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Moments 2020
m_P3rch
m_P3rch
4 days ago
Commented

True love

Come to think of it… it was also like the way her brother looked at soul shards.

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

m_P3rch
m_P3rch
8 days ago
Commented

Sword army or Song army?

All around them, the Sword Army was seething and boiling as it prepared to go into battle… perhaps the final battle of this hellish war. The legions were assembling into marching columns, the enthralled Nightmare Creatures were roaring in frenzy, and the Saints were summoning their battle Memories, ready to lead the charge. 

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

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m_P3rch
m_P3rch
10 days ago
Commented

*his* right shoulder?

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Chaos' Heir

Chaos' Heir

Fantasy · Eveofchaos

m_P3rch
m_P3rch
17 days ago
Commented

You missed some kind of quotation mark here and in couple of next paragraphs during this dialogue

m_P3rch
m_P3rch
17 days ago
Commented

Ooops, AI prompt is still there

m_P3rch
m_P3rch
19 days ago
Commented

You basically copier part of the chapter and pasted it again. Please check

I inhaled, ignoring the ache in my chest. "We leave. Now."

The Villain Professor's Second Chance

The Villain Professor's Second Chance

Fantasy · Arkalphaze

m_P3rch
m_P3rch
19 days ago
Commented

Why is he asking again?

"Your call," Asterion said. "Valemore—or Kael'Thorne."

The Villain Professor's Second Chance

The Villain Professor's Second Chance

Fantasy · Arkalphaze

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m_P3rch
1 months ago
Commented

Congrats on 1000 chapters!!

m_P3rch
m_P3rch
1 months ago
Commented

Hero is very good at digging his own grave