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Viết đánh giágreat fic, some problems with editing, vc e br? achei um idiota em uma das frases e ri muito aqui obrigado
yo I'm only at like chapters 40 but please tell me that he later makes changes to the golems like u could make a golem spear as all it needs to level up is to kill. u could also do a blacksmith golem or a dragon golem or a house shape golem
the story is great but the Grammer just sucks. I think the author should use Microsoft word and run review to solve majority of the errors.
This feels like a new author. The beginning is a bit to chew through for me, with more grammar and spelling mistakes than I normally push through. that being said, the author has improved leaps and bounds with only minor errors in later chapters. the story, world building, pacing, and evolving of the characters over time is wonderful. I am glad I stuck with this story because it has become a favorite of mine. I look forward to seeing where the author takes us from here.
Reading this novel I at first thought it was decent, not many stories deal in golem magic and it had it’s merits. But as the story continues further the way characters speak just feels off as of written by a teenager who infused how he speaks irl into how he writes. With sentences spoken by characters having unnecessary words that makes it feel less as if they are saying something but make everything get views from the author’s perspective and not the actual character saying them
it started off with a lot of potential the characters had an okay development, the story kept a good pace, and the power levels generally meant what was shown, but as time progressed the author began to pay less and less attention to his own world contradicting his own statements. additionally the power levels slowly became meaningless to the point where Alec and his group begin fighting not only with a tier 5 as a group of low tier 4 and tier 3s with alec and his golems being low tier 3s or lower, but a tier 5 with a time element when alec was literally told point blank by the system which has never been wrong that even a mid tier 4 would shatter him even with a low tier 4 ally and his golems just prior to him hitting tier 3. all of this is even before we get into the amount of filler and boring side stories the author pushes into his chapters or the constant repeat descriptions. if i had only read the first 100 chapters I would have rated this much higher, but the issues simply get to great over time. I would have dropped this story after around chapter 250-300 if i hadn't bulk bought chapters but even having paid for chapters up to around 500ish it has gotten so poorly handled that i am stopping by 450ish
The authors notes are longer than the chapters. And they are everywhere. Also locked at chapter 20 before any plot points are decided or created. No reason to want more from the story.
am I the only one who found the idea of golems talking dumb...I mean they can get battle intelligence n all but talking like a person means he need to be alive that means that is not a golem.. couldn't continue reading more than that idea was cool but execution left me wanting
This novel is honestly the biggest dumpster fire I’ve seen. The author spends no effort into proofreading or editing, has completely broken story lore by randomly changing his mind on key plot points or just simply forgetting and not bothering to try adding it in where it’s relevant. The system element is also really forced and unnatural because Author can’t decide on a stable IQ for MC. The only consistent thing about this novel is the amount of updates if you want to flush coins you’ve been warned. A few examples: - Every single chapter since ch 1 is an absolute mess of grammatical, punctual, and formatting errors that make it absolutely abysmal to read (I have read until ch 220) no hate if English isn’t your first language but with 500+ chapters out and multiple comments every chapter pointing it out you should start editing it - In ch 1 paragraph 2 MC states he has been reincarnated/transmigrated into his new body 14 years ago (story starts before his 15th birthday). Author then decides that instead at some point he transmigrated from where the story started and his memories from childhood are now jumbled and hazy since they “weren’t his” - MC starts to create different golems even upgrading some to elemental golems, Author decides to full pivot and MC’s GOLEM CREATING PATH has switched to making CYBORGS. Literal cyborgs, his spearman robot can apparently turn SPEAR QI into a PLASMA LAZER - MC acquires a DIVINE weapon (highest rank we’ve heard of) that is broken and requires the blood of SLAIN enemies to repair it, Author then has MC use a completely different blade for 90% of the time and even when he does use it no notification comes up from the system that announces anything happened
a good concept story but just one thing killed it for me and that's bad grammar at points in the story that were really irritating for me .like I don't comment on grammar because mine is also not that good but it helps pull the story at it's worse points and accentuates some best points .so yeah if anyone wants my opinion then I will say give it a try for a few chapters and if it's not to your liking then leave it . Bye bye fellow review readers.
Review from about chapter 70: The grammar is bad, but there was clearly some attempts at editing. The storyline is decent. The narrative is pleasant and has a reasonable flow. The mc’s character development is fake, but the justification is the system is affecting how others view him and making him op at everything. So it’s acceptable in the context of the system genera. It’s a decent story to read while doing other stuff.
Enjoyed the novel but the fights are starting to take way to many chapters as you have to unlock all of them.
a few flaws in the first 20 chapters with things that don't rly make sense but still alr to read if u skip a few chapters ig.
I have enjoyed this book immensely as I find the premise of the book to be very intriguing. The main character is very good as I look forward to reading about hid development as the personal development of the character has captivated me. Overall the world building and the characters have been top notch.
Writing at the start is rough , really rough. Stuck through it as there are edits here and there that hint at better writing to come. What killed it for me though was the character progression. Just jumps all over thr place and really killed the enjoyment for me. I really wanted to like this book as the premise seems great but the execution really doesn’t make this worth reading. And certainly not worth using stones on.
Author your ideas and conyepts are really good and unique in this novel but maybe its because of grammar or those weird mix words that disrupts the pace and likeness of this novel.
The plot is fine, there is nothing really new to the formula, but there is just no story being told, it suffers from blank space syndrome as well as bad grammar and there is no description of anything, we are just told it happened. Really disappointed because the concept is good, but the execution is just lacking in every area.
The story could be amazing but a combination of 3 things ruins it for ,and they are the grammar, the fast paywall, and the way the author rewords paragraphs so that he can get a higher word count
This has the potential to be a great storY. Let’s name some pros Golems Side characters that are memorable Pretty good system Intresting world ready to see more of it. Negs Way to much unnecessary comedy No sense of urgency or worry which makes you question how believable the mc Great stories require uncertainty or mystery there is non to be found
Got to about chapter 92 before I couldn’t get past it anymore The grammar is terrible, you can understand it, but you may have to read a paragraph twice to get it completely There are also a couple of plot holes and missed opportunities (MC not using all the ‘training mana techniques’ which he is able to do, he only copied 2 from his family as opposed to 5, which would speed up his cultivation) Characters are written fine, but some relationships seem to have a weird dynamic (like his grandfather scamming him of his merit points from a battle, just because it would be too many merit points, or his relationship with his grandfather in general) I’d say this story has a lot of potential, but the grammar is holding it back and I think it would benefit immensely from a rewrite
Tiết lộ Spoilergreat fic, some problems with editing, vc e br? achei um idiota em uma das frases e ri muito aqui obrigado
yo I'm only at like chapters 40 but please tell me that he later makes changes to the golems like u could make a golem spear as all it needs to level up is to kill. u could also do a blacksmith golem or a dragon golem or a house shape golem
the story is great but the Grammer just sucks. I think the author should use Microsoft word and run review to solve majority of the errors.
This feels like a new author. The beginning is a bit to chew through for me, with more grammar and spelling mistakes than I normally push through. that being said, the author has improved leaps and bounds with only minor errors in later chapters. the story, world building, pacing, and evolving of the characters over time is wonderful. I am glad I stuck with this story because it has become a favorite of mine. I look forward to seeing where the author takes us from here.
Reading this novel I at first thought it was decent, not many stories deal in golem magic and it had it’s merits. But as the story continues further the way characters speak just feels off as of written by a teenager who infused how he speaks irl into how he writes. With sentences spoken by characters having unnecessary words that makes it feel less as if they are saying something but make everything get views from the author’s perspective and not the actual character saying them
it started off with a lot of potential the characters had an okay development, the story kept a good pace, and the power levels generally meant what was shown, but as time progressed the author began to pay less and less attention to his own world contradicting his own statements. additionally the power levels slowly became meaningless to the point where Alec and his group begin fighting not only with a tier 5 as a group of low tier 4 and tier 3s with alec and his golems being low tier 3s or lower, but a tier 5 with a time element when alec was literally told point blank by the system which has never been wrong that even a mid tier 4 would shatter him even with a low tier 4 ally and his golems just prior to him hitting tier 3. all of this is even before we get into the amount of filler and boring side stories the author pushes into his chapters or the constant repeat descriptions. if i had only read the first 100 chapters I would have rated this much higher, but the issues simply get to great over time. I would have dropped this story after around chapter 250-300 if i hadn't bulk bought chapters but even having paid for chapters up to around 500ish it has gotten so poorly handled that i am stopping by 450ish
The authors notes are longer than the chapters. And they are everywhere. Also locked at chapter 20 before any plot points are decided or created. No reason to want more from the story.
am I the only one who found the idea of golems talking dumb...I mean they can get battle intelligence n all but talking like a person means he need to be alive that means that is not a golem.. couldn't continue reading more than that idea was cool but execution left me wanting
This novel is honestly the biggest dumpster fire I’ve seen. The author spends no effort into proofreading or editing, has completely broken story lore by randomly changing his mind on key plot points or just simply forgetting and not bothering to try adding it in where it’s relevant. The system element is also really forced and unnatural because Author can’t decide on a stable IQ for MC. The only consistent thing about this novel is the amount of updates if you want to flush coins you’ve been warned. A few examples: - Every single chapter since ch 1 is an absolute mess of grammatical, punctual, and formatting errors that make it absolutely abysmal to read (I have read until ch 220) no hate if English isn’t your first language but with 500+ chapters out and multiple comments every chapter pointing it out you should start editing it - In ch 1 paragraph 2 MC states he has been reincarnated/transmigrated into his new body 14 years ago (story starts before his 15th birthday). Author then decides that instead at some point he transmigrated from where the story started and his memories from childhood are now jumbled and hazy since they “weren’t his” - MC starts to create different golems even upgrading some to elemental golems, Author decides to full pivot and MC’s GOLEM CREATING PATH has switched to making CYBORGS. Literal cyborgs, his spearman robot can apparently turn SPEAR QI into a PLASMA LAZER - MC acquires a DIVINE weapon (highest rank we’ve heard of) that is broken and requires the blood of SLAIN enemies to repair it, Author then has MC use a completely different blade for 90% of the time and even when he does use it no notification comes up from the system that announces anything happened
a good concept story but just one thing killed it for me and that's bad grammar at points in the story that were really irritating for me .like I don't comment on grammar because mine is also not that good but it helps pull the story at it's worse points and accentuates some best points .so yeah if anyone wants my opinion then I will say give it a try for a few chapters and if it's not to your liking then leave it . Bye bye fellow review readers.
Review from about chapter 70: The grammar is bad, but there was clearly some attempts at editing. The storyline is decent. The narrative is pleasant and has a reasonable flow. The mc’s character development is fake, but the justification is the system is affecting how others view him and making him op at everything. So it’s acceptable in the context of the system genera. It’s a decent story to read while doing other stuff.
Enjoyed the novel but the fights are starting to take way to many chapters as you have to unlock all of them.
a few flaws in the first 20 chapters with things that don't rly make sense but still alr to read if u skip a few chapters ig.
I have enjoyed this book immensely as I find the premise of the book to be very intriguing. The main character is very good as I look forward to reading about hid development as the personal development of the character has captivated me. Overall the world building and the characters have been top notch.
Writing at the start is rough , really rough. Stuck through it as there are edits here and there that hint at better writing to come. What killed it for me though was the character progression. Just jumps all over thr place and really killed the enjoyment for me. I really wanted to like this book as the premise seems great but the execution really doesn’t make this worth reading. And certainly not worth using stones on.
Author your ideas and conyepts are really good and unique in this novel but maybe its because of grammar or those weird mix words that disrupts the pace and likeness of this novel.
The plot is fine, there is nothing really new to the formula, but there is just no story being told, it suffers from blank space syndrome as well as bad grammar and there is no description of anything, we are just told it happened. Really disappointed because the concept is good, but the execution is just lacking in every area.
The story could be amazing but a combination of 3 things ruins it for ,and they are the grammar, the fast paywall, and the way the author rewords paragraphs so that he can get a higher word count
This has the potential to be a great storY. Let’s name some pros Golems Side characters that are memorable Pretty good system Intresting world ready to see more of it. Negs Way to much unnecessary comedy No sense of urgency or worry which makes you question how believable the mc Great stories require uncertainty or mystery there is non to be found
Got to about chapter 92 before I couldn’t get past it anymore The grammar is terrible, you can understand it, but you may have to read a paragraph twice to get it completely There are also a couple of plot holes and missed opportunities (MC not using all the ‘training mana techniques’ which he is able to do, he only copied 2 from his family as opposed to 5, which would speed up his cultivation) Characters are written fine, but some relationships seem to have a weird dynamic (like his grandfather scamming him of his merit points from a battle, just because it would be too many merit points, or his relationship with his grandfather in general) I’d say this story has a lot of potential, but the grammar is holding it back and I think it would benefit immensely from a rewrite
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