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this book writing style is excellent, but its separate story chapter and information chapter for some reader its unique,as for me its make my brain to read it carefully less then miss the plot i call those information chapter cliffhanger chapter, personally prefer blend those chapter. if author keep changing pov its sure thing story development can be rich, i just hope author makes the story unpredictable, deception to the reader not just in the story. well i take a guess since i just read till chapter 25, that will be more character show up since author keep changing pov am afraid author brain will blow up, this novel isn't suitable to be webnovel if he want to make masterpiece as for world background well i need a map lol
I have never written a review here , something I have to change now because this book is great to great a read. Not the usual bland stile of writing but something else for once and I really enjoyed it. Ununfortunately the upload speed is rather slow but everything else just makes it a good and comfortable read. I hope you all enjoy it as much as I do. :)
Amazing novel. Intriguing story, wonderful writing quality, colorful battle scenes. None of those BOOM BAM SLASH SHING Abominations in battles. Reminds me of an actual book, which is why I love it. But I have to warn, that if you can not handle discriptive novels (not the one, where everything explained in dialogues, but where narrator is a majority of storytelling), then you might want to skip this. But I still encourage you to try it out, since this novel is wonderful
What an awesome read! This story as a great premises and perfect characterization. I enjoy reading it and recommend it to everyone. You're doing great, Author.
It's a hidden gem. It's a little slow, but it's worth it. This is not the work of an amateur, the quality of the book is no different from any famous author found in every bookstore.
i did not read this yet but um gonna rate this as five 5 for u have almost no bad review I'll come back to this novel if this will have 200+ chapters..
I am feeling like a militia, fellow author and avid reader of this writer's masterpiece about war and military. I am ill equipped with the words. How many years I wrote I would never write better than him how you need to go warmongering the lands of other King! Thank you! You all start reading now or drop and give me 20 pushup!
Author picking route where War/Battle/Conflict would end up at the powerhouse mercy, i still can't comprehend how army against army where the result is only settled by such powerhouse. Such as duel, battle power etc.. Well the writing quality is so good, the story build is good to but it just I don't like it because it's not some adventure action story but historical Conquer kingdom building.
Amongst the few novels on this platform that is worthy of a hardcopy print. Heck, it felt more like reading a real book than a Webnovel. Definitely recommended.
character development has been rushed a little, but you can fix it in the future, except that the universe and fiction are beautiful (it would be very nice if MC starts to degenerate as he gains power and wealth more soldiers more gold more women and a tyrant who rules the world like a puppeteer in the dark, though perfect finish
This is a really excellent web novel; it excitingly tells its unique story, making the reader want to keep reading; while true, some of the chapters could have been shorter. Yet this feels like a novel where the author takes us on a journey through the world he created while giving us rich background and world-building. The author has a great story, and if he maintains this great story and maybe expands on it more, this could turn out to be a fantastic experience
This book is beautiful, what I liked a lot is the detail of the events. To the Author of this book ... I hope you can make more novels like this...Because I love this book very much...I will look forward to your next and another creations after this book. Because I love this book very much 🥰 
Author recommended this novel to me irl... time to see this "masterpiece" of his lol
I just finished reading the prologue. Even with those two chapters alone, I can observe how meticulous the author is regarding military and court affairs. Hoping author keeps it up!
The author did a very good job in making the story seem interesting and portrayed well. The story is good and intriguing. overall I liked the novel and keep up the good work author
It has potential, I hope the MC has some ambition. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I came into this book when hunting for books with #Historical tags. When I read the prologue, I wasn't anticipating much, but little did I know it would hook me. I enjoyed the novel's depiction of war preparations, as well as the realistic description of topography and defensive fortifications. I also admire how meticulous you are when it comes to details. I felt sorry for the peasants harmed by the battle, which is fantastic because I enjoy a scenarios that allows me to get part of it. I am just looking forward to seeing the outcome of the impending conflict. [img=proud]
Yahallo, readers! This is the shameless newbie author of this novel rating his own work. I hope you support this endeavor of mine because I really do like writing and reading medieval stuff, and I'm a weeb, so why not add some fantasy too? Anyway, I hope you enjoy my work, and please let me know how can I improve my writing. It will be greatly appreciated by me! P.S: For those readers who first saw the older draft of LRC, please re-download this newer version as I'll be deleting the old one in a day or two. I made a new one because I am participating on thr WSA Contest, so please do support me if you like my work!
one of the best books i have ever come across. it's just great. unfortunately it's published on a wrong platform. wn honestly doesn't deserve this gem. author you will be better off publishing it on rr but ig now wn holds the copyright....
this book writing style is excellent, but its separate story chapter and information chapter for some reader its unique,as for me its make my brain to read it carefully less then miss the plot i call those information chapter cliffhanger chapter, personally prefer blend those chapter. if author keep changing pov its sure thing story development can be rich, i just hope author makes the story unpredictable, deception to the reader not just in the story. well i take a guess since i just read till chapter 25, that will be more character show up since author keep changing pov am afraid author brain will blow up, this novel isn't suitable to be webnovel if he want to make masterpiece as for world background well i need a map lol
I have never written a review here , something I have to change now because this book is great to great a read. Not the usual bland stile of writing but something else for once and I really enjoyed it. Ununfortunately the upload speed is rather slow but everything else just makes it a good and comfortable read. I hope you all enjoy it as much as I do. :)
Amazing novel. Intriguing story, wonderful writing quality, colorful battle scenes. None of those BOOM BAM SLASH SHING Abominations in battles. Reminds me of an actual book, which is why I love it. But I have to warn, that if you can not handle discriptive novels (not the one, where everything explained in dialogues, but where narrator is a majority of storytelling), then you might want to skip this. But I still encourage you to try it out, since this novel is wonderful
What an awesome read! This story as a great premises and perfect characterization. I enjoy reading it and recommend it to everyone. You're doing great, Author.
It's a hidden gem. It's a little slow, but it's worth it. This is not the work of an amateur, the quality of the book is no different from any famous author found in every bookstore.
i did not read this yet but um gonna rate this as five 5 for u have almost no bad review I'll come back to this novel if this will have 200+ chapters..
I am feeling like a militia, fellow author and avid reader of this writer's masterpiece about war and military. I am ill equipped with the words. How many years I wrote I would never write better than him how you need to go warmongering the lands of other King! Thank you! You all start reading now or drop and give me 20 pushup!
Author picking route where War/Battle/Conflict would end up at the powerhouse mercy, i still can't comprehend how army against army where the result is only settled by such powerhouse. Such as duel, battle power etc.. Well the writing quality is so good, the story build is good to but it just I don't like it because it's not some adventure action story but historical Conquer kingdom building.
Amongst the few novels on this platform that is worthy of a hardcopy print. Heck, it felt more like reading a real book than a Webnovel. Definitely recommended.
character development has been rushed a little, but you can fix it in the future, except that the universe and fiction are beautiful (it would be very nice if MC starts to degenerate as he gains power and wealth more soldiers more gold more women and a tyrant who rules the world like a puppeteer in the dark, though perfect finish
This is a really excellent web novel; it excitingly tells its unique story, making the reader want to keep reading; while true, some of the chapters could have been shorter. Yet this feels like a novel where the author takes us on a journey through the world he created while giving us rich background and world-building. The author has a great story, and if he maintains this great story and maybe expands on it more, this could turn out to be a fantastic experience
This book is beautiful, what I liked a lot is the detail of the events. To the Author of this book ... I hope you can make more novels like this...Because I love this book very much...I will look forward to your next and another creations after this book. Because I love this book very much 🥰 
Author recommended this novel to me irl... time to see this "masterpiece" of his lol
I just finished reading the prologue. Even with those two chapters alone, I can observe how meticulous the author is regarding military and court affairs. Hoping author keeps it up!
The author did a very good job in making the story seem interesting and portrayed well. The story is good and intriguing. overall I liked the novel and keep up the good work author
It has potential, I hope the MC has some ambition. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I came into this book when hunting for books with #Historical tags. When I read the prologue, I wasn't anticipating much, but little did I know it would hook me. I enjoyed the novel's depiction of war preparations, as well as the realistic description of topography and defensive fortifications. I also admire how meticulous you are when it comes to details. I felt sorry for the peasants harmed by the battle, which is fantastic because I enjoy a scenarios that allows me to get part of it. I am just looking forward to seeing the outcome of the impending conflict. [img=proud]
Yahallo, readers! This is the shameless newbie author of this novel rating his own work. I hope you support this endeavor of mine because I really do like writing and reading medieval stuff, and I'm a weeb, so why not add some fantasy too? Anyway, I hope you enjoy my work, and please let me know how can I improve my writing. It will be greatly appreciated by me! P.S: For those readers who first saw the older draft of LRC, please re-download this newer version as I'll be deleting the old one in a day or two. I made a new one because I am participating on thr WSA Contest, so please do support me if you like my work!
one of the best books i have ever come across. it's just great. unfortunately it's published on a wrong platform. wn honestly doesn't deserve this gem. author you will be better off publishing it on rr but ig now wn holds the copyright....