So there are some issues with character development early on however I love the fic, the world building is good, updates quick af 6 chapters in a day is wild. The grammer is good not perfect but good. I love quanzhi fashi (versatile mage) both the novel and manhua are amazing so whenever I see a fic I love them. Please continue with the fic and don’t drop it.
Thanks for the chapter
? From what I remeber he became a forbidden mage, strongest among humans but he was weaker than a lot of the emperor creatures still, so the novel ended with humanity still being prey of the stronger beasts. Loved it through and through but the ending was kinda disappointing, I figured it would end with mofan using his unparalleled strength to push back the monster so humanity could prosper without extreme danger.
He still remembers as clear as day when he finished reading the novel *Versatile Mage* after Mo Fan ascended to become the half magic god and decided to write his own fanfiction on it.
Overpowered Mage: A Versatile Mage Fanfic
Anime & Comics · Damon_Starfall
Ya but still axe set sail 3 years before cannon cannon starts and like 6 months pass then the 2 year time skip the a few more months so from the point ace sets sail 5.5 years until the cannon wano ark
She was known as Komurasaki, but her real identity was the daughter of the former lord of Wano, Oden Kozuki... She had been hiding for almost 18 years!
Fist Of Haki
Anime & Comics · Passerby_Venne
It’s a brainless read, I don’t make it far before my brain shutdown from this shit. One of the worst intro a fic has had yet. I don’t know if it gets better since I quit on the 5th chapter but by that far I could see how bad it would get. Transmigrated immediately told someone, born a D, battles a pirate mercilessly kills while crew but makes captain yield and ties him up, finds first crew member also a D bruh the D name is uncommon as fuck. Enemy of the government so they were hunted down or targeted
Top tier book, it’s a third persons view into the relationship of gasby. He was a solider who got out and made it big through illegal business, he only did all this so he could be with the women he fell for, but it al ended when he was accused of hitting a girl with his car and was killed by that women’s husband
I shook my head. "No, I haven't. But I've heard good things about it. What's it about?"
I Reincarnated As Yamauchi in COTE
Anime & Comics · wondering_boson_04
Nasty fit absolutely no drip
Pumped, Gabriel threw his fist in the air, a joyous laugh erupting from his chest. He bolted over to his wardrobe, grabbing the first outfit that looked halfway decent: a white compression shirt tucked into black jeans, finished with crisp white Air Force Ones.
Twilight: Rebirth
Movies · DumbedDown
I tried man, I love the novel and the manhua so I try to find fics of it but this is one of the worst I’ve seen. Awakened light then became and 3rd stage basic mage and yet could equal high level mages with his spells like wtf there is no development of character. Everything is given to him, romance is another thing to just throw in there. The main heroine an mid level mage failed to kill the lowest of the servant class and so the mc killed it to protect her, basic knight in shining armour troupe that’s overused and makes no sense, especially in this fic. Everything about this fic is forced. 3.5/10 solely because I love the original and respect the attempt, but regardless this is horrible.
Where you been
Ya me too English isn’t my first language, the grammer thing isn’t huge stick with the simpler words it’ll go a long way. Ya so when making a op character there needs to be emotional struggle since he clearly won’t have physics struggle. You started the mc with no ties so no emotional bonds to target later for growth. There’s also the problem with the mc being to op, I understand the purpose of the boost is to make the mc the mc over mo fan. However, 4 elements per awakening, getting to choose the elements, a system with a guided map, and a mark that boosts everything with further shit makes the growth for strength minimal. While there is a long path from primary to forbidden, he still has such a large advantage that it’s just to much. When introducing the mc needs more work to describe his looks, there hasn’t been any dialouge that builds the mcs personality or quirks yet. Both of which are vital early on as it allows for you to slowly change it to show growth
Overpowered Mage: A Versatile Mage Fanfic
Anime & Comics · Damon_Starfall