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It’s a good read the only problem I have with it is the fight scenes are either not detailed enough or there are to many details it’s hard to picture them like one piece fights basically they are not one piece enough
hey man, don't drop this fic. If some don't like, they shouldn't read it, simple as that and you also shouldn't care. Your writing makes sense, the grammar is correct, there are no continuity mistakes. i don't have to question myself when reading dialogs. The story has good writing but if you don't like the direction the author takes, don't read it. rather a story that has solid foundation and some sense making than a story that is a grammatical horror, where reading and correction takes place at the same time, a story where the protagonist gets from A to B suddenly without one ounce of sensible explanation. So don't drop the story after 187 chapters and if you do give us at least some kinda ending
One of the beast one piece fanfiction out there . The MC is designed and evolving perfectly . The pacing is amazing . What I like the most is the lack of random power-ups , MC is becoming powerful organically .
Author, seriously you should go write a Shakespearan novel. because this fanfic is less talking and more describing the atmosphere .should be a literature teacher. chao
Found this months ago and piling it up. Never thought it's still at this point. I personally think the pace is a lil too slow, and that the only thing keeping me from perfect 5⭐. Nevertheless still one of the best new one piece fanfics rn, RECOMMENDED. I DEMAND MORE CHAPTERS!!! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!
excellent novel. that you, like me, dropped when he joined the navy, read it again because it's really worth it....................................................................
I enjoyed the first 70/80 chapters, after that everything is rubbish in my opinion, questionable and unintelligent decisions, constant forced plot, ridiculous plots, the strength of the MC does not correspond to the previously announced, etc. Obviously everything is my opinion on what I read, I may be wrong in someone else's eyes but personally the second half of the fanfic is rubbish
Главный герой, не получил сверхсилу с потолка, а развивается постепенно. Да технику развития тела можно считать условно читерной, но если ставит гг в сравнении с такими монстрами как Кайдо или БигМам то я бы не назвал её откровенным читом. Сюжет тоже довольно ровный, нет нелепых решений и перепрыгивания рывками. Нет поклонения святому канону, и следования строго в доль его рельс. Довольно оригинальное произведение, мне понравилось.
The story and background started of great but latest chapters are destroying Luffys plot... It will make Luffys journey totally different...
Okay, this is too good! I need 100 more chapters please. Okay, this is too good! I need 100 more chapters please. Okay, this is too good! I need 100 more chapters please.
GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --
Great fanfic, and good potential for future events. Also very frequent updates although I wish the chapters were longer
Without further ADO, this is best story for one piece. One of the coolest fanfics I have ever read. Cool hero, with uncommon and interesting start, also, I don't remember seeing a similar command anywhere else. Summing up, dude please more !
Quality is the norm with this particular author, im letting more chaps to pile its just that good,but please be warned sometimes this author has serious problems to give a satisfactory end (yep specifically his previous history was terribly rushed) Besides that pretty much 10/10
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Really good character desgin and it is very well thought out but it might take a while for things to get exciting at first unless you’ve read about luther strode. Overall: Would recommend because it is thought out and was filled with passion
I thoroughly enjoyed this novel as the mc isn't op which most one piece fanfics continue to do. the frequent updates are also an extra bonus, however, there are certain aspects that brought the story down. Firstly, whilst some may not mind it, the constant referencing to his adventures with prostitutes left a bad taste in my mouth and I also see lots of the same stuff I noticed when reading "A gamer in south blue" (could be my delusions acting up though). But overall I loved it so thank you.
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I would have given 10 stars for this novel .I am waiting for mc to learn haki . and more chapters ...!
bacame boring real quick 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
If you hate when the MC joins the Marines in One Piece fics then don't worry. It's only temporary and it's well done too.
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So far I like the story very much. Hope the author keeps the level. I look forward to more chapters.
I. Don't get why it doesn't show one ranking list is this. Happening only for this novel or for others as well anyways this is really a good book i enjoyed a lot no cringey harem at least for now
The story is great and intriguing. The characters are all, for the most part, fleshed out individuals that are all fun to read. The only minor problems I have with this story is that the sense of power the characters have is off, by that I mean that strong characters like garp for example feel underpowered this might just be a choice by the author though. Fights also feel weird not bad just unimpactful, if that’s a word, they all feel to realistic for the one piece universe but this is just my opinion so READ THE STORY before you decide if you like the story.
First, I would like to thank Wicked 132 for this great art. The way Main handles the situation is really rational and not impulsive. Also, the original characters' personalities are not damaged or changed which is a really good point. But the way Main utilized his perks is a little confusing but I am looking forward to how the Wicked132 will continue to make Main climbs his power levels. Also, the very best thing about this One piece is that Main is not very OP but strong because he knows his limit and how to handle his situation. Also, I am looking forward to how Wicked132 will develop the romance routes. Cheers to Wicked132
this is an absolute 10/10 banger would read again it is solidly updated everyday has really good quality with minimal grammatical issues and a fantastic cast that actual evolves
To be honest I enjoyed it in the beginning but it went down hill when he became a marine, I don’ t mind when a Mc becomes a marine in a one piece fanfic but for this specific fanfic it just didn’t seem right route for the mc 🤷🏽♂️.
beginning was good later parts got boring it is dropped word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word
It’s a good read the only problem I have with it is the fight scenes are either not detailed enough or there are to many details it’s hard to picture them like one piece fights basically they are not one piece enough
hey man, don't drop this fic. If some don't like, they shouldn't read it, simple as that and you also shouldn't care. Your writing makes sense, the grammar is correct, there are no continuity mistakes. i don't have to question myself when reading dialogs. The story has good writing but if you don't like the direction the author takes, don't read it. rather a story that has solid foundation and some sense making than a story that is a grammatical horror, where reading and correction takes place at the same time, a story where the protagonist gets from A to B suddenly without one ounce of sensible explanation. So don't drop the story after 187 chapters and if you do give us at least some kinda ending
One of the beast one piece fanfiction out there . The MC is designed and evolving perfectly . The pacing is amazing . What I like the most is the lack of random power-ups , MC is becoming powerful organically .
Author, seriously you should go write a Shakespearan novel. because this fanfic is less talking and more describing the atmosphere .should be a literature teacher. chao
Found this months ago and piling it up. Never thought it's still at this point. I personally think the pace is a lil too slow, and that the only thing keeping me from perfect 5⭐. Nevertheless still one of the best new one piece fanfics rn, RECOMMENDED. I DEMAND MORE CHAPTERS!!! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!!!
excellent novel. that you, like me, dropped when he joined the navy, read it again because it's really worth it....................................................................
I enjoyed the first 70/80 chapters, after that everything is rubbish in my opinion, questionable and unintelligent decisions, constant forced plot, ridiculous plots, the strength of the MC does not correspond to the previously announced, etc. Obviously everything is my opinion on what I read, I may be wrong in someone else's eyes but personally the second half of the fanfic is rubbish
Главный герой, не получил сверхсилу с потолка, а развивается постепенно. Да технику развития тела можно считать условно читерной, но если ставит гг в сравнении с такими монстрами как Кайдо или БигМам то я бы не назвал её откровенным читом. Сюжет тоже довольно ровный, нет нелепых решений и перепрыгивания рывками. Нет поклонения святому канону, и следования строго в доль его рельс. Довольно оригинальное произведение, мне понравилось.
The story and background started of great but latest chapters are destroying Luffys plot... It will make Luffys journey totally different...
Okay, this is too good! I need 100 more chapters please. Okay, this is too good! I need 100 more chapters please. Okay, this is too good! I need 100 more chapters please.
GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --GOOOD --
Great fanfic, and good potential for future events. Also very frequent updates although I wish the chapters were longer
Without further ADO, this is best story for one piece. One of the coolest fanfics I have ever read. Cool hero, with uncommon and interesting start, also, I don't remember seeing a similar command anywhere else. Summing up, dude please more !
Quality is the norm with this particular author, im letting more chaps to pile its just that good,but please be warned sometimes this author has serious problems to give a satisfactory end (yep specifically his previous history was terribly rushed) Besides that pretty much 10/10
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Put Uta into the story Put Uta into the story Put Uta into the story Put Uta into the story Put Uta into the story Put Uta into the story Put Uta into the story
Really good character desgin and it is very well thought out but it might take a while for things to get exciting at first unless you’ve read about luther strode. Overall: Would recommend because it is thought out and was filled with passion
I thoroughly enjoyed this novel as the mc isn't op which most one piece fanfics continue to do. the frequent updates are also an extra bonus, however, there are certain aspects that brought the story down. Firstly, whilst some may not mind it, the constant referencing to his adventures with prostitutes left a bad taste in my mouth and I also see lots of the same stuff I noticed when reading "A gamer in south blue" (could be my delusions acting up though). But overall I loved it so thank you.
Tiết lộ Spoiler I would have given 10 stars for this novel .I am waiting for mc to learn haki . and more chapters ...!
bacame boring real quick 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
If you hate when the MC joins the Marines in One Piece fics then don't worry. It's only temporary and it's well done too.
Tiết lộ Spoiler So far I like the story very much. Hope the author keeps the level. I look forward to more chapters.
I. Don't get why it doesn't show one ranking list is this. Happening only for this novel or for others as well anyways this is really a good book i enjoyed a lot no cringey harem at least for now
The story is great and intriguing. The characters are all, for the most part, fleshed out individuals that are all fun to read. The only minor problems I have with this story is that the sense of power the characters have is off, by that I mean that strong characters like garp for example feel underpowered this might just be a choice by the author though. Fights also feel weird not bad just unimpactful, if that’s a word, they all feel to realistic for the one piece universe but this is just my opinion so READ THE STORY before you decide if you like the story.
First, I would like to thank Wicked 132 for this great art. The way Main handles the situation is really rational and not impulsive. Also, the original characters' personalities are not damaged or changed which is a really good point. But the way Main utilized his perks is a little confusing but I am looking forward to how the Wicked132 will continue to make Main climbs his power levels. Also, the very best thing about this One piece is that Main is not very OP but strong because he knows his limit and how to handle his situation. Also, I am looking forward to how Wicked132 will develop the romance routes. Cheers to Wicked132
this is an absolute 10/10 banger would read again it is solidly updated everyday has really good quality with minimal grammatical issues and a fantastic cast that actual evolves
To be honest I enjoyed it in the beginning but it went down hill when he became a marine, I don’ t mind when a Mc becomes a marine in a one piece fanfic but for this specific fanfic it just didn’t seem right route for the mc 🤷🏽♂️.
beginning was good later parts got boring it is dropped word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word