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the longest fakin useless prolonged I had ever seen ch 80+ and we are still not in DxD, and increase your tiny idiot as* knowledge about overlord Donki
Very good, but not perfect. If you like overload I would recommend reading this. The "New-World" Arc is pretty fire, but what scares me is the DXD arc, as I have no clue how It will turn out. Me personally I would rather it only stay in the "New-World" and not move on.
Writing Quality: Author takes inspirations but to the level where you could say he is copying other works directly. Story Devlopment: After a 100 Chapters, the story didn't reach anywhere, espcecially in High School DxD Character Design: OC are dull and one dimensional and others are out of character most of the time. Updating Stability: Takes a lot of time but the contact delivered isn't of quality. World Background: Better than other stuff but yeah...
the start were pretty good. the game world i mean. but when he finally came to "new world", it went down pretty fast.
It's not bad not good either I can tell some parts of it is ripped off from overlord origin in some parts in the gamer arc and the chaotic good fic in the chaloric stone and the ouroboros scene............................................................................................................
I was enjoying it, but it is way to focused on the harem, the author doesent thìnk tĥrough their plot, focuses on the wrong things plus doesnt use what he writes.
author, I want to know whether the mc will to another world like Naruto,one piece, etc. If so, when will he go and which one will he go
very good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story is incredibly well written. I wasn’t a fan of a few of the plot points but the actual quality of the writing is far superior to the average fanfic.
This is just a dude playing a video game in fanfiction form. I mean, I lost interest in it so fast. I could be doing this instead of reading about it.
Just another overlord novel with a psychotic evil mc that gains power and forgets his morals.
I just finished the Yggdrasil arc and I can only say that I absolutely loved it.
I, who read the Overlord LN, find this fic disgusting. Although the main idea is good, I suggest deleting this completely, reading the Overlord and DxD LN, and then creating something readable.
I don't know why but this plot development is very familiar. Hmm... I wonder.No hate, keep up the good work ma boi.
If you find this Fanfic good, then I have a better recommendation for you guys. Try reading Overlord: The Origin. It a fanfic that where most of the idea of this fanfic came from. My author guy here butchered some parts of it and pasted it here, things like fight, loots, and even events are got copied from it.
great fanfic, it has a good beginning, it's slow paced but not too slow, great development, it's become one of my most favorite dragon mc fanfic :3
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This story has been quite good and has left an impression on me but I have join this story on the ater parts of it thus I have a bias for some of the details off this review as this is based off of one of the anime I appreciate the most this is the main reason that I say hat I am bias in this review and find this story to be as great as is, now for the criticism of this story some details are taken from the original story it was based on others feel like a dead horse being beaten over and over to work and doesn't come out right as well as he use of a system skill as Friday feels as if the author just wanted a way to make the instince that happens to the mc to happen but that all doesn't stop making his story to be as amazing as I think it to be
I really enjoyed reading this far, I had a lot of fun reading it, and I see a lot of potential in this fanfic, I really hope this story continues, because I really want to see its conclusion
People are so thirsty for overlord content even a mediocre story with bad grammar gets so popular 😂
Your storytelling skills are exceptional, and your characters are so well-developed. However, I couldn't help but notice that the release schedule for new chapters is somewhat longer than I'd prefer. plz don't get me wrong I deeply appreciate the time and effort you put into crafting each chapter. Your commitment to quality is evident in every word, and I wouldn't want you to rush through your creative process. Nonetheless, if it's at all possible, I kindly request that you consider increasing the frequency of chapter releases, even if only by a little. That's it I am off....
One of the best Overlord fanfics, but I'm going to give it a 3.4 because of the updating stability. I have to wait a whole week to read 1 chapter, so yeah.
From the looks of it, the author does not read reviews but I am going to put mine here anyways. Frankly, I enjoyed the story but there are a few problems that I have with it. As for the writing quality it was ok. There were a few grammar mistakes and it felt really drawn out at some points. I am giving update stability a 1 because it is SLOW!! I mean it has been 5 months since the first chapter and we have only just now gotten to the New World. The author plans to take this story to DXD at some point but with the current updates, that will literally take close to a year. That is ridiculous and I think if the author wants more support and traction for this story then he needs to update it more frequently. I am giving the story development a 4 because I like the direction that it is going. Again however is it is really slow and that does not pair well with the infrequent updates. Character design is a 3 because the author was "inspired" by a few other fan fictions World Background is a 5 because the world was really fleshed out. Overall, the story is decent. However the author needs to update the story more often because the short chapters plus infrequent updates do not make for a good combination.
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Man i regret reading this too early The 40chapter aren't enough to fill my stomach one of the best overlord Fanfic I have seen Hope author Adds Kurumi from date a Live lol😆
I'm not here to reading about a manchild playing a game, come on we have twitch for this... But really high iq? You a not talking about mc are you? Because that would be a lot more disappointing then it is right now.
the longest fakin useless prolonged I had ever seen ch 80+ and we are still not in DxD, and increase your tiny idiot as* knowledge about overlord Donki
Very good, but not perfect. If you like overload I would recommend reading this. The "New-World" Arc is pretty fire, but what scares me is the DXD arc, as I have no clue how It will turn out. Me personally I would rather it only stay in the "New-World" and not move on.
Writing Quality: Author takes inspirations but to the level where you could say he is copying other works directly. Story Devlopment: After a 100 Chapters, the story didn't reach anywhere, espcecially in High School DxD Character Design: OC are dull and one dimensional and others are out of character most of the time. Updating Stability: Takes a lot of time but the contact delivered isn't of quality. World Background: Better than other stuff but yeah...
the start were pretty good. the game world i mean. but when he finally came to "new world", it went down pretty fast.
It's not bad not good either I can tell some parts of it is ripped off from overlord origin in some parts in the gamer arc and the chaotic good fic in the chaloric stone and the ouroboros scene............................................................................................................
I was enjoying it, but it is way to focused on the harem, the author doesent thìnk tĥrough their plot, focuses on the wrong things plus doesnt use what he writes.
author, I want to know whether the mc will to another world like Naruto,one piece, etc. If so, when will he go and which one will he go
very good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This story is incredibly well written. I wasn’t a fan of a few of the plot points but the actual quality of the writing is far superior to the average fanfic.
This is just a dude playing a video game in fanfiction form. I mean, I lost interest in it so fast. I could be doing this instead of reading about it.
Just another overlord novel with a psychotic evil mc that gains power and forgets his morals.
I just finished the Yggdrasil arc and I can only say that I absolutely loved it.
I, who read the Overlord LN, find this fic disgusting. Although the main idea is good, I suggest deleting this completely, reading the Overlord and DxD LN, and then creating something readable.
I don't know why but this plot development is very familiar. Hmm... I wonder.No hate, keep up the good work ma boi.
If you find this Fanfic good, then I have a better recommendation for you guys. Try reading Overlord: The Origin. It a fanfic that where most of the idea of this fanfic came from. My author guy here butchered some parts of it and pasted it here, things like fight, loots, and even events are got copied from it.
great fanfic, it has a good beginning, it's slow paced but not too slow, great development, it's become one of my most favorite dragon mc fanfic :3
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This story has been quite good and has left an impression on me but I have join this story on the ater parts of it thus I have a bias for some of the details off this review as this is based off of one of the anime I appreciate the most this is the main reason that I say hat I am bias in this review and find this story to be as great as is, now for the criticism of this story some details are taken from the original story it was based on others feel like a dead horse being beaten over and over to work and doesn't come out right as well as he use of a system skill as Friday feels as if the author just wanted a way to make the instince that happens to the mc to happen but that all doesn't stop making his story to be as amazing as I think it to be
I really enjoyed reading this far, I had a lot of fun reading it, and I see a lot of potential in this fanfic, I really hope this story continues, because I really want to see its conclusion
People are so thirsty for overlord content even a mediocre story with bad grammar gets so popular 😂
Your storytelling skills are exceptional, and your characters are so well-developed. However, I couldn't help but notice that the release schedule for new chapters is somewhat longer than I'd prefer. plz don't get me wrong I deeply appreciate the time and effort you put into crafting each chapter. Your commitment to quality is evident in every word, and I wouldn't want you to rush through your creative process. Nonetheless, if it's at all possible, I kindly request that you consider increasing the frequency of chapter releases, even if only by a little. That's it I am off....
One of the best Overlord fanfics, but I'm going to give it a 3.4 because of the updating stability. I have to wait a whole week to read 1 chapter, so yeah.
From the looks of it, the author does not read reviews but I am going to put mine here anyways. Frankly, I enjoyed the story but there are a few problems that I have with it. As for the writing quality it was ok. There were a few grammar mistakes and it felt really drawn out at some points. I am giving update stability a 1 because it is SLOW!! I mean it has been 5 months since the first chapter and we have only just now gotten to the New World. The author plans to take this story to DXD at some point but with the current updates, that will literally take close to a year. That is ridiculous and I think if the author wants more support and traction for this story then he needs to update it more frequently. I am giving the story development a 4 because I like the direction that it is going. Again however is it is really slow and that does not pair well with the infrequent updates. Character design is a 3 because the author was "inspired" by a few other fan fictions World Background is a 5 because the world was really fleshed out. Overall, the story is decent. However the author needs to update the story more often because the short chapters plus infrequent updates do not make for a good combination.
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Man i regret reading this too early The 40chapter aren't enough to fill my stomach one of the best overlord Fanfic I have seen Hope author Adds Kurumi from date a Live lol😆
I'm not here to reading about a manchild playing a game, come on we have twitch for this... But really high iq? You a not talking about mc are you? Because that would be a lot more disappointing then it is right now.