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It's a pretty entertaining story, though most of it makes absolutely no sense, lol.
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bro, what would you say about making a story in the same world as Naruto but having the protagonist have the body and abilities of rengoku, such as flame breathing, simply adapt it to the laws of Naruto to make him more powerful?
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Jejak sudah kubaca tapi tidak perlu melanjutkanya. Menarik tapi MC plin plan pasukan katan dibantai hanya karena Jiraya menyembunyikan 2 tetua tapi Akatsuki dibiarkan setelah menyerang MC, mengingat sifat MC digambarkan sebagai pendendam,kisah percintaan nya sampah 2 orang lagi, skip
For many months, I've been avoiding this fanfic because of its negative reviews. Now, I will finally test the poison myself. According to many reviews, theres chinese vibes all over this Naruto fanfics, and the author seemed to be not well studied about the Naruto World. My expectation are low, and I am already expecting to encounter some chinese novel writings, like over the top description of someones appearance every single time they are introduced, bunch of annoying chain villains, and random face slappings. Words like meridians, cultivation, Mt. Tai, dantian, and many more. To be honest, I am very familiar with Chinese novels, and really like reading most of them, even now I am still up to date with my favorite one, Emperor's Domination. So I don't really mind, but what I do mind are painful blocks of unnecessary texts describing physical appearances, 'impossible' powers and feats, and the likes. So yeah, wish me luck my fellows. I will update my rating for this novel as I go through the story, see you later!
Нормально, пллелсьа агетлкклоуивгвтвоугуи оуоуовгвоу коугктага шушушук кокткг шгуругугуу угуоуг7коку угутун48чт 3гокгу7кгу туоуоутгутг угукот укгк7угушуг агагагкогкуоша. аоугуггууггугкгкигккоко7аоатк гаоаоа7коуогу7уг3 гашвшугагата.
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It seems to be an author self insert or something. Everything is that happens is too forced.
after reading ....a lot, i'm 💯% sure that the Author is killing and destroying the FF . it's a Garbage 🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️
The typical Chinese story, a dog of the system, a cheted system, a horrible personality and the worst of all is that the author knows nothing about the world of Naruto
Started out great but once you reach 60 to 80 chapters in it turns into the (next episode of dragon ball z) meaning the next 60 chapters are all one fight. It’s just filler and it’s boring filler at that.
I did like the story but Jesus does the author drag things out there’s like a 30+ chapter fight and even the descriptions are super exaggerated it too much in that sense but I do like the story it self it is different and a breath of fresh air in my opinion
The premise is a good one, but the execution is horrendous to say the least. The chapters feel like 200 words that went through one of the most obnoxious text infiltrators that I have seen.
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A big fat nonsense, descriptions, plot, MC, all of it. ...................................................................................................
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sorry if it is not understood, I wrote it in the translator. It is entertaining and the update is constant but I feel that the chapters are very short for what they offer.
No story is deserving more than this one of a low rating. only good thing about this story was the concept. everything else goes from trash to hotdog water trash. MC is boring and lame. hates life and should just off himself so he puts himself out of the misery of living because he's no good at it. One of the worst readable stories on this app easily.
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The idea is good and all but I think 170 chapters in I find myself not liking this more and more on top of the 2nd template being unappealing to me its just getting boring. It was good in the first like 50 chapters. But the author keep prolonging things longer than they need to be and doing certain things that contradict the MC personality or views from how he was portrayed making promises and then breaking them. Just not all that fun of a read anymore.
Welp. This went downhill pretty quickly. Started out good and then there's this fight that lasted over 30 chapters that turned out pointless. This is especially ironic because in chapter 120, he told asura before they started their fight that he is "no protagonist that can be swayed by the beguiling charms of a female character". And that's exactly what happened in chapter 135. He set out to annihilate the toads in chapter 100 and ino persuaded him to stop at the last step in chapter 135 which turned this whole long@ss fight pretty much pointless. Everyone was pretty much fed up by the very long, like dbz kind of long, fight and then author just left us with this disappointing conclusion. What a joke.
don't read this. this fic is bs. MC has the power but 0 brain cells and big simp.
just become some bs after some chapters ,too much drama, and empty threats , useless decisions , cringe at its peak
Honestly really shouldn't waste your time with this. Spent 30+ chapters on a conflict that really shouldn't of lasted more than 10 at most for an op character. Author had the main character go all "I shall destroy them since I gave them my word, and my word is important." then dragged the fight out which really didn't go anywhere with no one of important dying. and then FINALLY when its over and he's finally going to do it, He changes his mind because love interest says please don't? the whole point of this dragged out mess was that he gave his word and he was going to follow through with it. The fact that he changed his mind with a simple please don't is BS.
Это говно не следует читать, битвы затянуты, а в итоге он жалеет противника, конченный автор с конченным произведением (0101010101100101010100101010101010101011010101001)
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It's a pretty entertaining story, though most of it makes absolutely no sense, lol.
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bro, what would you say about making a story in the same world as Naruto but having the protagonist have the body and abilities of rengoku, such as flame breathing, simply adapt it to the laws of Naruto to make him more powerful?
[img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
Jejak sudah kubaca tapi tidak perlu melanjutkanya. Menarik tapi MC plin plan pasukan katan dibantai hanya karena Jiraya menyembunyikan 2 tetua tapi Akatsuki dibiarkan setelah menyerang MC, mengingat sifat MC digambarkan sebagai pendendam,kisah percintaan nya sampah 2 orang lagi, skip
For many months, I've been avoiding this fanfic because of its negative reviews. Now, I will finally test the poison myself. According to many reviews, theres chinese vibes all over this Naruto fanfics, and the author seemed to be not well studied about the Naruto World. My expectation are low, and I am already expecting to encounter some chinese novel writings, like over the top description of someones appearance every single time they are introduced, bunch of annoying chain villains, and random face slappings. Words like meridians, cultivation, Mt. Tai, dantian, and many more. To be honest, I am very familiar with Chinese novels, and really like reading most of them, even now I am still up to date with my favorite one, Emperor's Domination. So I don't really mind, but what I do mind are painful blocks of unnecessary texts describing physical appearances, 'impossible' powers and feats, and the likes. So yeah, wish me luck my fellows. I will update my rating for this novel as I go through the story, see you later!
Нормально, пллелсьа агетлкклоуивгвтвоугуи оуоуовгвоу коугктага шушушук кокткг шгуругугуу угуоуг7коку угутун48чт 3гокгу7кгу туоуоутгутг угукот укгк7угушуг агагагкогкуоша. аоугуггууггугкгкигккоко7аоатк гаоаоа7коуогу7уг3 гашвшугагата.
Tiết lộ Spoiler It seems to be an author self insert or something. Everything is that happens is too forced.
after reading ....a lot, i'm 💯% sure that the Author is killing and destroying the FF . it's a Garbage 🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️🗑️
The typical Chinese story, a dog of the system, a cheted system, a horrible personality and the worst of all is that the author knows nothing about the world of Naruto
Started out great but once you reach 60 to 80 chapters in it turns into the (next episode of dragon ball z) meaning the next 60 chapters are all one fight. It’s just filler and it’s boring filler at that.
I did like the story but Jesus does the author drag things out there’s like a 30+ chapter fight and even the descriptions are super exaggerated it too much in that sense but I do like the story it self it is different and a breath of fresh air in my opinion
The premise is a good one, but the execution is horrendous to say the least. The chapters feel like 200 words that went through one of the most obnoxious text infiltrators that I have seen.
Tiết lộ Spoiler .......................................................................................................................................................
A big fat nonsense, descriptions, plot, MC, all of it. ...................................................................................................
Tiết lộ Spoiler sorry if it is not understood, I wrote it in the translator. It is entertaining and the update is constant but I feel that the chapters are very short for what they offer.
No story is deserving more than this one of a low rating. only good thing about this story was the concept. everything else goes from trash to hotdog water trash. MC is boring and lame. hates life and should just off himself so he puts himself out of the misery of living because he's no good at it. One of the worst readable stories on this app easily.
💩💩💩💩💩🤮💩💩💩💩💩[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The idea is good and all but I think 170 chapters in I find myself not liking this more and more on top of the 2nd template being unappealing to me its just getting boring. It was good in the first like 50 chapters. But the author keep prolonging things longer than they need to be and doing certain things that contradict the MC personality or views from how he was portrayed making promises and then breaking them. Just not all that fun of a read anymore.
Welp. This went downhill pretty quickly. Started out good and then there's this fight that lasted over 30 chapters that turned out pointless. This is especially ironic because in chapter 120, he told asura before they started their fight that he is "no protagonist that can be swayed by the beguiling charms of a female character". And that's exactly what happened in chapter 135. He set out to annihilate the toads in chapter 100 and ino persuaded him to stop at the last step in chapter 135 which turned this whole long@ss fight pretty much pointless. Everyone was pretty much fed up by the very long, like dbz kind of long, fight and then author just left us with this disappointing conclusion. What a joke.
don't read this. this fic is bs. MC has the power but 0 brain cells and big simp.
just become some bs after some chapters ,too much drama, and empty threats , useless decisions , cringe at its peak
Honestly really shouldn't waste your time with this. Spent 30+ chapters on a conflict that really shouldn't of lasted more than 10 at most for an op character. Author had the main character go all "I shall destroy them since I gave them my word, and my word is important." then dragged the fight out which really didn't go anywhere with no one of important dying. and then FINALLY when its over and he's finally going to do it, He changes his mind because love interest says please don't? the whole point of this dragged out mess was that he gave his word and he was going to follow through with it. The fact that he changed his mind with a simple please don't is BS.
Это говно не следует читать, битвы затянуты, а в итоге он жалеет противника, конченный автор с конченным произведением (0101010101100101010100101010101010101011010101001)
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it was a great story but everything changed when "Romance" appeared.