometimes....hehehe... I'm not the kind of people who always make comments, but a lot in the paragraph make me itch to comment... love it so far ❣️

6mth
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Leezertje

So, let me finally write a review for my favorite novel on WN. Where to start.. this is an absolutely amazing novel with solid world building of not 1 but 2 worlds. It already starts with an interesting synopsis, a, for me, new concept of going from one survival zombie apocalypse to a monster apocalypse combined with fantasie aspects and for a big part city building aspect. You would expect the city building part to at some point get old. But it doesn’t as there is a nice combination of fighting, building, surviving, system growth, character growth, new characters that each grow in their own way, romance, new couples, old couples, children, exploration and different cultural and moral views. The author has clearly thought everything out really far in to the future. There are clear rules wich are kept and never changed because of “plot armor” and such. The rules are absolutely consistent and can be build upon. And even tough the rules don’t change for convienience sakes it does not get predictable. Somehow the author keeps thinking of new situations in a repeating cycle in a way that doesn’t bore me. The world is incredibly big and promises to be further explored. The characters are heart warming and mostly very loving. There is darknes in the story as there is bound to be due to the differing worldviews between our protagonists world and the natives of the new world. It makes you life and die for the characters. The story both me laugh, cry and angry, but mostly it warms my heart. This is a story that grows on you. It starts a bit slow but with it it makes sure the characters that you will grow to love and the different worlds make sense to you. It is all very “complete”. The people aren’t two dimensional they learn, and grow, they work hard and change mostly for the beter. That doesn’t mean to say the story is perfect. Some parts take a bit long but I have noticed that when pointed out the author has never made the same mistake twice. She is very active and talks and listens to her readers though not so much as to influence the story. As an author she grows and makes this story more and more amazing. If you like a good story with likable characters that don’t get everything for free, that make reasonable and not spur of the moment short sighted decisions, with action, fantasie, systems, romance, adorable baby’s, spicy couples, survival, science, building, slice of life and more, this is for you. If you like quick transmigration with an immediately over powered main character that build her city the moment she gets transfered, understands everything immediately as she is a “genius” (she is but let’s not talk about that, we all love our mad plant scientist 👌❤️), and has everything magically going her way whiteout rime nor reason, this is not for you. She makes mistakes, she will have her regrets, she will have her worries. It is what makes her more than just a character and what makes me love her and this story. Give this book a chance and maybe we will meet as fellow Altherrans ❤️ #onceanAltherranalwaysanAltherran 💪 #cometooursidewehavemanacookies 😋

4mth
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XxErenxX

rarely I review stories but this one deserves the time, it has been so long since I found a story that has plot, development of world and so many interesting characters and a story so endearing that makes me wait for the upload of new chapters, author-nim you are awesome and your imagination is unmatched, there are few authors that can make a story that interesting and with a good flow to read, until now I hadn't found any kind of hole in the plot or something important that was forgotten, which for someone that reads stories all the time is hard to find, what I mean is that the story is great and you wont be lost because the plot fits right in to what it proposes. Again thank you for allowing us to be able to read and enjoy a little of your likings on you book. it's not my first language so forgive me for any kind of misspelling :)

1mth
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AlyxAtlas

I love this book, it starts off fun and action packed before leading into some well thought out and great world buidling. The story fleshes out the characters and community where you feel a part of Alterra. The action slowed down as we made it to Town stage but hey, who told these villages to be so weak? Also the author is amazing and really takes the time to ensure all the points and little details remain consistent and important. I never feel as thought something or someone was introduced for the simple push of a small plot point. They are all helping build the new world of Alterra together. On to the next Volume and new level to the adventure, hoping the runes come back into play now that Alterra has a wider network of reach and information. Also, who wouldn’t love Althea? Our badass zombie killing theif in the night that made an entire Town off the sweat of her pregnant back during an apocalypse. Alright…Ive rambled my thoughts enough. Just read it lol 🏹

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3d
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DaoistusLPJe

Very Good Story Even De pizza e selfie ou the Time

8d
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Vanessa_Pillai

phenomenal novel. yet intriguing and interesting

11d
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Vivian_Gwea

The story line is quite interesting and nice to read

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14d
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tamara_Leigh

Well i love this book so much,i always check for updates,new chapters and always waiting for limited free so i can binge reading it hahaha,the characters titles & names are so funny for me coz its sounds familiar,.really2x good👍👍👏👏

22d
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DaoistzLappd

I support this book I love the progression along the way

23d
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Lilly_7093

IT was amazing i would definitely recommend it forever

26d
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Jessica_Woodside

Although there's a lot of repeated phrases and words, the story is pretty great and it's so long that you can keep coming back to it.

28d
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DaoistOLDhFv

The story is the best written and building similar to Lord of shadows in quality. I stopped at chapter 100. I can't no afford the book. To complete it It`s more than 100eur. Also i will desintall the app. Sorry for the author. It's to expensive for me.

29d
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Ali_Shah_2166

ok. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .

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1mth
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alouisse

a decent read. would be better if MC's husband tones down his sexism and toxic masculinity outbursts.

1mth
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Zook_51
LV 15 Badge

this story has a lot of promise that I'm looking forward to reading

1mth
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Page_Holland

The story is amazing 😻, please 🙏 am at upcoming writer , i will really appreciate if you can support my book. Title: The Runaway Moon 🌙

1mth
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Mercy_Ani_3502

This is an absolutely amazing novel. A must read

1mth
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Sethekele_Moyo

Interesting I am hooked. [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=Out of it]

1mth
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4568aditya

Amazing stories good character lines and buildup of there character, it need some here and there touch-up but all together it fine time spending stories

2mth
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Marziel
LV 13 Badge

One more fine Kingdom Building Novel, love the different character personalities and detailed discriptions. sometimes the reading flow / chapter order doesnt feel as perfect as it could be, as the flashbacks before migration and changing pov's in wars suspend the arc of suspense a bit. But overall i like it very much and want to explore more of the world and wish for at least another 2k Chapters.

3mth
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Kat_DC
LV 13 Badge

I love this book. I know I’m late on the uptake, but I’ve been binging since I started. Characters are awesome. Pacing is great!! Apart from some minor grammatical errors, I’d give this book 10 stars if I could. Great job author!! 🔥🔥🔥

3mth
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Daoistto07Gy

This is really well written and the storyline remains fresh despite it being an apocalyptic novel

4mth
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Ann9y_Sm

This is a great story with a lot of potential😻😻😻😻😻

4mth
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Lncea
LV 12 Badge

Good story and I especially like the Female Lead. I wanted to be reborn as her son lol. Anyway, great writing and story, the pacing is also great and I don't have any negative to say as I am satisfied with how the story is going.

5mth
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Fi3ry_Gurl

must read 🌷✨ one of the best in this genre.

5mth
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hks
LV 13 Badge

I just started reading this story yesterday in a different app (Wattpad), I thought it was dropped but luckily you've put a link. It's great but sometimes the fl forgets that she's pregnant 😅. But it's good overall for me.[img=recommend]

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5mth
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DaoistDRm5t3

A primeira historia que encontro que é animada, envolvente e tem romance [img=Loving it] adorei, virei fã, espero que continue assim.

5mth
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Badboss
LV 12 Badge

This story is just amazing and fun to read and is not boring at all but I just want to know if this novel is paid only and not free anywhere on any website. Other than free pass of course. If it is free on any website please do tell me as I cannot afford to pay to read a novel but I really like this novel.

6mth
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shaely_wilbur

Great Read, well written, captivating! looking forward to the next chapter

6mth
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vanny_6082

Really really amazing book with such lovely characters

6mth
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cloverme

the first novel on my reading list... it's totally hooked me.... almost always make me comment, after reading. well...sometimes....hehehe... I'm not the kind of people who always make comments, but a lot in the paragraph make me itch to comment... love it so far ❣️

6mth
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