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Great premise excited to see where it goes I’m a binge reader so I don’t usually continue after the free chapter until we get to 500 plus and then I read about every 500 or a 1000 chapter until complete I would highly recommend Grammerly! The free version, if you go back and put every chapter through it you should be able to fix a ton of critics opinions of the book❤️😇
I feel the same as many reviewers. It’s a fun story but the grammar is not good.
Pretty decent story, but the translation errors and various issues spoil it so hard. Also, only 20 free chapters, for something this poorly translated hurts.
Garbage grammer and spelling. pay wall way to early to really determine if it's worth the money no really world building
bad translation is real. Unless you want to use additional mind powet to understand each chapters.also, author in 200 chapters seems like rushing.
The story is interesting, but you hit a paywall way too quickly for how low quality the spelling and grammar is, and for how short the chapters are.
J don't care about the grammar but author please it's too early to pay for chapters make it at chapter 100 or 60 sir
The premises look good. But it felt like this was written by a kid. Bad grammar. Bad sentence structuring. and the general flow of the story seems wrong. too cringy one might say, very unnatural. The idea seems good, but the way you present those ideas is bad. I don't really know if it improves further on. But I don't really feel like waiting until it becomes good. we readers don't have that much patience. You need to rewrite back and polish your writing.
i haven't even read it but the absolute lack of grammar in the synopsis tells me how this story will be and i can see a disregard for grammar
Good Novel but work on the Grammer, it's even worst than MTL.. lol.. but the plot is good though .
Extremely poor grammar. You have to edit chapters. Nice idea and plot, though. Please fix the grammar
the story, characters, and world seem interesting. it's just difficult to see it under the mountain if grammatical mistakes.
The story itself is okay, the only thing that is holding it back is the grammar. it's like mtl hahahaha
You might've locked the chapters but there's no way I will be paying for this garbage grammar. I will of course read it for free. You might want to hire an editor tho...
Tiết lộ Spoiler
It's an interesting story, world, and magic. It's just the absolute lack of grammar, and many sentences make no sense. Also, the pay wall is way too early, especially for the quality and length of the chapters. The characters are decent, but half the time, you can't understand their intentions or emotions because of the poor writing.
This has the potential to be a great storY. Let’s name some pros Golems Side characters that are memorable Pretty good system Intresting world ready to see more of it. Negs Way to much unnecessary comedy No sense of urgency or worry which makes you question how believable the mc Great stories require uncertainty or mystery there is non to be found
Great premise excited to see where it goes I’m a binge reader so I don’t usually continue after the free chapter until we get to 500 plus and then I read about every 500 or a 1000 chapter until complete I would highly recommend Grammerly! The free version, if you go back and put every chapter through it you should be able to fix a ton of critics opinions of the book❤️😇
I feel the same as many reviewers. It’s a fun story but the grammar is not good.
Pretty decent story, but the translation errors and various issues spoil it so hard. Also, only 20 free chapters, for something this poorly translated hurts.
Garbage grammer and spelling. pay wall way to early to really determine if it's worth the money no really world building
bad translation is real. Unless you want to use additional mind powet to understand each chapters.also, author in 200 chapters seems like rushing.
The story is interesting, but you hit a paywall way too quickly for how low quality the spelling and grammar is, and for how short the chapters are.
J don't care about the grammar but author please it's too early to pay for chapters make it at chapter 100 or 60 sir
The premises look good. But it felt like this was written by a kid. Bad grammar. Bad sentence structuring. and the general flow of the story seems wrong. too cringy one might say, very unnatural. The idea seems good, but the way you present those ideas is bad. I don't really know if it improves further on. But I don't really feel like waiting until it becomes good. we readers don't have that much patience. You need to rewrite back and polish your writing.
i haven't even read it but the absolute lack of grammar in the synopsis tells me how this story will be and i can see a disregard for grammar
Good Novel but work on the Grammer, it's even worst than MTL.. lol.. but the plot is good though .
Extremely poor grammar. You have to edit chapters. Nice idea and plot, though. Please fix the grammar
the story, characters, and world seem interesting. it's just difficult to see it under the mountain if grammatical mistakes.
The story itself is okay, the only thing that is holding it back is the grammar. it's like mtl hahahaha
You might've locked the chapters but there's no way I will be paying for this garbage grammar. I will of course read it for free. You might want to hire an editor tho...
Tiết lộ Spoiler It's an interesting story, world, and magic. It's just the absolute lack of grammar, and many sentences make no sense. Also, the pay wall is way too early, especially for the quality and length of the chapters. The characters are decent, but half the time, you can't understand their intentions or emotions because of the poor writing.
This has the potential to be a great storY. Let’s name some pros Golems Side characters that are memorable Pretty good system Intresting world ready to see more of it. Negs Way to much unnecessary comedy No sense of urgency or worry which makes you question how believable the mc Great stories require uncertainty or mystery there is non to be found