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Great job author. So far I have read 15 chapters and all I can say is that the grammar is impeccable, the pace of story is awesome. Hopefully you get a contract and this gets more audience.
Hey guys, Author here. I went on a break for a while but I’m back now. I will begin the usual daily chapters very soon.
I haven't read the book yet, but as a fellow respecter of idan, I must rate this book make idan nor go rate me 😂
Nice to see a fellow Nigerian author on Webnovel. You have really unique characters.
I haven't even read the book😂😂😂 but the title alone is 5 stars. If I read it and it blows me away na another five stars for you be that
Deserves a plaque in the hall of fame for this story, repping the club and doing it justice.
I was just scrolling through the platform and I saw this book, the idan called my attention. As a fellow man of culture, I will support this book💛💛✊ Idan no dey carry last
I read until Chapter 2~ Really good descriptions on the feeling of surroundings and I really enjoyed the descriptors that you used! I was going to say that I wanted more detail in the actual surroundings since there really weren't any in chapter 1, but you already improved upon that in chapter 2, which is also good. I feel though that you didn't give enough when it came to the MC, I didn't connect with him at all and I couldn't really feel why it was so important for him to have his life changed at this point. You'd mentioned that the exam was super important for him to pass and that failing could basically destroy his life. He's late to the exam but, is allowed to take it anyways so that took away from a moment that would give us that 'This is why he's looking forward to this so much,' moment. We the readers, and he as the character, none of us know if he's passed or failed this exam yet so it's a little confusing as to why he seems so desperate for this life changing power when as of right now, the exam could very well go in his favor and be completely fine. I think if you had indicated that maybe he wasn't that smart or struggled with studying, that fear of failing would be more amplified and the failure aspect would be much more understandable. As you've written him though, he seems to be quite studious and serious about his studies, so while I understand the stress of failing or passing an exam, it seems that he more than likely would pass. I also didn't get a feel for what the characters look like either, and I think you could've written that really well. So overall, a quick summary. Your writing was good and your descriptors for feelings were excellent, however the characters & the world around us (the latter referring to chapter 1) could've been built upon or described much more and it was difficult to connect to the MC's fear of failing/anxiousness of gaining powers.
Tiết lộ Spoiler
Honestly, this caught me off guard...No be Idan be this!Please support my book as well I am also a Nigerian writer with most of my characters name being of Nigerian languagesMuch love❤️❤️❤️
I did not even read the novel but just the title alone captured my attention ...... So this itching hand is giving it a five star rating .....keep up the work......
swear I saw my person in this app.....u just create a master piece..... u make us proud....#IDAN
I haven't started the book personally but from the awesome reviews and the Nigeria tag, I'll start supplying power stones
Heyyy, Author!! Take all my powers tones, I mean, take everything! This story is a ballistic one, right from the cover and its title. OMG! I was awed. So, I decided to give a read. Interestingly, the characters and grammatical syntax are superseded my expectations. A take from me: Flesh out the MC, Ebuka's action and descriptions around him using the : "show don't tell" device. The elaboration on certain words, should be moderate, but then, talk more about actions! Not showing us. Asides this, it's a five stars from me! Keep writing, dear Author.
good concept, i like how the story starts and it gets better gradually. currently at chapter 20 and i must say i want to see what happened to ebuka after he entered the portal opened up by abacha
When I saw this book my first thought was, "As an Idanress I must read it" but I never expected that this book would be well written. It's written in typical Nigerian style; enough description and well written details.
hello author the story was really good and interesting. I loved the names of all the characters they seemed very original so five stars for that. 4 stars for the story development because i kept losing track of the fantasy world that u brought . but great work cant wait for more of your books
Awesome book. Grammar is perfect along with good choosing of words. Descriptions are perfect along with story line and world building. Hope to see more.
First, thig first, I loved the Story plot and the mc a lot. This story ah potential and a great writing art. Though, the writer is trying as the growth of the story is pretty great. It is enjoyable Great work author
Hi this is really super awesome. You obviously put a lot of thought in the world system and the world itself. nice!
Awesome book. Hope it blows up. world building is insane as well as the grammar.
nice one bro even if I haven't read thru I'm giving you a perfect 5 as a fellow Nigerian. all my power stone are for you from now on
I love this book, though it's just starting to Kick off, I love the story development, the characters, the placement of words and most especially this is my Nigeria doing. keep up the good work my bro
Wow perfect five! An amazing read with an amazing plot. It was enjoyable nonetheless! Also, the pacing and word choice were lit! I am impressed nonetheless. Keep it up and you will surely find success.
Great book I did say so my self. Give it a try. I have written lots of novels but all on paper. I have been reading lots of webnovels and mtls too so I decided why not upload haha. This doesn’t have your regular troupe of young masters and what not so I hope you do share it with your friends. Let’s grow 😅
Great job author. So far I have read 15 chapters and all I can say is that the grammar is impeccable, the pace of story is awesome. Hopefully you get a contract and this gets more audience.
Hey guys, Author here. I went on a break for a while but I’m back now. I will begin the usual daily chapters very soon.
I haven't read the book yet, but as a fellow respecter of idan, I must rate this book make idan nor go rate me 😂
Nice to see a fellow Nigerian author on Webnovel. You have really unique characters.
I haven't even read the book😂😂😂 but the title alone is 5 stars. If I read it and it blows me away na another five stars for you be that
Deserves a plaque in the hall of fame for this story, repping the club and doing it justice.
I was just scrolling through the platform and I saw this book, the idan called my attention. As a fellow man of culture, I will support this book💛💛✊ Idan no dey carry last
I read until Chapter 2~ Really good descriptions on the feeling of surroundings and I really enjoyed the descriptors that you used! I was going to say that I wanted more detail in the actual surroundings since there really weren't any in chapter 1, but you already improved upon that in chapter 2, which is also good. I feel though that you didn't give enough when it came to the MC, I didn't connect with him at all and I couldn't really feel why it was so important for him to have his life changed at this point. You'd mentioned that the exam was super important for him to pass and that failing could basically destroy his life. He's late to the exam but, is allowed to take it anyways so that took away from a moment that would give us that 'This is why he's looking forward to this so much,' moment. We the readers, and he as the character, none of us know if he's passed or failed this exam yet so it's a little confusing as to why he seems so desperate for this life changing power when as of right now, the exam could very well go in his favor and be completely fine. I think if you had indicated that maybe he wasn't that smart or struggled with studying, that fear of failing would be more amplified and the failure aspect would be much more understandable. As you've written him though, he seems to be quite studious and serious about his studies, so while I understand the stress of failing or passing an exam, it seems that he more than likely would pass. I also didn't get a feel for what the characters look like either, and I think you could've written that really well. So overall, a quick summary. Your writing was good and your descriptors for feelings were excellent, however the characters & the world around us (the latter referring to chapter 1) could've been built upon or described much more and it was difficult to connect to the MC's fear of failing/anxiousness of gaining powers.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Honestly, this caught me off guard...No be Idan be this!Please support my book as well I am also a Nigerian writer with most of my characters name being of Nigerian languagesMuch love❤️❤️❤️
I did not even read the novel but just the title alone captured my attention ...... So this itching hand is giving it a five star rating .....keep up the work......
swear I saw my person in this app.....u just create a master piece..... u make us proud....#IDAN
I haven't started the book personally but from the awesome reviews and the Nigeria tag, I'll start supplying power stones
Heyyy, Author!! Take all my powers tones, I mean, take everything! This story is a ballistic one, right from the cover and its title. OMG! I was awed. So, I decided to give a read. Interestingly, the characters and grammatical syntax are superseded my expectations. A take from me: Flesh out the MC, Ebuka's action and descriptions around him using the : "show don't tell" device. The elaboration on certain words, should be moderate, but then, talk more about actions! Not showing us. Asides this, it's a five stars from me! Keep writing, dear Author.
good concept, i like how the story starts and it gets better gradually. currently at chapter 20 and i must say i want to see what happened to ebuka after he entered the portal opened up by abacha
When I saw this book my first thought was, "As an Idanress I must read it" but I never expected that this book would be well written. It's written in typical Nigerian style; enough description and well written details.
hello author the story was really good and interesting. I loved the names of all the characters they seemed very original so five stars for that. 4 stars for the story development because i kept losing track of the fantasy world that u brought . but great work cant wait for more of your books
Awesome book. Grammar is perfect along with good choosing of words. Descriptions are perfect along with story line and world building. Hope to see more.
First, thig first, I loved the Story plot and the mc a lot. This story ah potential and a great writing art. Though, the writer is trying as the growth of the story is pretty great. It is enjoyable Great work author
Hi this is really super awesome. You obviously put a lot of thought in the world system and the world itself. nice!
Awesome book. Hope it blows up. world building is insane as well as the grammar.
nice one bro even if I haven't read thru I'm giving you a perfect 5 as a fellow Nigerian. all my power stone are for you from now on
I love this book, though it's just starting to Kick off, I love the story development, the characters, the placement of words and most especially this is my Nigeria doing. keep up the good work my bro
Wow perfect five! An amazing read with an amazing plot. It was enjoyable nonetheless! Also, the pacing and word choice were lit! I am impressed nonetheless. Keep it up and you will surely find success.
Great book I did say so my self. Give it a try. I have written lots of novels but all on paper. I have been reading lots of webnovels and mtls too so I decided why not upload haha. This doesn’t have your regular troupe of young masters and what not so I hope you do share it with your friends. Let’s grow 😅