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very good, I hope you continue,............................................................................................... ....... ...............
Story has no development and moves far too fast. Also it’s difficult to read much of anything as it’s all a pile of grammatical errors.
The beginning is terrible, which causes the rest of the story to have many inconsistencies. the garbage of the gods, 4 Wishes (lightning strikes the idiot who instigated this plot), the mc is a full-fledged god but he only wants a life in common (what is the trauma that everyone has with life, no is forced to be a god to live happily) and the personality of the protagonist is very flat and without charisma.
good.....................................................................................................................................................
This has more writing errors than Chinese translations, MC decides it's a good idea to go into a contract when there was no need to, as well as reveals a ability when there wasn't a need to do so.
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He signed a contract that tatsuya was forced to. He is never going against japan if they dont hurt his family. Which means they can attack him and he can do nothing about it
I just really hope there is harem romance or atheist some romance, please reply telling if there is any please
Way too many grammar mistakes I only made it to the second chapter. Let me know if you ever go back and edit it.
i just find two FF for irregular can someone tell me if you know irregular FF
i give this 5 star as a good start please keep up the work author san... this is the first ever fanfic of irregular at magic high that i am reading and so far it is good... thanks for this fanfic author a very BIG THANKS
I had high hopes due to my love of the series and light novel. This was a complete disappointment! I read it and the grammer needs a lot of work. There is literally no plot, this is a power fantasy take way to far. The mc is the most powerful in the world with powers and intellect that is unmatched but the mc is so one dimensional and shallow. It puts all this power and intellect to waste. Just recreates anime powers instead of using his genius to make something original and powerful. This was so hard to read. I honestly tried hard but I quit and dropped around chapter 19
Mamalon jajaja un poco forzado, bueno muy forzado pero gran historia jajaja demaciado entretenida si no fuera porque ya di mi piedra te la daría en este momento pero te daré piedras por tu gran historia jajaja solo espera un poco jajaja
Tiết lộ Spoiler
It's good and please don't drop it's not many mahouka fanfic and I like your[img=update][img=recommend]
A veritable plot with a obscenely overpowered, but undiscovered MC. The Author has made a good background for the MC, which is quite realistic although the sister feels like a unwelcome or rather un-needed addition. The usage of only known characters like Yakumo has both pros and cons. The story up until now is a bit of a power speedrun, but a well executed speedrun. A good read overall. Looking forward to more chapters in this novel. And I hope the Author, if he/she reads this, does not take any critisism negatively, and continues to pour his heart into the story.
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Pretty good. Nearly no grammar mistakes and unless you pay attention to the grammar its hard to find them. Its pretty good besides the grammar. Try reading it, it’s good.
To be honest, it’s a hit forced like many others that I’ve read but still I’m going to cont reading this since I can’t find anything better. Do recommend any that you remember
Good novel, the one thing i hate is how he easily showed them a power that doesn't even belong to his world, except this the story is good you rarely find the irregular at magic high school fanfiction nowdays
Is his a haremmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
keep up the great work.......................................................................................................................................
Six chapters and so far it's cool. An interesting beginning that can change a lot in the plot. Mc Op and I like it. I hope this ff gets a lot of chapters.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hello there, Justfirfun1997. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
A few grammar mistakes. other than that I have nothing to complain about. great but OP powers. rare to read a fanfic of this anime. so im excited to read this story.
basically the author just wanted put whatever came out of his mind and give it to the mc like destruction ball like vongola rings basically anything that came out of his mind.
very good, I hope you continue,............................................................................................... ....... ...............
Story has no development and moves far too fast. Also it’s difficult to read much of anything as it’s all a pile of grammatical errors.
The beginning is terrible, which causes the rest of the story to have many inconsistencies. the garbage of the gods, 4 Wishes (lightning strikes the idiot who instigated this plot), the mc is a full-fledged god but he only wants a life in common (what is the trauma that everyone has with life, no is forced to be a god to live happily) and the personality of the protagonist is very flat and without charisma.
good.....................................................................................................................................................
This has more writing errors than Chinese translations, MC decides it's a good idea to go into a contract when there was no need to, as well as reveals a ability when there wasn't a need to do so.
Tiết lộ Spoiler He signed a contract that tatsuya was forced to. He is never going against japan if they dont hurt his family. Which means they can attack him and he can do nothing about it
I just really hope there is harem romance or atheist some romance, please reply telling if there is any please
Way too many grammar mistakes I only made it to the second chapter. Let me know if you ever go back and edit it.
i just find two FF for irregular can someone tell me if you know irregular FF
i give this 5 star as a good start please keep up the work author san... this is the first ever fanfic of irregular at magic high that i am reading and so far it is good... thanks for this fanfic author a very BIG THANKS
I had high hopes due to my love of the series and light novel. This was a complete disappointment! I read it and the grammer needs a lot of work. There is literally no plot, this is a power fantasy take way to far. The mc is the most powerful in the world with powers and intellect that is unmatched but the mc is so one dimensional and shallow. It puts all this power and intellect to waste. Just recreates anime powers instead of using his genius to make something original and powerful. This was so hard to read. I honestly tried hard but I quit and dropped around chapter 19
Mamalon jajaja un poco forzado, bueno muy forzado pero gran historia jajaja demaciado entretenida si no fuera porque ya di mi piedra te la daría en este momento pero te daré piedras por tu gran historia jajaja solo espera un poco jajaja
Tiết lộ Spoiler It's good and please don't drop it's not many mahouka fanfic and I like your[img=update][img=recommend]
A veritable plot with a obscenely overpowered, but undiscovered MC. The Author has made a good background for the MC, which is quite realistic although the sister feels like a unwelcome or rather un-needed addition. The usage of only known characters like Yakumo has both pros and cons. The story up until now is a bit of a power speedrun, but a well executed speedrun. A good read overall. Looking forward to more chapters in this novel. And I hope the Author, if he/she reads this, does not take any critisism negatively, and continues to pour his heart into the story.
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Pretty good. Nearly no grammar mistakes and unless you pay attention to the grammar its hard to find them. Its pretty good besides the grammar. Try reading it, it’s good.
To be honest, it’s a hit forced like many others that I’ve read but still I’m going to cont reading this since I can’t find anything better. Do recommend any that you remember
Good novel, the one thing i hate is how he easily showed them a power that doesn't even belong to his world, except this the story is good you rarely find the irregular at magic high school fanfiction nowdays
Is his a haremmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
keep up the great work.......................................................................................................................................
Six chapters and so far it's cool. An interesting beginning that can change a lot in the plot. Mc Op and I like it. I hope this ff gets a lot of chapters.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hello there, Justfirfun1997. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
A few grammar mistakes. other than that I have nothing to complain about. great but OP powers. rare to read a fanfic of this anime. so im excited to read this story.
basically the author just wanted put whatever came out of his mind and give it to the mc like destruction ball like vongola rings basically anything that came out of his mind.