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Most of the mc in One Piece fanfics either became a Marine or a Pirate. Some are Pirate Hunter but later became a Pirates and few are on Marine. I've read hundreds of OP ff and that's the formula.............................But this fanfic is different, this is the first time that I've seen it, Mc is a Pirate Hunter from the start until the end. Then you add the fact that this is in Roger's era🤌🤌🤌
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Add to the harém: Portgas D. Rouge, Nico Olvia, Kozuki Toki, Tsuru, Otohime, Shakuyaku, Shyarly, Bell-Mère, Nefertari Titi, Gion, Boa Hancock, Yamato, Nami, Nojiko, Reiju, Baccarat, Viola, Rebecca, Makino, Monet, Hina, Jewelry Bonney....... Add Nico Robin, Nefertari Vivi, Kozuki Hiyori and Shirahoshi to the harem, only if their mothers are not part of the MC's harem and they are already married to the original husbands. HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! 😁👍 It have a good story/plot and great english/translate.. I like that MC/Jack not op from start, but they need to battle and training to get stronger (even if his bead can make him strong easily, he at least need to battle, not just have strong power from start).. I don't mind that his interaction will make many changes in the future (like by bring Robin and Olvia from Ohara maybe Ohara not get a buster call, or by recruit Titi/Vivi mother may make Cobra married another women and Vivi not born).. Can't wait to see what his change bring to the future (hope to see what change in Strawhats pirates era).. Keep up the great job author sama 😁👍😍😍
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
Capitulo incrivel, com muita emoção e gramatica perfeita, estou amando o protagonista 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍.
O protagonista ser um caçador foi algo que gostei muito, pois e algo que nao e muito explorado, a escrita e boa e se continuar como esta esta fanfic e uma que ira muita gente👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤❤.
Will do a real review after more chapter is release. This review me supporting this ff.
Hello, my lovely readers! I have worked hard on my novels and have quite a stock of drafts. As you may already know, the plot revolves around character interactions more than the plot itself, and I would like you to keep that in mind. The novels are mostly about lemon, and each novel has unique aspects. One Piece Novel features fights, Bleach depicts the laid-back life of the main character, and the Naruto Novel provides a dystopian and unique perspective. Thank you, and I hope you enjoy.
So it's good. The idea is novel and unique but the execution could've been better. I'm enjoying this for the moment. Good luck author👍
no plot direction.. you know right? the one piece title means you would either be the final victor(pirate) or the final antagonist (world government) for your story to develop because the latter preventing the pirates getting the one piece. thats why being a pirate hunter wont push this novel far in one piece..
Most of the mc in One Piece fanfics either became a Marine or a Pirate. Some are Pirate Hunter but later became a Pirates and few are on Marine. I've read hundreds of OP ff and that's the formula.............................But this fanfic is different, this is the first time that I've seen it, Mc is a Pirate Hunter from the start until the end. Then you add the fact that this is in Roger's era🤌🤌🤌
I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this, I love this,
Add to the harém: Portgas D. Rouge, Nico Olvia, Kozuki Toki, Tsuru, Otohime, Shakuyaku, Shyarly, Bell-Mère, Nefertari Titi, Gion, Boa Hancock, Yamato, Nami, Nojiko, Reiju, Baccarat, Viola, Rebecca, Makino, Monet, Hina, Jewelry Bonney....... Add Nico Robin, Nefertari Vivi, Kozuki Hiyori and Shirahoshi to the harem, only if their mothers are not part of the MC's harem and they are already married to the original husbands. HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
It's a great One Piece fanfiction!! 😁👍 It have a good story/plot and great english/translate.. I like that MC/Jack not op from start, but they need to battle and training to get stronger (even if his bead can make him strong easily, he at least need to battle, not just have strong power from start).. I don't mind that his interaction will make many changes in the future (like by bring Robin and Olvia from Ohara maybe Ohara not get a buster call, or by recruit Titi/Vivi mother may make Cobra married another women and Vivi not born).. Can't wait to see what his change bring to the future (hope to see what change in Strawhats pirates era).. Keep up the great job author sama 😁👍😍😍
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
Capitulo incrivel, com muita emoção e gramatica perfeita, estou amando o protagonista 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍.
O protagonista ser um caçador foi algo que gostei muito, pois e algo que nao e muito explorado, a escrita e boa e se continuar como esta esta fanfic e uma que ira muita gente👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤❤.
Will do a real review after more chapter is release. This review me supporting this ff.
Hello, my lovely readers! I have worked hard on my novels and have quite a stock of drafts. As you may already know, the plot revolves around character interactions more than the plot itself, and I would like you to keep that in mind. The novels are mostly about lemon, and each novel has unique aspects. One Piece Novel features fights, Bleach depicts the laid-back life of the main character, and the Naruto Novel provides a dystopian and unique perspective. Thank you, and I hope you enjoy.
So it's good. The idea is novel and unique but the execution could've been better. I'm enjoying this for the moment. Good luck author👍
no plot direction.. you know right? the one piece title means you would either be the final victor(pirate) or the final antagonist (world government) for your story to develop because the latter preventing the pirates getting the one piece. thats why being a pirate hunter wont push this novel far in one piece..