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"Huh? Where am I?"
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Without knowing, Kiyotaka founds himself in a place that defies everything that served as the base of his logic. How will he adapt to this new situation? How will he handle a twin brother who also happens to in the situation as him?
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So it isn’t Kiyotaka at all, huh. Just a stoic kid who’s above average in intelligence. It’s not a good look to have a forced emotional development when the character himself can’t even comprehend what most of them are. Welp, I guess that’s that.
Definitely a hidden gem great fanfic 5/5 takes one of my favorite light novels and adds one of my favorite MC's I liked the romance and the action the grammar is good there is a tendency to use overly complicated words but it doesn't take away from the reading experience. the character design is good as well no character is acting OOC imo. Story development is also good it doesn't have the problem that some fanfic have of strictly adhering to the og plot. I found the early Rudeus POV's sort of redundant but other than that I liked the way the story went I won't say much else because I don't want to spoil anything if you're on the fence definitely give it a read.
Thank you author, i really enjoyed this story. Truly a masterpiece. I genuinely cried a little after reading the end on Wattpad .Thank you.
A very good fan fic with a powerful mc bit not too op and smart mc which is obvious because it's kiyotaka. Although changes have been made to the original kiyotaka ,those were good. Overall it's a masterpiece.[img=recommend]
If you see this congrats you found the a hidden treasure fully recommend it
Good story just needs better updating stability................ . .. . . . ... . . . .. ... . . .. . . . .. ... . . . . . ..... . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . .. .. . . . .. .. ... . ... .. ..
Honestly it was absolutely incredible, great execution good plot twists, the romance, all in general was great; although there was a stretch around the middle where it seemed liked it was a raw translation of a Chinese novel but it only lasted a few chapters.
probably one of the best fics ive seen. a top tier read, although i have some small nitpicks on how rushed the ending is, the redundancy part more than made up for it
It's actually amazing, i enjoy reading mushoku tensei and the classroom of the elite, but u made a story of it.
Amazing story. To anyone wondering who ends up with who look through chapter 65
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this is terrible, mostly because it is a retelling of the original, and sometimes it seems that the author is simply copying the text from the original, mc is as boring as possible, I give a low rating because this fanfic is too overrated
Yeah this isn't for me. Tho a really hardcore Ayanokoji fans gonna like this fic. I like Ayanokoji, but not to this degree I guess.
comedy and magic nice atleast is it a comedy? cause it kinda sounds like it it is fun to read and its worth your time!
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I know I'm supa nitpickey in my comments but I do actually like this book lol. COTE crossover is a great idea 💀👍
Well, what more can I say. This right here is a masterpiece, from the beginning all the way to the end. I wasn't disappointed with any chapter this fanfic had. I'm truly glad I got to be a bare witness to this gem of a novel. Truly thank you Author for creating this.
no seguí este libro en emisión lei cuando ya estaba completo pero me encanto tanto que solo me dilate dos días para leerlo no dormir una noche entera leyendo me gustó todo la escritura desarrollo hasta el final .
Âm lượng 1
- 1 Prelude (i) 1 years ago
- 2 Prelude (ii) 1 years ago
- 3 Volume 1, Part 1 - Early Years 1 years ago
- 4 Volume 1, Part 2 - Early Years ft. Roxy 1 years ago
- 5 Volume 1, Part 3: Early Years - Feelings. 1 years ago
- 6 Volume 1, Part 4: Early Years - Touching Grass 1 years ago
- 7 Volume 1, Part 5: Early Years - Julian v.s Rudeus 1 years ago
- 8 Volume 1 Part 6: Early Years - Overcoming Trauma ft. Rudy 1 years ago
- 9 Volume 1, Part 7: Early Years - Farewell Roxy. 1 years ago
- 10 Volume 1, Part 8: Early Years - Sylph 1 years ago
- 11 Volume 1, Part 9: Ada, you are a Promiscuous Female. 1 years ago
- 12 Volume 1, Part 10 : Gravity > Unlocked! 1 years ago
- 13 Volume 1, Part 11 : Prelude to the Spar. 1 years ago
- 14 Volume 1, Part 12: The Unofficial Saint-Ranked Swordsman. 1 years ago
- 15 Volume 1, Part 13 : Early Years - Emergency Meeting. 1 years ago
- 16 Volume 1, Part 14: Early Years - Letters. 1 years ago
- 17 Volume 1, Part 15: Early Years - A Fellow Greyrat. 1 years ago
- 18 Volume 1, Part 16 : Early Years - Uudelle matkalle 1 years ago
- 19 Character Sheet 1 years ago
- 20 ʋօʟʊʍɛ 2 - Happy Years: Prologue-Opposite Situations 1 years ago
- 21 ʋօʟʊʍɛ 2, Part 1: Happy Years - The Better Twin. 1 years ago
- 22 ʋօʟʊʍɛ 2, Part 2: Infinity Exists Everywhere. 1 years ago
- 23 ʋօʟʊʍɛ 2, Part 3: Happy Years - A Red Dragon. 1 years ago
- 24 ʋօʟʊʍɛ 2, Part 4: Happy Years - Juxtaposition 1 years ago
- 25 ʋօʟʊʍɛ 2, Part 5: Happy Years - Pseudo Date? 1 years ago
- 26 ʋօʟʊʍɛ 2, Part 6: Happy Years - Not "Half“, just 'sister' 1 years ago
- 27 ʋօʟʊʍɛ 2, Part 7: Happy Years - Following the Southern Wind. 1 years ago
- 28 ʋօʟʊʍɛ 2, Part 8: Happy Years - Behavioral Anamoly. 1 years ago
- 29 Tυɾɳιɳɠ Pσιɳƚ '1' 1 years ago
- 30 Side Story (SS) - Roxy Migurdia. 1 years ago
- 31 Special Chapter --- World Map. 1 years ago
- 32 Vðlµmê 3, þår† 1: Èßßïñg - How did things come to this? 1 years ago
- 33 Vðlµmê 3, þår† 2: Èßßïñg - The Walls have Ears. 1 years ago
- 34 Vðlµmê 3, þår† 3: Èßßïñg - Food, the way to one's heart. 1 years ago
- 35 Vðlµmê 3, þår† 4: Èßßïñg - Odd Infatuation and First Kiss. 1 years ago
- 36 Vðlµmê 3, þår† 5: Èßßïñg - The Prelude to Boreas Resurgence. 1 years ago
- 37 Vðlµmê 3, þår† 6: Èßßïñg - Apostle Down! 1 years ago
- 38 ˜*°• Turning Point 2 •°*˜ 1 years ago
- 39 VØⱠɄ₥Ɇ 4 - Respite: Prologue 1 years ago
- 40 VØⱠɄ₥Ɇ 4, ₱₳Ɽ₮ 1 - Respite: What do those eyes see? 1 years ago
- 41 Snippets - Zenith Greyrat. 1 years ago
- 42 VØⱠɄ₥Ɇ 4, ₱₳Ɽ₮ 2 - Respite: Reunion and Revelations. 1 years ago
- 43 VØⱠɄ₥Ɇ 4, ₱₳Ɽ₮ 3 - Respite: ''Solitude Dans Ses Bras'' 1 years ago
- 44 VØⱠɄ₥Ɇ 4, ₱₳Ɽ₮ 4 - Respite: New Maid-San. 1 years ago
- 45 VØⱠɄ₥Ɇ 4, ₱₳Ɽ₮ 5 - Respite: Family Drama. 1 years ago
- 46 VØⱠɄ₥Ɇ 4, ₱₳Ɽ₮ 6 - Respite: Norn and Adventurer's District 1 years ago
- 47 VØⱠɄ₥Ɇ 4, ₱₳Ɽ₮ 7 - Respite: Versteckte Plane. 1 years ago
- 48 VØⱠɄ₥Ɇ 4 - Respite: Epilogue 1 years ago
- 49 ᵥₒₗᵤₘₑ ₅ ₋ ₛᵤbₜₑᵣfᵤgₑ: Prologue 1 years ago
- 50 ᵥₒₗᵤₘₑ ₅, ₚₐᵣₜ ₁ ₋ ₛᵤbₜₑᵣfᵤgₑ: The Weight on her Chest. 1 years ago
- 51 ᵥₒₗᵤₘₑ ₅, ₚₐᵣₜ ₂ ₋ ₛᵤbₜₑᵣfᵤgₑ: Her Breakdown. 1 years ago
- 52 ᵥₒₗᵤₘₑ ₅, ₚₐᵣₜ ₃: ₛᵤbₜₑᵣfᵤgₑ - The Night After and The Evening Before. 1 years ago
- 53 ᵥₒₗᵤₘₑ ₅, ₚₐᵣₜ ₄: ₛᵤbₜₑᵣfᵤgₑ - ''Acabo de tener sexo.'' 1 years ago
- 54 ᵥₒₗᵤₘₑ ₅, ₚₐᵣₜ ₅: ₛᵤbₜₑᵣfᵤgₑ - A Slave and A Scum. 1 years ago
- 55 ᵥₒₗᵤₘₑ ₅, ₚₐᵣₜ 6: ₛᵤbₜₑᵣfᵤgₑ - The Storm that’s Approaching. 1 years ago
- 56 ᵥₒₗᵤₘₑ ₅, ₚₐᵣₜ ₇: ₛᵤbₜₑᵣfᵤgₑ - Prelude to the Epilogue of the War. 1 years ago
- 57 Ͳմɾղìղց φօìղէ Ӡ - By the Sword 1 years ago
- 58 ᵥₒₗᵤₘₑ ₅, ₚₐᵣₜ ₈: ₛᵤbₜₑᵣfᵤgₑ ₋ Family Feud. 1 years ago
- 59 ᵥₒₗᵤₘₑ ₅, ₚₐᵣₜ ₉ ₋ ₛᵤbₜₑᵣfᵤgₑ: The Approaching Epilogue. 1 years ago
- 60 ᵥₒₗᵤₘₑ ₅, ₚₐᵣₜ ₁₀ ₋ ₛᵤbₜₑᵣfᵤgₑ: A ''Real'' part of our Family. 1 years ago
- 61 ɪɴᴛᴇʀʟᴜᴅᴇ - ʀᴏxʏ'ꜱ ᴅᴇᴍɪꜱᴇ? 1 years ago
- 62 ᵥₒₗᵤₘₑ ₅, ₚₐᵣₜ ₁₁ ₋ ₛᵤbₜₑᵣfᵤgₑ: Beginning of the Chaos. 1 years ago
- 63 Side Story - SS - Death God and the Siege of Shirone Kingdom! 1 years ago
- 64 Side Story - SS - Women's Meeting. 1 years ago
- 65 Character Sheet (No. 3) 1 years ago
- 66 ᴠᴏʟᴜᴍᴇ 6, ᴘᴀʀᴛ 1 - ᴇɴᴅɢᴀᴍᴇ: ''Outplayed'' & A Coup d'ét 1 years ago
- 67 ᴠᴏʟᴜᴍᴇ 6, ᴘᴀʀᴛ 2 - ᴇɴᴅɢᴀᴍᴇ: Discombobulating Pandemonium. 1 years ago
- 68 ᴠᴏʟᴜᴍᴇ 6, ᴘᴀʀᴛ 3 - ᴇɴᴅɢᴀᴍᴇ: All Out War (I) 1 years ago
- 69 ᴠᴏʟᴜᴍᴇ 6, ᴘᴀʀᴛ 4 - ᴇɴᴅɢᴀᴍᴇ: All Out War (II) 1 years ago
- 70 ᴠᴏʟᴜᴍᴇ 6, ᴘᴀʀᴛ 5 - ᴇɴᴅɢᴀᴍᴇ: All Out War (III) 1 years ago
- 71 ᴠᴏʟᴜᴍᴇ 6, ᴘᴀʀᴛ 6 - ᴇɴᴅɢᴀᴍᴇ: All Out War (IV) 1 years ago
- 72 Redundancy: Chapter 1 - The Sequel's Prologue. 1 years ago
- 73 Redundancy: Chapter 2 - Towards Sylphy 1 years ago
- 74 Redundancy: Chapter 3 - Falling into a Void 1 years ago
- 75 Redundancy: Chapter 4 - Parturition 1 years ago
- 76 Redundancy: Chapter 5 - Sanctus Bells. 1 years ago
- 77 Redundancy: Chapter 6 - Emerald. 1 years ago
- 78 Redundancy: Chapter 7 - Trilogy. 1 years ago
- 79 Redundancy: Chapter 8 - Despoliation. 1 years ago
- 80 Redundancy : Chapter 9 - Final Apostle. 1 years ago
- 81 Redundancy: Chapter 10 - The Fourth Cub. 1 years ago
- 82 Redundancy: Chapter 11 - Farewell. 12 months ago
- 83 Redundancy: Chapter 12 - Timelapse (I) 12 months ago
- 84 Redundancy: Chapter 13 - Timelapse (II) 12 months ago
- 85 Last Chapter - Epilogue - Time Stamps 12 months ago
POV: You have come to reviews before you read this. So, let me clear a few things before you read this fanfic, yeah? First, the first volume - up until Turning Point 1 - have Rudy POV for 60% of the time because nothing much changes except minor changes in relationships. That is because there is another MC. Second, Julian AKA Kiyotaka is obviously better than Rudeus. Now if you have a problem with that, you might want to leave right now. BUT, BUT--- A big but, there is a huge twist at the end. If you are patient enough to read until the end, you will find out why Rudeus is trashed upon so much. It will all make sense in the end. That said, please be patient with progressions. I actually cooked this, lol. So, give it a try until the end, and even if it still doesn't satisfy your palette, feel free to roast me in the comments to this review. Another disclaimer I'd put in here is that I have used chatGPT for the extremely superfluous descriptions. The places where you think the descriptions were too much, yeah, I used the synonyms function of the AI to replace simple words with fancy ones. If that's a turn-off, sorry, not sorry. Personally, I think the writing overall is nice and plot is decent, so it's still worth a try, despite the few little descriptions I added to meet the word count, lol. 😜 Cheers!